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That One Moment: Chapter 2
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Alice stood at the top step just to the left of her mother. She gazed up at Lenore. Her light brown hair was down, flipped out as usual. The dress she wore was stunning. A simple, sleeveless, pale lavender satin gown which hugged her slim torso and then blossomed out at the waist into a full skirt with a fairly long train. Alice inwardly chuckled. At least Lenore didn’t have the gall to wear white. White, the color of purity and innocence. Lenore was far from innocent and definitely not pure. Alice stopped the thought before she became disturbed with the direction of that thinking. She shook her head slightly as if to physically shake it out of her head and then looked back up to her mother, who was beginning her vows.
Not really caring to hear her mother pledge "till death do us part" for the fifth time, she let her gaze, and her mind, wander. She looked away from the couple and toward the seats where her friends were sitting in the second row. Shane sat on the aisle, smiling peacefully. Though she would forever deny it, deep down, Shane was a hopeless romantic. Alice knew that she eventually wanted to settle down and have the family she never had growing up. But until that time, she would continue to be the local lothario. Well, lotharia…
Next to Shane was Bette, looking slightly antsy. Alice watched her unfold her legs then refold them, this time with the right leg on top as she tapped her fingers on the side of her chair. She probably hasn’t checked her Blackberry since the ceremony started and I bet it’s killing her. Bette essentially defined workaholic. On her rare days off and even rarer vacations, she could not be seen without both her Blackberry and her laptop. Alice smiled as she remembered one occasion when they had been dating.
"Bette, baby! Seriously! It’s your first day off in like a month! Stop working and come join me in the pool!"
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”at a library about 15 minutes away from my house. Finally online, and checking up on things, but I wanted to post this really quick. So please forgive the lack of personal shout-outs. ” -never- worry about that, dear jj!
Love this story…can’t wait for more! PPS
Another great chapter. Hope you get your electricity back soon! Then you can write some more! Please?
Tina’s here!!!!!!
Ms Tina is on the red carpet and Ms Bette Portor will soon enter her life. Alice can dish it out,but has a very hard time when she is the blunt of it. thanks
You’ve captured everyone, especially Alice, perfectly! Love, love this story. :)
Now in walk Tina Kennard!!! What will Tina do when she meets Bette? Love This!!! Thanks
Glad that fate stepped in and prevented B from hooking up w/ the wrong girl….now what will the reaction be once they’re introduced and shake hands???!!! Sorry to hear about your electricity, thanks for finding a way to post anyway & hope that you can PPS ;)
Tina is finally there. I hope the next wedding is in planning B&T. Great update – please more.
The lovely Tina Kennard is in the house and Bette’s jaw just slammed onto the floor. What a way to find your soul mate.
And so it begins ;) PS
Great beginning. Love your writing and your characters. Keep going