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“You get changed; your overnight bag is there…see… on the chair? Ok? I need to close up the pool area, I will be right back.”
It took her longer than she thought it would, Bette taking time to remove the games from the backyard, not wanting her neighbors to see them in the morning. When she came back to the bedroom, Tina was already in bed on the side next to where Bette slept, tucked under the covers.
She grinned at Bette when she walked in and Bette couldn’t help the answering smile that appeared on her own lips. She paused for a moment, wanting to always remember the sight of this amazing woman in her bed.
May she always want to be there
Apparently, Tina ignored the overnight clothes she brought and was wearing Bette’s Yale shirt again, which made Bette’s heart do a flip. Tina looked adorable. She came to the side of the bed to hand Tina two aspirins and a large glass of ice water.
“Take these, you’ll think me in the morning.”
Tina sat up and reached for the glass, the covers slipping off to reveal lavender panties and nothing else besides the tshirt. Bette took in the view, hoping Tina couldn’t see the want in her eyes. Tina took the pills and finished the water, smiling sweetly at Bette.
She seemed so vulnerable right now, there was something about her that made Bette want to protect her, put her in her pocket and carry her close to her heart. She had never felt that way about anyone before.
After washing up in the bathroom, Bette took off her jeans and pulled on a pair of pajama pants, Tina whistling like a construction worker on a lunch break, which made them both giggle.
Bette left her tank top on but removed her bra and turned off the lights to climb into bed with Tina. There was enough light coming from the nighttime pool lights and nightlight in the bathroom to see each other once their eyes adjusted.
She lay on her side, facing Tina, who turned over on her stomach and rose up on her elbows to look down at Bette. Her smile was lopsided, her eyes kind and thoughtful.
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Only on page 3 but had to say a big YASSS that your Tina is one that didn’t break for the restaurant door in tears mad at Bette seeing Wendy at the table. THANK You that Tina is gonna pour on the charm & the fuck off to the UNinvited intruder Wendy!! Whoop!Whoop!!????????????????????????. Go get her Tina ????
Gotta Go! . . . . . . . read the rest of this chapter
DT
you crack me up. Reading then pausing to comment. Made me laugh…
Yeah, i also read first couple of pages – and i’m very impressed how Tina handled Wendy’s problem.
Continue to read.
BK…Have I told you how much I LOVE your writing? You are definitely on my favorites list….if not, currently #1!!! You make me sad, then you make me glad…all in the same story. The only thing I have some frustration with, is the snail’s pace of this fantastic relationship. It seems they are approaching the limits of their resolve… especially poor Bette! Even so, I still enjoy your take on this (my) favorite of all L-Word couples, origin. To say nothing about the craziness of Alice, the loyalty and wisdom of Shane, and the protectiveness of one Peggy Peabody (another personal favorite!). Oh, wait….that might be another story. Anyway, can’t wait for the next chapter! Please keep giving us the immense pleasure of reading your entertaining stories. Thank you.
Dr A,
I forgave BK for the snails pace (this time ????) because she gave us 20 pages.
Next time???? I don’t know how forgiving I’ll be????
Thank you so much Dr A! That is a huge compliment. It is at a snails pace isn’t? Such a huge decision for straight girl Tina to make, and so much fun to draw it out. Won’t be much longer I promise…
No Peggy in this story, unfortunately… this is pre-season one….
Thank you for your kind words, they mean alot…
Ok.
I’ve read the chpt twice as is my custom, and it’s delightful how much Tibette is discovering/observing about one another even before the actual “1st time” happens.
Tina sees that Bette is very tactile, but she also uses her eyes to “touch” and that alone has almost sent Tina over the clift. On the other hand, Bette is really cognizant that Tina needs to be reminded of her value in hearing words that builds her up. She’s right in that Tina will be her best lover….by far!!
They’re getting a big ‘ol dose of “intimacy” that apparently neither one has experienced. They will soon discover that what seems like little touches, looks, smiles, in their developing relationship will make a huge impact in the intensity and trust they’ll have for one another.
I’ll be curious to see what a challenge it’s gonna be for Tina to keep her hands off of Bette as she tries to drive them to their get-away weekend. Especially after Tina’s solo business trip!!
Finally, Tina is gonna have sooooo much fun slapping (whether figuratively or literally) the “fuck me eyes looks” off of anybody that dares to test her ????!!! And she knows she’s up to the task of dispatching the “ClingOns”. YUP! She has already marked Bette as HER woman????????
DT
YES yes yes to the little touches and looks and smiles and innuendos. All add up to a foundation of love and trust that allows Tina to take the next step. And she will def have to deal with more of Bette’s past in the upcoming chapters. Love your comments, as always…
Loved it, thank you. Thank you, also for 20 pages.
Bette is lovely, Tina is adorable and together they make a delightful couple.
Look forward to more soon as I stay home and wash my hands!
SG
yes to staying home and washing hands. I feel like a hermit but we are safe and healthy. Thanks SG
I love these two characters. I love the deliberateness of Bette to make Tina’s new experiences maximize pleasure. She is slow with purpose and she is achieving her goal even if she have doubts. Her goal is to proceed as Tina is comfortable. Personally, I love the pace. It seems like what they would do if they were real live people with each other. Tina’s comfort is Bette’s top priority.
Thank you for this chapter…. I am totally immersed in this story. Love Tina’s ability to claim her women. And I loved that Bette allowed her. Bette’s silence while Tina played her act was a far larger message than Tina’s. Bette’s message was – yes, this is I am allowing to take possession of me and chase away all “KlingOns” . Silence indicates agreement. Bette’s reputation has been that she is never with anyone she doesn’t want to be and Bette is always in control. So when she relinquishes control, then that definitely signals to the world, that things have changed in the world of Bette Porter. And Tina Kennard is the choosen one.
Love the long chapters. Write when you can….
Martha
I had not considered the unspoken message Bette was sending by allowing Tina to handle Wendy, you are 100% correct! Thank you for that insight. It is a really powerful message to the table of catty women watching and wishing Bette and Tina to not make it. Thank yoU!
Amazing chapter BK!
Big applaud for Tina ???????????? for claiming Bette like that in front of Wendy and it was just fantastic how stayed silent and let Tina claim her.
They are a beautiful couple and i love how they move forward in a slow pace!!!
Fantastic story! Thank you!
Thank you BiBi!
SLow and steady wins the race….
Wow, BK, this chapter seemed to flow nicely. Did you wear down your keys? Thanks for over 8000 words!
I really love how Bette is always rushing things in her mind, planing ahead how to seduce Tina, like she usually would and then – hold your horses! Too much, too fast – she stops herself, tries to look at every step from Tina’s point of view and avoids to put pressure on her new girlfriend. Gotta love Bette for it.
I totally enjoy T + B’s thoughts you include in italic. Especially Bette’s are full of wonder about Tina. It’s like Bette’s inmost being is talking to her, telling her “She’s breaking through your walls! Look how amazing it feels to let her in and to give up some of the control.”
Love this: “No one’s ever called me Baby in that tone of voice before, I like it.”
Tina with Wendy was so smooth. After her not so subtle eyebrow-action towards Bette’s fanclub at the gallery this was the next stage of saying “I’m here now, get lost!”
And then those jeans! Rendering Tina speechless and so wonderfully distracted. It’s a wonder that she was attentive enough to hear Alice while it was getting hot and heavy with Bette.
Like the scene of Tina’s first kiss with a woman this moment of intimacy was breathtakingly beautiful. Your use of so many descritpive words bathes this scene in subtle erotic lights. Whispers… delighting…intimacy.. unraveling… her neck offered…exquisite. L o v e it.
But you really cracked me up with Tina and the dishwasher. You know how I love your drunken Tina. Hilarious. And Tina whistling at Bette? Oh, BK, that was too much, I’m still chuckling.
Great chapter, anxiously waiting for more.
Enjoy your weekend, be good to yourself and give yourself a treat
KP
KP
I did wear down the keyboard, I may be developing carpel tunnel for all this typing LOL.
Bette is not used to having to slow down is she? Or seduce, woo, entice. She is so funny to write as she tries to reign in her usual warp speed, get what she wants, when she want kind of mode.
I love a drunken Tina too, she is sweet and cuddly and tries to be helpful. I can just picture Bette not quite knowing what to do with the scene unfolding in her kitchen.
Enjoy your weekend too, we had hail yesterday because its 2020.
Peace !
Wonderful! I was holding my breath when Tina was sitting on Bette’s lap. Sizzling writing, my friend. I love how your Tina has that blend of vulnerable/adventurous/kittenish that is just irresistible to Bette. This is how I always see them in the early days. You captured it perfectly.
‘Bette? Where are you?’ is a beautiful moment.
Putting her in her pocket to hold next to her heart is also a lovely image, blending possession (in a good way) with care.
Ah, I love a good origin story, before all the trauma, lol. Thank you, BK x
Largo
Before all the trauma, amen! How did they fall apart so spectacularly! Hopefully this story can end before all the ugliness started, I dont think I could write about all that unless it was to REWRITE all of that. BTW, I am waiting anxiously for your next chapter. Hint hint. :)
getting cloooosssssseerrrrr. I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!
we have a tina that more assertive but still with tons of fear under the surface. she knows what/who she wants but she’s not 100% how to go about it but she is feeling so much that she may just need to not overthink. it’s starting to happen, where she’s just going with what she is feeling. I love that…the scene in the living room was so beautiful, so sexy….but so full of meaning. and for bette, she’s learning a whole new way to get close to someone…to this one particular one…intimacy and touch and curbing her past behavior with others (not just sex right away but…intimacy). tina is not like the rest. bette knows it and so while she is falling hard, she is also a bit…panicked? which is very bette. she doesn’t want to screw it up, she doesnt want to lose tina, but she just wants to give her everything and protect her. and it’s so very romantic. so very bette. I love the “bette thoughts” in italics!
I cannot wait for the next chapter. thank you, BK!
Thank you BTHofSF
Inch by inch you are correct we are moving closer each chapter. So glad you see them as I do and that the story is coming across the way I hoped it would. I appreciate your comments, thanks!
BK
Wow! I love the way you are slowly unfolding Tina’s awakening. And how Bette is so patient and tender with her, encouraging her desire to bloom.
Your prose are…
Enjoying throughly.
K
SUperK
Thank you, I love your stories as well. So much good stuff on this site that it is hard to keep up with it all. I like how you phrased that “encouraging her desire to bloom” such a beautiful way to describe what Tina is going through thanks!
For now – I only have 1 word – WOW!!!!!!!!
Need & want to read AGAIN – more comments to come!!!!
Thanks so much
HAHA Collins
You can only read it again if it doesn’t detract from you writing your own next chapter, I am waiting for to see what happens in your story too my friend! Thanks
You made me laugh on that one my friend.
Yes, I have time to reread & comment!!!
Actually the next chapter of my story is just about ready to post – it will be a slightly shorter one this week – but oooooooh so worth it!!!!!!!!!
Remember Tina is going to find her ‘sexy tiger’ in her bed again!!!!!!!!!!!!
I might need a cold shower!!!!!!!!
Thanks
Sexy tiger! be still my heart…. now I really can’t wait…