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Tell Me Again – Chapter 21
Jen woke up just as they were passing through
Jen: Are we in
Tina: Dear, weve been in
Jen: Oh, well I say we celebrate she smiled and pulled out a joint.
Tina didnt object, she needed something to keep her from dying of boredom.
Jen: So how much longer do we have?
Tina: Oh, Id say five and half, six hours
Jen: You sure you can make it?
Tina: Absolutely, Ive done it before. Now gimme that, you scavenger. She said reaching for the joint
Around eight thirty that evening Tina was turning onto
Tina: Welcome to LA she smiled as she turned onto her street.
Jen: Oh I think im gonna like it here
–Tinas Apartment (
Tina parked across the street from her apartment and attempted to race Jen to the door but they were both so tired and stiff from the drive it was more like who could crawl to the door first.
Tina walked into her apartment and flipped on the lights.
*It was kinda weird at first, walking in there. Everything I left was still in its place, it was almost like I had never left. Man, I had to pee*
Tina ran to the bathroom and relieved herself of the ten gallons of water she consumed in the car.
Tina: Man that was the longest pee ever she said as she walked back into the living room and collapsed on side of the couch Jen wasnt occupying.
Jen: Im so tired she whined I cant move
Tina agreed, they tried to muster up enough strength to make it to the bedroom but failed. They were so tired they ended up falling asleep on the couch practically sitting up.
The next morning they both woke up grumbling.
Jen: Ow, my neck. I think its broken she mumbled
Tina: The entire left half of my body is asleep, look I cant move my arm
Jen: Caffeine, I need caffeine.
Tina: Mmm, Im sure I dont have anything here, we could go to the planet she suggested
Jen: We could go to the moon as long as they have caffeineand food
Tina laughed at Jens morning sassiness and got up, slowly making her way to the shower.
About an hour and half later they were finally ready and out the door. It was already quite warm outside, defiantly different from the mornings in
Jen: Where the ***** do people get the energy to run so much around here? she said as she watched jogger after jogger move swiftly down the streets.
Tina: Well you know, you live in LA you gotta look your best
Tina pulled up to the planet and noticed something was different.
Jen: Why are you making that face? she said climbing out of the passenger seat.
Tina: I think they remodeled this place or something. She said walking through the door. Oh yeah, this place is defiantly different
Tina looked around noticing the complete face lift the quaint coffee shop had gone through. She liked it, it was different, defiantly trendier, and it was set up to attract more night life.
They ordered their coffee and were about to find an empty table when Tina spotted someone familiar.
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(34 votes, average: 3.71 out of 5)
Great chapter…glad you continued the story. I liked the difference between Tina’s parents, it was definitely as I thought it would be.
You stayed up late to post and I don’t even get to read it until today. Damn, work..it just gets in the way. Great chapter and you love to leave us hanging… ; )
Tina and Jen are funny!
Way to go dad! I like Jerry Kennard, he takes care of business! Are he and Frank lovers?
Hey, no pitstop in the Bay Area? I know you wanted to just get Tina back to L.A., but a detailed roadtrip at another time would be fun!
I love the youthful exhuberance of this story! There’s a carefree aspect to youth that gets lost as one gets absorbed in the duties and responsibilities of life. Thanks for the lift!
I can’t wait to see what Tina is going to get into next!
Love Tinas dad PBF. cant wait until B&T are together.
Hahah, you’re so evil…well, who did she see? This story’s great, please continue!
glad they got there fast… i also like tina’s dad… and i bet she sees bette… please continue
K
Wonderful chapter. SO glad she is back. You have to post again soon, like today. I am going to San Antonio tomorrow and won’t be back til Sun. lol So I need you to post today. :) Love it as always.
The stress o meter now at 12 because of the cliff hanger i need less stress!!!! post soon calm my nerves
Great job, as usual! I feel like I’m always sayin’ the same-old-same-old, ’cause your writing is so consistently wonderful! Hey, I’m going to make a guess on who it is at the planet–Alice? OK, I lied…I’m going to make another guess, just in case…Kit? Oh hell! I don’t know! I want to say Bette but I’m thinking that would be too quick. I hope it is Bette, but…I should shut up, shouldn’t I? Thanks.
OK. I officially want Tina’s dad as my fairy godfather. Looking forward to the things getting started in LA.
thank you for the kitty stamp maybe i should be first more often. the stories coming along great i love the cliffhangers. kepp them coming!