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The Call – Part One
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Im with you..can you feel me? Bettes voice continued soft and low Im under youtouching you Bette said as she lowered herself onto the couch in her office.
Tina closed her eyes; the only sound she heard was Bettes dulcet tones as they caressed her ear. Her legs spread wider accommodating Bettes body and as her ***** brushed the sheets it was Bettes silky skin she felt hardening her nipples. Oh god.. Tinas voice was a little muffled ..yes..I feel you.
Is the sun warming you?
Its warmcaressing my body..heating me up Tinas breathy voice reached Bettes ear.
Thats me Bette breathed can you feel my lips where the sun kisses your skin?
Ummhmm she felt the soft touch of Bettes lips on her shoulder and hips, the warmth of Bettes hands as they spread across her waist.
Bette could hear the quickening rhythm of Tinas exhaled breaths as they assaulted her ear, the sounds excited her, aroused her.
Can you feel my hands sliding down your body? Bettes voice was filled with longing for her wife.
Bette..Im ..uh.. Tina licked her lips again, unsure what to say. The sensations Bettes voice was invoking were overwhelming her. She could feel Bette hands caressing her body and the soft tickle of her tongue as she whispered in her ear.
Shh..just listen..its OK Bette reassured her.
*****, Bette shifted on the couch, her own body was responding to Tinas breathy responses, she slipped her zip down and slid her hand inside Youre wet..so wet..I can feel you.. Bette whispered.
Mmnh Tina managed as her cheek pressed deeper into Bettes pillow, Bettes scent mingling with her own.
My fingers are sliding across you..Im stroking you. Bette whispered Do you want me?
Bette.. Tina pleaded. Her body shuddered as she felt Bettes fingers; her back arched further encouraging Bettes fingers inside her.
Tell me you want me baby Bette begged her.
Oh god..I want you… Tina murmured Where are you she cried, a little confused by the sensations that coursed through her body; her response to a lover who wasnt there with her.
Right theremy fingers are sliding inside you..can you feel them…. Bettes voice was throaty with desire; her exhaled breaths harmonizing with Tinas.
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this was a really good story..you should keep it going!!
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!
“Her skin was incandescent, each tiny hair a filament glowing with reflected sunlight.” WOW. just wow. amazing imagery. I love the dialogue between them when Bette comes home. Thumbs all the way up!
FANTASTIC! More please.
Yep, glad you’re back.
Hope there’s more of the same.
amazing – absolutely hot .
Awesome!!! Welcome back….. more really, really soon
fantastich!~
Absolutely wonderful piece!!
Wow…That’s really all I can say. Just…wow.
Welcome back Oz. Its been a while..I have been waiting for your story. BTW will we get to read that story of yours Listen To Your Heart?
Great, slow and sensual beginning Oz. I’m glad that Bette understands her past mistakes and went home to be with Tina. Tina also needs to know that she deserves better treatment also and not surpress things which is bothering cos if not same things will happen again. Bette will not know what’s going on and misunderstanding can happen and leads to horrible consequences. I’m overanalysing now.
I like the interaction between Bette and Tina has when Bette returns home. So loving, natural, playful and fun..:)
I like your take here. You describe it patiently and in detail. I can imagine what is going on that scene. It’s so flirty the way Bette says and acts when she said I love you and I want you to Tina. Sweet Oz…;)
Keep it up Oz and welcome back. You are missed me here. Next chapter please. Don’t keep me hanging now…:)
Fabulous to see another posting from you. And this…well. Just the thing to start the day! Thanks for an excellent chapter.
Welcome back Oz! Why aren’t you sharing the whole story with us? This chapter was wonderful. I liked the new improved version of Bette.
That was excellent!
Wow this is hot, excited and very interesting story. Bette and Tina in the hot scene here now, please post soon. Thank you!
I just really, really like the way you write!
There is so much feeling and every moment is given its proper attention. You linger in all the right places. The languidness is like a sweet dream and the dialogue is always pitch perfect.
Thank you for coming back again!