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That smile of hers – walk
When we got to the planet everybody
else was there. Bette. Tina. Dana. Lara, Jenny and of course baby Angelica. My
friends. My family. We greeted everybody and ordered our food to eat. “Hey
Shane… who’s the girl you’re trying to strike?” Dana asks. What the *****…
how do they know? “Huh… what?” I was really confused. “Well… you got to be
wanting someone to notice you if you’re all dressed up. Right? Everybody’s
nodding to what Dana just said. “She’s trying to score some chick”
added. “Oh…uhm… yeah… just this girl… and whatever…” Bette came to
the rescue. You’re my hero Bette. “Leave her alone guys…”
We all enjoyed our breakfast
until one of us of kept on leaving for work. It was just me, Tina and Angelica.
“So are you going to make a move on her or what?” Tina asks and I nearly spit
out my coffee. “What the ***** you’re one about T…?” I’m getting really nervous
now, is it that obvious?
“Shane…” she talking to me very
softly. Very mother like.
“You’ve been eyeing her every time you see her for like…
probably 2 months now. Every time we say her name I keep seeing a smile from
you. And I know you get nervous when you see her… the way you look at her
when you speak to her.” oh *****.
“*****… please tell me it’s only you who notice…” I
asked.
“Well… I think Bette kind of notices it too. But I’m
pretty sure everyone else doesn’t. So….?” Tina answered.
“I don’t think there is a “so” t… I mean she’s too good
for me…” I blurted out. That’s it. She is. She is way way too good for me.
“Shane… you can’t say that to your self. You never know
she might have feelings for you too. You know… I’m not supposed to tell you
this but she had crushed on you way back then. So you can’t really notify what
the ***** going on in that girl’s mind until you try okay. And I’m sure it’s
been hard for you trying to hide this feeling away.”
The hardest thing ever.
“I don’t know T…
part of me saying ‘what the ***** are you waiting for?’ and other part of me
saying ‘don’t ***** up your friendship’” I told her. But I want her so bad.
“Look… all I’m saying is you never know unless you try… and you’re both
adults I’m sure if one of you ***** up or whatever… you’ll be able to sort it
out.” she looks at me convincingly. I nod, I do agree with her. I guess im just
a *****’ chicken. “Yeah… you’re right… I’ll figure something out… I got
to go now.” We said our goodbyes and I start walking to my workplace. I walk
now… it’s a good exercise gives you time to think and stuff. On the way to my
work I saw something interesting stuck on to the wall.
SIENNA SINGING/VOCAL
LESSONS
FOR BEGINNERS,
INTERMEDIATE AND ADVANCE.
THERE’S PRIVATE AND
GROUP LESSONS.
COME INSIDE TO FIND
OUT MORE INFORMATION!
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(26 votes, average: 3.58 out of 5)
I like this Shane, she’s so sweet. Singing lessons? Awesome!! :D
It’s a nice change to see Shane longing for someone.
nice story
Good chapter!
really enjoying this. maybe if the question marks go in automatically, you could just put different characters words on different lines so it wouldn’t be confusing when someone else starts speaking? just cause you asked for suggestions :)