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That Early Mourning
Bette: (Starring at Tina with tears streaming down her face) T, I want that too. (sobbing) I promise I will never hurt you like that again. Knowing that I hurt you, almost killed me. The thought of losing you and our baby forever . . . was so unbearable. T, please forgive me. I am so, so sorry. I dont know how I can (begins getting choked up again) ever show you how sorry I am.
Tina: Baby, you already have. I have never doubted your love for me. I know you are sorry. I have forgiven you. (lifting Bettes face up to hers). Bette, look at me . . . I am asking you for one thing though . . . okay?
Bette: T, Ill do anything. Anything you ask.
Tina: I want you to forgive yourself. Can you do that for me?
Bette: (Overwhelmed with emotion, Bette buries her head into Tinas chest) T, I . . . promise . . . (weeping) . . . I also promise I will never fail you like that ever, ever again. I dont deserve you. I am so lucky to have found you. Sweetie, I . . . LOVE . . . YOU.
Tina: I know. I know you do.
Bette and Tina move closer to each other, both crying. Their eyes meet and then they kiss.
Bette: Ive missed you so much
Tina: Ive missed you, too.
Bette: Will you just hold me for awhile?
Tina: Babe, I will hold you for the rest of our lives.
Several hours later, both Tina and Bette awake for sleeping in each others arms.
Bette: T, I really want you, but right now . . . (starts to cry) . . . I probably need to get back to Kit.
Tina: Babe, I, too, want you more than anything. But, when the timing is right. I want for both of us to be able to give to each other completely. You and Kit need each other right now and as much as I would love to keep you all to myself . . . you do need to go back home . . . actually, WE need to go back home . . . but only when you are ready, ok? Why dont I start a bath for you, I will go fix us something to eat and then WE will start sorting through all of this TOGETHER.
Bette: T . . . thank you.
Tina: Babe, WE are going to get through this . . . okay?
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(54 votes, average: 4.15 out of 5)
Nice thoughts. Thanks for sharing this.
That was very well done. Thanks!
I hope that is how the dhow goes…Thanks for this post.
Wow, great job. Interesting writing. It would be nice if B & T ever get some tyme to have deep heartfelt conversations about their feelings for each other and the breakup — before and after.
That was so sweet. They really belong together.
This was absolutely lovely to read. Please continue
good writing..plz continue
This certainly didn’t read like a first go at writing. It was very good. If you write more I’ll be here!
WELL DONE!! Geez, first time writer?! You’re like a pro arready=) Totally loved it! Such a heartfelt story…Please update soon please!
Great! I’m loving it! Thanks
very good!! Feel free to share more with us:))))
simply outstanding.. the dialogue was perfect & captured all the emiotional aspects of each situation. *****
This was excellent. I am straving for more romantic, loving and intimate storylines. I have grown tried of stories that offer no romance and only crude meaningless sex. I hope you continue with this, I enjoyed it tremendously. Thank you.
Sniff Sniff I’m crying I can feel my hearths it’s like to Explode Whoa!Whoa! this is really Beautiful Story Thank you Juha Please Post soon.
wow, that was so emotional (sniff sniff). I hope you continue with this. Again WOW!
OMG..thats a transcript for the next epi?..lol..very very beautiful full of emotions..please post as soon as you can
Emotional. Good Job.
This was really great, thank you for writing it., i hope you continue.
wow that was powerful.. i really loved it and i hope you continue.. great job!!
Oh my gosh I LOVE YOU MEN!!! That was some deep shit MEN! You gotta try this again….
that was so good,very real.
Damn this story is awesome and wonderful, love it. Post soon, thank you!
well now if this isn’t the most beautiful and loving thing I read…gosh you wrote them so well in this and omg it was so adorable and loving…tibette together again what more could you ask for