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The Beginning 6
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I’ll need a new dress for Friday night. And I wonder if the inn will allow candles in the room….
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Tina slept almost two hours, Bette dozing off and on as well. She slipped out from under Tina when her stomach started growling and went out to the kitchen to order some Chinese food. Always a good meal to have when hungover and horny.
Her mind kept going back to the feel of Tina’s perfect body, the view of her delicious breast, the way she moved her hips when aroused… the pinkness of her nipple, the way it tasted in her mouth. And they were just getting started. Fuck.
She opened a cold beer and padded out to the pool to stick her feet in the cold water, hoping to cool the ardor that was coursing through her veins.
Fuuuccckkkkkk
Shane appeared and without needing to ask, went inside to get more beers before joining Bette by the pool. She sat cross legged, she was dressed to go out, her black boots coming up above her ankles, her hair messy.
“That was fun last night. I’m thrilled for you and Tina”
“It was fun…” Bette smiled, a far away look in her eyes.
“You happy Bette?”
“I am. I am almost giddy with happiness. Did I just use the word giddy?”
“You did, you really did…” They laughed together, Bette shaking her head.
“I can’t explain it, Shane… it’s just… her. She makes me so fucking happy.”
“I can tell. Good for you, man. Living the dream, living the dream…” Shane was grinning at Bette and they clicked beers in solidarity, celebration.
“Alice says you haven’t slept with her yet.”
“Alice would be right… and very nosy. But, I haven’t. Tina’s special, Shane. I am fine waiting. It won’t be much longer…”
“Yeah?”
“Yeah. It’s a big step for her. For me too, actually. I’ve never done this before. Never waited, never wanted to wait. Before Tina, if a woman wanted to wait, I was out the door and on to the next in line. Horrible, miserable existence… sorry Shane, I know you still enjoy that life…”
“What’s not to enjoy? No strings, no attachments, no tears. Someone new all the time….but I’m happy for you…that’s awesome. I like Tina. A lot… Must be hard, though to wait…don’t think I could do it…”
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Beautiful story!
I love the inner thoughts of Bette, they are cute.
Tina is right, Bette can teach her the physical side of a relationship and she can teach Bette about the emotional side of a relationship.
The fun, the teasing and love they have together is awesome!
Thank you for the update!
These two are so wonderful together….just the right amount of being adventurous without going beyond the boundaries. Bette had better make reservations at a nearby hotel. Driving home for an hour or so is going to be dangerous, as their thoughts will not be on the road or traffic. And the possibility of sweet Alice interrupting is eliminated.if they are not at home.
This is going to be a long week for Tina and for Bette. But I’m sure they will get through it. Really a sweet story. And I think they are ready for the main event of their courtship.
Thanks for this chapter and for this story….. really a good one.
Very nice story. I like the way you write this couple and how we have the insight into Bette’s thoughts.
Thanks for the post
SG
At first I felt like it was taking a long time for these two to come to the point of consummating their relationship, but realistically, the unsteady steps that Tina is taking are quite realistic. She really has a grasp on how much being all in with Bette (a “woman”) is going to have in her total life. She doesnt want to backslide when people/family start to challenge her.
The only thing she needs to learn quickly is to quit listening to Alice!! Especially when it come to relationships. As far as we know in this story, Bette has NOT been with Alice, and if true, Alice doesn’t know what Bette wants and needs from a partner.
Alice believes her own imagined press of what the “playa” Bette is “like” is in bed. Alice’s imagination runs wild on all the stuff (true or otherwise) that all the one-night-stands have said about Bette.
Lordy! Lordy! I hope Alice does NOT have access to keys to Bette’s place, she doesn’t need to be busting in on our lovebirds and Fng up their business 😬😬.
Lastly, I think Tina is gonna shock Bette with her passion in spite of inexperience with a “woman”! I suspect that Bette will yield to Tina and allow herself to be explored and loved by Tina in her own way.
I think it’s cute how Bette is going all out to doll herself up for their dinner date. Tina doesn’t know it but she will be drooling over Bette . . . In public! HeHeHe! 😊☺️😜
Sweet BK,
One more thing, the humor in your stories make me quickly defend into ????????????
Tina: You made breakfast?
Bette: “I did. Six unfortunate eggs died to bring you this meal. All burnt beyond recognition, alas. . . .” ????????????
Bette: “I thought you might want soe food in your stomach”
Tina: “where’s yours?
Bette: “I . . . ran out of eggs. It’s ok, I don’t usually eat breakfast so . . . “
Beautiful chapter, BK. You made my day with it!
I love Bette’s observations about the little changes in her day-to-day life, the mini invation of things all Tina in her house and heart. The coffee, having food in the fridge, the little flower, let alone the wonder how amazing it felt to have Tina next to her when waking up.
And Tina? The toothbrush-moment? Priceless. Wonderful how honest and open she is talking about her feelings. Best quote: “Changing the way my heart beats, the very way I breath. I wake up a different person, even the world feels different around me.”
Wow, I’m sure these words wrote themselves around B + T’s hearts the very second they were spoken.
Wedding vows couldn’t be more heartfelt.
Thanks for all the comic moments! Hilarious and proof of their bonding as well.
You made me laugh with Bette’s statement that there’s no lesbian bush acceptability test.
Your story simply makes me happy, thanks for that, BK.
Enjoy your day and the weekend, stay safe
KP
Well, I had to reread a few parts of this fantastic chapter twice because they were so good!!!!!!!!
Okay, Bette’s not the only one bursting at the seams here with anticipation – we are too!!!!!!!!
Can’t wait for that dinner & the nightcap!!!!!!
Thank you so much for giving us this precious insight into what the very start of their relationship was like. Bette’s evolving into a more balanced person with Tina guiding her through some of the emotions of a budding relationship & she’s realizing its not all about her anymore. At this point, she’ll do anything for Tina – just anything. Just awesome!!!!!!!!
Tina’s getting her courage up & quickly realizing the time for complete intimacy is fast approaching.
Like kiwipit I though the toothbrush moment was so sweet – side by side!! Like they belong!!
Can’t wait for chapter 7.
Thanks so much.
Thank you for the chapter!
Already waiting for their Friday night date.
love how bette already feels like tina is…home. when she wakes up and just notices how much she loves having tina in her space, how tina is already filling that space and making it a home (the coffee, the rose, the full fridge). it’s the little things like that, the details in this love story that make this story so lovely to read. so sweet, so passionate…and they are just getting started. and so playful! damn it, somehow Alice makes it into the bedroom conversation! and tina is being a bit more bold…just going with what she is feeling. little steps. but that last part on the couch was soooo sweet. I love it. I love that tina is showing bette what it means to be intimate and how it just makes things even better. tina is not afraid to say how much she is falling for bette to bette…and I love that.
still loving Bette Porter thoughts lol….so very bette to want everything to be perfect. and I feel like when they spend that long weekend at the beach together, starting with the Friday night date? it will be perfect and right. at least I hope so! ah what a great story. I cannot wait for the next chapter and hope it’s soon! thanks BK.
BK
Beautiful, tender, emotional journey, such a vivid passionate story of unfolding love.
Loving it
K
I love how you jump to the beginning and giving us the story from when it first started can’t wait to see what happens next!
Sometimes, I just have to express how much I love a phrase :
“while the physical aspect of their relationship were new to her, the emotional intimacy was new to Bette.
Somehow this revelation gave her confidence, courage. It felt really good knowing there was something equally important she could teach Bette about being a girlfriend. That the often cocky, frequently arrogant Bette Porter was just pure softness and overwhelming insecurities inside made Tina smile”
Now you just so perfectly resume their miraculous alchimy and how deeply they complete each other, as every true relationship must be. Chapeau bas, as we say in french, my dear author !
My favorite too. Thank for catching that and commenting. Seems we have the same vision of our B&T! All the best, BK
The slow burn is killing ME, I can’t even imagine how Bette’s feeling :D So good though and so soft and the payout is gon be worth it :)