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That One Moment: Chapter 2
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"One second, Al. I am so close to securing this artist. I just need James to set up one more meeting with him and then I know I can win him over for our fall show. Really, I’ll be right in. Just wait there."
If Bette had looked up from her laptop for one second, she would have noticed that Alice had gotten out of the pool already and was sneaking up behind her, reaching for the device in her right hand.
"What the…! ALICE! Give me my Blackberry this instant!"
Alice had run a few paces but turned to flash a flirty grin at her girlfriend. "Make me."
But as she turned and began to run away, she ran into one of the pool chairs lining the pool. And as her arms flung out instinctively to break her fall, her grip on the Blackberry had loosened, and the offending electronic had flown right into the pool.
Of course Bette hadn’t found the incident nearly as hilarious as Alice had. Even after she had apologized for ruining the Blackberry, Bette had sent her home and didn’t talk to her for almost two days. Alice ended her reverie with a sigh and continued surveying the guests. Next to Bette was Kit, who had managed to get away from the Planet, and next to Kit was Dana. Both Kit and Dana had become teary and were sniffling quietly. Alice smiled. Just a couple of big softies.
Not seeing anyone else she recognized or cared to jog her memory to figure out how they were related, Alice looked over at the groomsmen. She noticed one in particular; he was kind of cute. It took her about two seconds to realize that he was looking back at her. She blushed as he smiled at her. Maybe this won’t be so bad after all…
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"Dana, you are the worst dancer I’ve ever seen."
"My mother made me take a social dance class, Al. I know how to dance!"
"Okay, maybe in the mind of Sharon Fairbanks, you are a proficient dancer if you’re eight and can do the waltz. But for the rest of us, being able to dance to something written after the 1400s is also a great skill…"
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”at a library about 15 minutes away from my house. Finally online, and checking up on things, but I wanted to post this really quick. So please forgive the lack of personal shout-outs. ” -never- worry about that, dear jj!
Love this story…can’t wait for more! PPS
Another great chapter. Hope you get your electricity back soon! Then you can write some more! Please?
Tina’s here!!!!!!
Ms Tina is on the red carpet and Ms Bette Portor will soon enter her life. Alice can dish it out,but has a very hard time when she is the blunt of it. thanks
You’ve captured everyone, especially Alice, perfectly! Love, love this story. :)
Now in walk Tina Kennard!!! What will Tina do when she meets Bette? Love This!!! Thanks
Glad that fate stepped in and prevented B from hooking up w/ the wrong girl….now what will the reaction be once they’re introduced and shake hands???!!! Sorry to hear about your electricity, thanks for finding a way to post anyway & hope that you can PPS ;)
Tina is finally there. I hope the next wedding is in planning B&T. Great update – please more.
The lovely Tina Kennard is in the house and Bette’s jaw just slammed onto the floor. What a way to find your soul mate.
And so it begins ;) PS
Great beginning. Love your writing and your characters. Keep going