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    The Date Ch.5 (Final)

    Story written on July 30, 2010 by WalkOnBy.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=76031
    Author Notes:

    Bette moved to where she had longed to be. And where Tina had longed for her to be.

    Feeling Tina’s movement against her, Bette stirred, “Morning baby.”

    Tina smiled at Bette’s wakefulness and uttered a simple “Hi”, as she tilted her head up to kiss the beautiful brunette.

    While Bette idly played with strands of Tina’s hair, she too knew that the long search was over. All she’d ever wanted was so near, all she’d ever wanted was right there, pressed against her chest… in exactly the same place as everything she could never have. She knew the way things were – she always had – that ‘they’ just couldn’t be. But the void in her life had gone just knowing that she‘d found her, the one. Even if they weren’t…together.

    __________________

    Before most of the other guests had even eaten breakfast, Bette and Tina’s room was empty. From being filled with the sounds of the beach, the sounds of lovemaking and the soft tick-tock of the bedside clock, there was now an eerie silence. The sliding doors out to the balcony were closed, the lovers had gone and…the clock?

    The clock had stopped.

    At the perfect moment.

    ___________________

    The author leaned back on her chair, and puffed out her cheeks, having just typed the last few lines of the story. She glanced up to the choice of ratings, and clicked on the drop-down menu.

    NC-17.

    Checking over everything one last time, she clicked on the box at the bottom of the screen.

    Post this story.

    She smiled, ‘I hope she likes it’.

    Later that evening, she revisited the site and checked her private messages, the place where it had all started. And there it was. From her.

    ‘Hi Elizabeth.

    Thank you so much for doing a story about us. Clever of you to change our names a little! It’s amazing how you managed to capture how we feel about each other. I’m so sorry we can’t have a date for real. I really am.

    Christina x

    PS I love you too.’

    She stared at the screen, reached out and traced a finger slowly across the letters she‘d been earnestly hoping to see among the thousands they‘d already shared.

    ‘I – l – o – v – e – y – o – u’

    “Some day, baby,” she said out loud, “Some day. For real.”

    And a tear rolled down her face.

    THE END

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    8. Wow…thanks for this story. It really pulled me in. It broke my heart to think that they found each other and shared so much and yet couldn’t be together and then you added that twist to the end. Finding out that they are soul mates who

    11. OH WELL, TOTALLY NOT WHAT I HAD EXPECTED.. THIS STORY WAS SO DIFFERENT FROM THE ONE’S I HAVE READ BEFORE AND OF COURSE THIS ENDING COULD ALLOW YOU HAVE A SEQUEL TO WHERE THEY REALLY DO MEET AND OF COURSE WE WOULD UNDERSTAND THE NEED OF SOME DRAMA IN THAT STORY, WITH TINA HAVE TO MAKE HARD DECISIONS BETWEEN BETTE AND HER FAMLIY, BUT I THINK YOU COULD DO IT IN MAYBE FIVE TO TEN CHAPTERS, TOPS. THINK ABOUT IT.

    15. This made me incredibly sad. I agree with Dainty and hope you will return with a new view of their situation. One that can end happier. I love your story and hope you share another with us soon. Thank you.

    16. Wonderful and emotional but sad story. If only they could be together for real? They are so beautifully written in your story that not having them together is heartbreaking. Thank you for sharing this lovely story of love.

    20. Loved your story, so sad they weren’t together for real. But you did leave that open for them when Tina said, “someday baby, some day for real. So now you can come back with their story, For Real. Really enjoyed your writing. Don’t wait too long, we’d love to read more about them. Thanks for sharing.

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