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    That Early Mourning

    Story written on May 9, 2005 by JuHa72.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=53776
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    Bette ends up on Tina’s porch after Melvin dies.

    It was early morning as Tina opened her eyes to a still dim room. As she awoke and became familiar with her surroundings she realized that the bell that had awoken her from her much needed slumber was not just a dream. She quickly sat up, grabbed her robe and started walking towards her front door. With every step her heart started beating harder and harder.

    Her thoughts started to retrace the events leading up to last night and now, this morning. As her mind started to awake with every passing second, her heart sank as she realized that she never did make it to Bette last night. She realized that after her long day at work she had decided to take a quick shower before heading over to Bettes for the night. Her weariness was getting the best of her these days and her exhausted body was craving rest. As much as she wanted to be there for Bette in Melvins final days, she also knew that for the sake of their baby, she had to take better care of herself. Just a quick little nap and then I will head over is the thought that ran through her head. Still naked from her shower, Tina slowly and gently laid down on her bed and within minutes was quickly asleep. Her sleep starved body was finally at peace for the first time in days.

    As she grabbed the doorknob, she thought to herself, Oh *****! . . . Bette! . . . I never made it to her last night . . . *****! As she opened the door, she unfortunately saw the sight she feared might be waiting for her on the other side . . .

    Tina: Oh, Baby.

    Tinas heart dropped. She could tell by the pain that was imprinted on Bettes face that Melvin had passed on. She knew Bette would not have left his side if he was still alive. Without giving it another thought, Tina embraced Bettes fragile and grief stricken body and just continued to whisper over and over, I am sorry. I am so, so sorry. I am sorry. As Bette melted into the refuge of her arms, Tinas heart broke for her lover. While Tina never did really connect with Melvin, even up to the very end, her sorrow wasnt so much over his passing, as much as it was about seeing the woman that she loves with all her being broken with such sorrow.

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    4. Wow, great job. Interesting writing. It would be nice if B & T ever get some tyme to have deep heartfelt conversations about their feelings for each other and the breakup — before and after.

    9. WELL DONE!! Geez, first time writer?! You’re like a pro arready=) Totally loved it! Such a heartfelt story…Please update soon please!

    13. This was excellent. I am straving for more romantic, loving and intimate storylines. I have grown tried of stories that offer no romance and only crude meaningless sex. I hope you continue with this, I enjoyed it tremendously. Thank you.

    14. Sniff Sniff I’m crying I can feel my hearths it’s like to Explode Whoa!Whoa! this is really Beautiful Story Thank you Juha Please Post soon.

    23. well now if this isn’t the most beautiful and loving thing I read…gosh you wrote them so well in this and omg it was so adorable and loving…tibette together again what more could you ask for

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