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The Call – Part One
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The fire was fueled by desire, built over days filled with tiny intimate gestures and tender loving moments. It was fanned by the familiar sounds of their partners ecstasy until the flames jumped and danced and finally engulfed them.
As the final sigh left Tinas lips she collapsed, rolling onto her back, her legs wobbly and her breathing erratic. If she kept her eyes closed she could still feel Bette deep inside her.
She wanted Bette in her arms and for them to share in the after-glow of their love making. Without thinking she said the first thing that came into her mind Bettegod..come home.
The minute the words left her lips she regretted them, her heart skipped a beat, Bette was going to say no, she was at work and when she was there that was her sole focus.
Stay there said Bette sitting up. Ill be there.. Bette pulled herself together, collected her keys in one smooth move and was out the door and down the corridor in record time.
James she said as she hurried past his desk Ill be an hour..can you tell Kel to keep Jem with her..and hold my calls. She didnt wait for a reply.
Their marriage had fallen apart before for many reasons one of which had been their lack of a healthy, interesting ***** life. Bette was determined that would never happen again. Tina was the person she wanted to be with.
Tina tried to tell Bette it was OK but she found she was already speaking to the dial tone. She pressed the end button and dropped the phone. Closed her eyes and waited.
Sometimes Bette was in danger of overwhelming her. It wasnt that she didnt think she deserved Bettes love, she reveled in it. It was more that when Bette focused herself solely on her she nearly overpowered her. Her love so strong she struggled to absorb it all.
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Bette broke the land speed record between her office and home.
She bounded up the staircase discarding her jacket and shirt on the way. She slowed as she came to their bedroom door, tried to get her breathing a little more under control.
She walked through the doorway, saw Tina lying exactly where shed imagined her. Her skin was incandescent, each tiny hair a filament glowing with reflected sunlight. Bette drew in a deep breath, crept closer.
She thought for a moment that Tina was asleep but the slow smile spreading across her face gave her away.
Keep your eyes closed Bette whispered in her ear and she discarded the rest of her clothes, picked the phone up off the pillow and placed it back on the base.
Bette leaned over Tinas body You look thoroughly fucked.. Bette said appreciatively whove you been talking to?
Wrong number Tina replied, finding it hard to keep the smugness out of her voice.
Bette climbed onto the bed Oh.. Bette breathed warmly in her ear they seem to have your number she tickled Tinas ear with her tongue.
Jem? Tina said; wanting to know everything was alright before she gave herself over to Bette again.
With Kel Bette said and kissed her behind the ear.
Bettes voice dropped a little lower I love you.. she kissed a trail across Tinas throat I want you..
Tinas eyes flickered open at the sound of longing in Bettes voice, she reached up and pulled Bette down onto her waiting lips, wanting Bette as much as Bette wanted her.
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this was a really good story..you should keep it going!!
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!
“Her skin was incandescent, each tiny hair a filament glowing with reflected sunlight.” WOW. just wow. amazing imagery. I love the dialogue between them when Bette comes home. Thumbs all the way up!
FANTASTIC! More please.
Yep, glad you’re back.
Hope there’s more of the same.
amazing – absolutely hot .
Awesome!!! Welcome back….. more really, really soon
fantastich!~
Absolutely wonderful piece!!
Wow…That’s really all I can say. Just…wow.
Welcome back Oz. Its been a while..I have been waiting for your story. BTW will we get to read that story of yours Listen To Your Heart?
Great, slow and sensual beginning Oz. I’m glad that Bette understands her past mistakes and went home to be with Tina. Tina also needs to know that she deserves better treatment also and not surpress things which is bothering cos if not same things will happen again. Bette will not know what’s going on and misunderstanding can happen and leads to horrible consequences. I’m overanalysing now.
I like the interaction between Bette and Tina has when Bette returns home. So loving, natural, playful and fun..:)
I like your take here. You describe it patiently and in detail. I can imagine what is going on that scene. It’s so flirty the way Bette says and acts when she said I love you and I want you to Tina. Sweet Oz…;)
Keep it up Oz and welcome back. You are missed me here. Next chapter please. Don’t keep me hanging now…:)
Fabulous to see another posting from you. And this…well. Just the thing to start the day! Thanks for an excellent chapter.
Welcome back Oz! Why aren’t you sharing the whole story with us? This chapter was wonderful. I liked the new improved version of Bette.
That was excellent!
Wow this is hot, excited and very interesting story. Bette and Tina in the hot scene here now, please post soon. Thank you!
I just really, really like the way you write!
There is so much feeling and every moment is given its proper attention. You linger in all the right places. The languidness is like a sweet dream and the dialogue is always pitch perfect.
Thank you for coming back again!