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That Early Mourning
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Tina: Baby, I am sorry about Melvin, I truly am. But, what I meant to say is, I am sorry that I never made it over last night.
Bette: T, you dont owe me an explanation. You dont owe me anything.
Tina: (Tina rolls over so she can look at Bette face to face). Bette, I want you to know that I had every intention of coming over. I just didnt want you to think that I was out with Helena, while you were at home by your fathers side.
Bette: T, its okay . . . I understand.
Tina: Bette, would you just let me finish? (Tina places her hand on Bettes face and starts to caress her check bones, jaw line and lips. Tina takes a deep breath and begins to speak when she realizes her eyes are becoming filled with tears).
Bette: Sweetie, dont cry. You are going to make me cry again.
Tina: (Fighting back the tears) Bette, I need to explain why I wasnt there for you last night,ok? You see . . . I came home from work and wanted to take a shower before I came over to spend the evening with you, Melvin and Kit. After I got out of the shower I felt extremely tired and decided to just lay down for a minute before getting dressed and coming over. Well, I guess I was more exhausted than I thought. I feel asleep and didnt wake up until you came over here this morning. It is important to me that you know that I was not being vindictive or hurtful. I had every intention of coming over. I WANTED to be there with you . . . for you. Babe, I am so sorry you had to go through this alone. Can you forgive me?
Bette: (Fighting back the tears as well) T, you do not have to apologize for anything. I know you have been tired and for your sake and the babys sake I am glad that you got a restful night of sleep. You both needed the rest . . .
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Nice thoughts. Thanks for sharing this.
That was very well done. Thanks!
I hope that is how the dhow goes…Thanks for this post.
Wow, great job. Interesting writing. It would be nice if B & T ever get some tyme to have deep heartfelt conversations about their feelings for each other and the breakup — before and after.
That was so sweet. They really belong together.
This was absolutely lovely to read. Please continue
good writing..plz continue
This certainly didn’t read like a first go at writing. It was very good. If you write more I’ll be here!
WELL DONE!! Geez, first time writer?! You’re like a pro arready=) Totally loved it! Such a heartfelt story…Please update soon please!
Great! I’m loving it! Thanks
very good!! Feel free to share more with us:))))
simply outstanding.. the dialogue was perfect & captured all the emiotional aspects of each situation. *****
This was excellent. I am straving for more romantic, loving and intimate storylines. I have grown tried of stories that offer no romance and only crude meaningless sex. I hope you continue with this, I enjoyed it tremendously. Thank you.
Sniff Sniff I’m crying I can feel my hearths it’s like to Explode Whoa!Whoa! this is really Beautiful Story Thank you Juha Please Post soon.
wow, that was so emotional (sniff sniff). I hope you continue with this. Again WOW!
OMG..thats a transcript for the next epi?..lol..very very beautiful full of emotions..please post as soon as you can
Emotional. Good Job.
This was really great, thank you for writing it., i hope you continue.
wow that was powerful.. i really loved it and i hope you continue.. great job!!
Oh my gosh I LOVE YOU MEN!!! That was some deep shit MEN! You gotta try this again….
that was so good,very real.
Damn this story is awesome and wonderful, love it. Post soon, thank you!
well now if this isn’t the most beautiful and loving thing I read…gosh you wrote them so well in this and omg it was so adorable and loving…tibette together again what more could you ask for