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The Burden of Control – Chapter 3
Bettes happiness at seeing her sister was short-lived when,
instead of pulling into a restaurant, she pulled into an office complex.
Bette: Whats going
on? Last I checked, there werent any restaurants around here.
Kit: Umthere arent.
Bette: Then why.
Kit: (interrupts) Now
dont get mad
Bette: Oh, no. Nothing
good can come out a sentence like that. What did you do?
Kit: I(suddenly
unsure) um, made an appointment.
Bette: Appointment?
Kit: Yeah, a doctors
appointment.
Bette: Areare you ok?
I mean if you wanted me to go to the doctors with you, you could have just
came right out and said so.
Kit: Well thats nice
to know. For the future. But um the appointmentwell its not for me.
Bette: No foroh Kit,
you DIDNT?!?
Kit: Baby girl, you
need to see a doctor.
Bette: I dont *****
believe this. I told you Kit. I was planning on going to the doctor. AFTER the
show. I dont have ***** time to go to the doctor right now.
Kit: Apparently you
do, since were both sitting here.
Bette: That was
different. I THOUGHT we were having lunch.
Kit: And we will. I
brought two wraps with me to eat once youre all done.
Bette: (annoyed) Kit
Kit: (equally annoyed)
Bette
Bette: Fine. Since Im
already here, I might as well get it over with. Then I wont have to bother
later on. (sighs) And I was so looking
forward to going out too.
Kit: Well go another
time. I promise.
Bette: So whos the
doctor?
Kit: Actually hes a
friend of Laras father. His name is Anthony Steward and hes a general
practitioner who shares a practice with an internist. So you should have most
of the bases covered between the too.
Bette: Thanks.
Kit: It wont be so
bad.
Bette: No I mean
thank you for bringing me. (Sighs) I know that Ive been a ***** lately. And the
last thing I deserve is someone going out of their way to take care of
me when Im too damn stubborn to do it myself.
Kit: Thats what
families are all about, Baby Girl. And youre not bitchy. Justumdifficult
sometimes. (pauses) Ok, most of the time.
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(51 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
hey girl I think you should drop your cliffy rule to 24 hrs LOL
Well I for sure know what stress can do to the body so maybe Bette can get over it.
I love how you have Kit in this story, she needs to be used more often. Can’t wait for the next update.
This is a very good story so far.
Well, I hope it’s nothing too serious for Bette even though it’s been rough for her after the affair. Great update!
i have just one request..please do not make Bette sick its too much for me..and i love Kit she is really important in Bettes life… and what about the old Bette? why she allow helena do this with her she plays with her all the time..its Time for Bette kick Helenas ass..ok great chapter post soon
i have just one request..please no make Bette sick its too much for me..and i love it she is really important in Bettes life… and what about the old Bette? why she allow helena do this with her she plys with her al the time..its Time for Bette kick Helenas ass..ok great chapter post soon
K
Great chapter. Really hope nothing serious is wrong with B. Can’t wait for more.
Whether Bette is sick, or not, your writing is excellent, which pulls me in and always makes me anxious to read more.
Hi Tibette.I really love this story.i love everything that’s Tina and Bette.It is amazing that you have only written 3 chapters and yet I am deeply involve in this story.Please post soon. I would like to see Alice and Dani together.
Hope Bette ok. Helena is a bitch!