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That One Moment: Chapter 2
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"Uhhh hi to you too Alice…"
"Sorry Dane, I’m glad you’re here. You too, Shane."
"Well at least now you’ve acknowledged that we’re here," Dana admonished as Alice blushed slightly.
Shane chimed in, "Yeah, your bestest friends are here for you. And anyway, it’s not like you’ve never seen Bette before. Though you do look great, Bette."
Bette smiled at Shane, and noted that she looked very well put-together. She had her usual t-shirt, but it was covered by a black pin-striped suit jacket, covering tight black pants that showed the figure of a fifteen year old boy. Dana stood to her right, in an ivory spaghetti-strapped dress that ended at her knees.
"Where’s Kit? I thought she was coming with you guys…" Bette questioned.
Shane responded, "Oh, I guess the new chef at the Planet flaked out on her, so she’s dealing with that. She said she’ll try her best to make it at least to the reception, but she was busy calling every chef in LA when I left, so we’ll see."
Bette frowned, disappointed that her half-sister couldn’t make it, but she more than understood that sometimes work had to come first. Forgetting her disappointment, she turned to her friends. "Oh, all right. You guys look fantastic by the way."
"Yeah, Dane, you’ll have the ladies lining up for a piece! Ow ow"
Dana’s eyes widened in shock as she stepped forward to lightly smack Alice’s arm. "Geez, Al, can you keep it down, if anyone finds out…"
"Whatever. You know, you’re probably going to suffocate in that little closet of yours. Why don’t you just peek your head out for a little air?" Alice replied wiggling her eyebrows suggestively.
Shane stepped up in Dana’s defense, "Do we really have to argue about this every time we’re together? Just give Dana some time."
Dana smiled her appreciation at Shane.
"Anyway, let’s not talk about Dana. Where’s the bride?"
The wedding ceremony was perfect. White fold-out chairs flanked a white satin runway which led to a small gazebo. The bridesmaids and groomsmen lined the few steps up to the interior of the gazebo where Lenore and Richard stood with the priest.
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”at a library about 15 minutes away from my house. Finally online, and checking up on things, but I wanted to post this really quick. So please forgive the lack of personal shout-outs. ” -never- worry about that, dear jj!
Love this story…can’t wait for more! PPS
Another great chapter. Hope you get your electricity back soon! Then you can write some more! Please?
Tina’s here!!!!!!
Ms Tina is on the red carpet and Ms Bette Portor will soon enter her life. Alice can dish it out,but has a very hard time when she is the blunt of it. thanks
You’ve captured everyone, especially Alice, perfectly! Love, love this story. :)
Now in walk Tina Kennard!!! What will Tina do when she meets Bette? Love This!!! Thanks
Glad that fate stepped in and prevented B from hooking up w/ the wrong girl….now what will the reaction be once they’re introduced and shake hands???!!! Sorry to hear about your electricity, thanks for finding a way to post anyway & hope that you can PPS ;)
Tina is finally there. I hope the next wedding is in planning B&T. Great update – please more.
The lovely Tina Kennard is in the house and Bette’s jaw just slammed onto the floor. What a way to find your soul mate.
And so it begins ;) PS
Great beginning. Love your writing and your characters. Keep going