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The beginning of a friendship, chpt 27
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I had cried so desparetly the muscles around my stomach actually hurted so much I had to stop…
I just felt numb…
Unable to feel again.
How could they take that little girl away from me like that?
Her outcry still echoed in my head…
How could my family not see how Julia was treating that little girl?
Was she so great at hiding her true self?
Had I just caught them all off guard?
Would they think about what Id said and come to the conclusion that there was some truth in it?
*Right… In my dreams*
Finally I snapped out of this spiral of thoughts…
After shortly checking up on me Eric had left me alone as Id requested, and I was glad he did.
*I never loved him*
That thought was so true it dazzled me… Id never loved him… Id cared about him, but he never gave me the overwhelming ravishing feeling I felt when I thought of…
*Bette*
Bette:
‘Thats a nasty wound youve got there, younglady’
The 50-somewhat year old man kneeled before me, examining my knee with great enthousiasm.
‘I think weve got an infection here.’
He gestured to the swollen red throbbing area and I winced when he softly touched it.
He smiled reassuringly as he started to explain what he wanted to do…
‘A small incision right here… and that will allow the debris to flow out so you can bend your leg again.’
He winked as he saw how pale my face was.
‘It will be really small, Bette, you dont have to worry about it, I’ll do it right away if you want me to…’
I nodded, I wanted this over with as fast as possible.
Alice took my hand and tried to smile at me but her face was quite pale too as the doctor took a scalple
I closed my eyes and anticipated the coldness of the blade against my skin…
Tina:
The thought of Bette seemed to warm me from the inside… My heart melted and the numbness dissappeared. The tears started to roll over my cheeks again and I felt the pain of losing Rosy but there also was something else, as if the thought of her comforted me… I felt exhausted although is was only 11.30 as I sat against the pillow and hugged my knees. And in that same position I fell asleep, finishing my thoughs in my dreams.
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You’re right, I have been waiting for this moment. Thank you, thank you, thank you.
Hey…Home after a hard days work, the time is 11pm here in sweden and your great post really lighten up the day, but I had to agree with all the others…you can not stop there…please post soon
I was very happy when I saw that you posted and was even happier when I read the chapter until you ended like you did. You are being such a tease. Please post ASAP–can’t wait to see what happens when Tina gets to Bette’s house. Will they finally reveal their feelings for each other? Oh by the way in case I haven’t mentioned it I love your story.
what? why you stop here? you enjoy so much make us suffer don’t you? this is a good good good chapter :) This Eric is a bad gay how he dare to raise his hand to Tina? I hope Bette get better soon. Please make Tina go to Bette house! this would be the time to be together. Yea i know i am in the other part of the world and now you know why my english is bad. Congrats for had passed your test! take care
not nice to leave us like this lol. Ok now let Tina go to Bette and let Bette take care of her or she take care of Bette. OK post soon please, thanks!
i hope bette will be happy to see tina…can we get a kiss now?
Oh Bette, is right. Poor Bette having the doctor cut into an already messed up knee. Thank God for Alice. She is such as good friend and was there for Bette when she needed her. Tina having to face an angry and drug hyped Eric. Having these two stories parallel to one another. One trying to put her life back into some order after coming face to face of the wicked mother and one finally coming to terms of not loving someone that she has been with for years. If only these two knew that they were headed in the same direction. Now if only little Rosy and Steve could show up later and make a happy get together. Love the story so please post soon. And I feel the same way, an old friend (I could always use a friend).
Congrats on ur theory driving test ;) oh gosh… erm… did u just ‘commented’ on my story in ur story? hahaha I think u’re the one who has a way with words ;) Why do I have this feeling that Tina’s hand will just somehow ‘accidentally’ steer to the other side although she’s with the ‘Oh Bette’ brain?
Oh come on, you can’t stop right here! Give us more asap! Thanks for this great story.
Oh Bette? NO.. no no no justloveB+T no no..no. hurry up get tina to bette’ house now, urgh! you can’t stop here.. more.
Hey, zo mag je niet stoppen hé. Ga als de bliksem aan het werk en stuur vandaag nog een hoofdstukje door. Alvast bedankt op voorhand. En….proficiat voor je goeie theorie-examen.
NOOooooOOooo, you can’t just stop right there! Oh man, you are a cliffhanger!!! lol… Tina, just go to claim your women. JusrloveB+T, I need more fix today, I mean it.. NOW! lol
Did you forget the rest of the chapter? O.o So Eric is havin’ roid rage huh? No wonder he went from being a total wuss to a monster just like that. The mental image of draining Bette’s knee definitely didn’t help while I was eating my cinnamon roll. lol =p
TEASER!!!!!!!!!! so T is gonna be maybe movin in with Bette eh????/ hmm interesting things can happen….hehehehehheehehe!!!!
So Tina is going home. Bette better claim her woman,but first they will be putting up with Eric for awhile, she will regret what he just did and try to get Tina back. thanks
Get back to writing…PLS. you can’t leave us there pls!!! That eric is one sick puppy….
I can’t beleave you stopped there. Thanks for the great story.
hey justlove you cant leave it there with oh bette dont let us wait to long for your next post
on my death bed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! longer
T-E-A-S-E-R…LOL.POST SOON