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    The Burden of Control – Chapter 3

    Bettes happiness at seeing her sister was short-lived when,
    instead of pulling into a restaurant, she pulled into an office complex.

    Bette: Whats going
    on? Last I checked, there werent any restaurants around here.

    Kit: Umthere arent.

    Bette: Then why.

    Kit: (interrupts) Now
    dont get mad

    Bette: Oh, no. Nothing
    good can come out a sentence like that. What did you do?

    Kit: I(suddenly
    unsure) um, made an appointment.

    Bette: Appointment?

    Kit: Yeah, a doctors
    appointment.

    Bette: Areare you ok?
    I mean if you wanted me to go to the doctors with you, you could have just
    came right out and said so.

    Kit: Well thats nice
    to know. For the future. But um the appointmentwell its not for me.

    Bette: No foroh Kit,
    you DIDNT?!?

    Kit: Baby girl, you
    need to see a doctor.

    Bette: I dont *****
    believe this. I told you Kit. I was planning on going to the doctor. AFTER the
    show. I dont have ***** time to go to the doctor right now.

    Kit: Apparently you
    do, since were both sitting here.

    Bette: That was
    different. I THOUGHT we were having lunch.

    Kit: And we will. I
    brought two wraps with me to eat once youre all done.

    Bette: (annoyed) Kit

    Kit: (equally annoyed)
    Bette

    Bette: Fine. Since Im
    already here, I might as well get it over with. Then I wont have to bother
    later on. (sighs) And I was so looking
    forward to going out too.

    Kit: Well go another
    time. I promise.

    Bette: So whos the
    doctor?

    Kit: Actually hes a
    friend of Laras father. His name is Anthony Steward and hes a general
    practitioner who shares a practice with an internist. So you should have most
    of the bases covered between the too.

    Bette: Thanks.

    Kit: It wont be so
    bad.

    Bette: No I mean
    thank you for bringing me. (Sighs) I know that Ive been a ***** lately. And the
    last thing I deserve is someone going out of their way to take care of
    me when Im too damn stubborn to do it myself.

    Kit: Thats what
    families are all about, Baby Girl. And youre not bitchy. Justumdifficult
    sometimes. (pauses) Ok, most of the time.

    Comments

    1. hey girl I think you should drop your cliffy rule to 24 hrs LOL
      Well I for sure know what stress can do to the body so maybe Bette can get over it.
      I love how you have Kit in this story, she needs to be used more often. Can’t wait for the next update.

    2. i have just one request..please do not make Bette sick its too much for me..and i love Kit she is really important in Bettes life… and what about the old Bette? why she allow helena do this with her she plays with her all the time..its Time for Bette kick Helenas ass..ok great chapter post soon

    3. i have just one request..please no make Bette sick its too much for me..and i love it she is really important in Bettes life… and what about the old Bette? why she allow helena do this with her she plys with her al the time..its Time for Bette kick Helenas ass..ok great chapter post soon

    4. Hi Tibette.I really love this story.i love everything that’s Tina and Bette.It is amazing that you have only written 3 chapters and yet I am deeply involve in this story.Please post soon. I would like to see Alice and Dani together.

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