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    The Date Ch.5 (Final)

    Story written on July 30, 2010 by WalkOnBy.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=76031
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    Bette moved to where she had longed to be. And where Tina had longed for her to be.

    “You must be she I was seeking.
    I have somewhere surely lived a life of joy with you,
    I ate with you and slept with you

    Your body has become not yours only,

    nor left my body mine only.

    You give me the pleasure of your eyes, face, flesh,

    You take of my breast, my hands in return.

    I am not to speak to you, I am to think of you

    When I sit alone or wake at night alone.

    I am to wait, I do not doubt I am to meet you again.

    I am to see to it that I do not lose you.”

    Tina opened her eyes, they having closed as she listened to Bette’s mesmerising voice. “God, Bette, how do you do it?” asked Tina, a little breathless after what she just heard. ”You melt me every time.”

    “Well,” replied Bette, “I can’t take the credit for writing it unfortunately. I just recite what someone’s already written.”

    “I don’t care. You said it to me. And that’s enough to make my heart turn upside down.”

    “Well, I’m pleased you liked it baby,” said Bette, brushing away a few stray wisps of blonde hair that had blown over Tina’s face. “I try to find words that say how things are between us. Now,” she asked softly, ”will you come back to bed with me?”

    Tina smiled, nodded and reached out her hand to take hold of Bette’s as they walked back in to their room.

    Settling back into bed, Tina shuffled up right next to Bette, and rested her head on Bette’s chest, beneath her chin, where she fit so well. Bette tipped her head, kissing Tina through her hair and Tina tilted up her head and gently rested her lips on Bette’s.

    “Make love to me again,” she whispered. “Please.” And she deepened her kiss to ask a second time.

    Bette lifted herself, her arm looping over Tina, and eased herself on top of her once more. She kissed her gently on the nose, then on the chin, then back to her mouth, before their eyes locked as Bette‘s tongue eased through her lips to gently probe at Tina‘s.

    Bette nuzzled her face into her neck, and kissed the sensitive spot just below her ear prompting a wonderful whimper of anticipation from Tina, her eyes rolling back. Bette planted her hands over the fullness of Tina’s soft, welcoming breasts before moving her head down and dragging her tongue over one nipple then the other, making them pucker as the coolness of the room met the licks she left behind. Tina cradled Bette’s head as she began to suck – wanting her, just…wanting her.

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    8. Wow…thanks for this story. It really pulled me in. It broke my heart to think that they found each other and shared so much and yet couldn’t be together and then you added that twist to the end. Finding out that they are soul mates who

    11. OH WELL, TOTALLY NOT WHAT I HAD EXPECTED.. THIS STORY WAS SO DIFFERENT FROM THE ONE’S I HAVE READ BEFORE AND OF COURSE THIS ENDING COULD ALLOW YOU HAVE A SEQUEL TO WHERE THEY REALLY DO MEET AND OF COURSE WE WOULD UNDERSTAND THE NEED OF SOME DRAMA IN THAT STORY, WITH TINA HAVE TO MAKE HARD DECISIONS BETWEEN BETTE AND HER FAMLIY, BUT I THINK YOU COULD DO IT IN MAYBE FIVE TO TEN CHAPTERS, TOPS. THINK ABOUT IT.

    15. This made me incredibly sad. I agree with Dainty and hope you will return with a new view of their situation. One that can end happier. I love your story and hope you share another with us soon. Thank you.

    16. Wonderful and emotional but sad story. If only they could be together for real? They are so beautifully written in your story that not having them together is heartbreaking. Thank you for sharing this lovely story of love.

    20. Loved your story, so sad they weren’t together for real. But you did leave that open for them when Tina said, “someday baby, some day for real. So now you can come back with their story, For Real. Really enjoyed your writing. Don’t wait too long, we’d love to read more about them. Thanks for sharing.

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