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The Date Ch.5 (Final)
She so loved the feeling of the warmth and wetness of Bette’s mouth on her, her tongue working on her, Tina couldn’t help but wonder what it would feel like elsewhere.
Bette was wondering too.
As Tina lifted her head up slightly to watch, Bette took her mouth away and looked up. There was such a want in Bette’s eyes, such a need in Tina’s, words were unnecessary. Tina rested her hands on Bette’s beautifully sculpted shoulders…and gently pushed.
Placing featherlight kisses all the way down Tina’s stomach, her hands still massaging her breasts, Bette moved to where she had longed to be. And where Tina had longed for her to be. She spread her legs wider to welcome her lover, Bette catching the aroma of Tina’s arousal.
“Oh god baby, oh god. I need you so much,“ Bette panted as she lowered herself between Tina’s thighs, with Tina’s hands resting on her head. She opened her mouth, and with the slightest, most delicate touch of her tongue, she tasted Tina for the first time.
Nectar.
Bette needed more. Tina needed more.
“Hold yourself for me baby.”
Tina’s hands dropped from Bette’s head – and she did as Bette told her.
Another touch, more of a lick, this time broader, longer.
And slow.
Deliciously slow.
Neither of them wanted to accelerate into pleasure. This was a time to be savoured. Treasured. Eternity to be kept in every moment.
Just as Tina had asked, Bette made love to her. Again. And again.
It had to be.
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The following morning, the sound of the waves rolling slowly, continually over the sands greeted Tina when she woke. Memories of last night – and the physical reminders – gave her such an overwhelming feeling of…peace, contentment. It was like she’d completed a journey. And she reached out her hand knowing she could touch her destination.
Tina stretched her arm across the warmth of Bette‘s body, curving her hand around to cup her breast, and lay deep in thought. She marvelled at how, at that time just the day before, she would’ve passed Bette in the street, walked right by her soulmate, and not even known her. Now, as she moved closer and lay with her head resting on Bette’s chest, listening to the beat of a heart that had surely become her own, she knew she’d found the love of her life. She realised she had ended up living her life the way she thought it should be lived as opposed to how she wanted to live it. And it was a life she had to go back to. But the emptiness she had carried with her for as long as she could remember was now filled. She was complete.
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(55 votes, average: 3.56 out of 5)
Thanks for this wonderful story. PPS
Excellent story. Very enjoyable. Please post again.
Well done, enjoyed the story alot.
That was very original and well written. Thank you.
Life, imitating art, imitating life. Very nice story, ~ jinjur
Clever! Thanks for sharing!
Excellent awesome story. Thank you just beautiful.
Wow…thanks for this story. It really pulled me in. It broke my heart to think that they found each other and shared so much and yet couldn’t be together and then you added that twist to the end. Finding out that they are soul mates who
have never really connected…I’m not sure if that makes it better or worse. I hope you post another story soon. I love your writing style.
Wow! I haven’t commented in some while and all I can come up with is WOW! See, some of us are meant to write & some are meant to read. Awsome…….
OH WELL, TOTALLY NOT WHAT I HAD EXPECTED.. THIS STORY WAS SO DIFFERENT FROM THE ONE’S I HAVE READ BEFORE AND OF COURSE THIS ENDING COULD ALLOW YOU HAVE A SEQUEL TO WHERE THEY REALLY DO MEET AND OF COURSE WE WOULD UNDERSTAND THE NEED OF SOME DRAMA IN THAT STORY, WITH TINA HAVE TO MAKE HARD DECISIONS BETWEEN BETTE AND HER FAMLIY, BUT I THINK YOU COULD DO IT IN MAYBE FIVE TO TEN CHAPTERS, TOPS. THINK ABOUT IT.
AMAZING!!! Thank you
the end blew me away which makes me think its about two people frm here
Wow wasn’t expecting that at all. You are a very beautiful writer. Your words are breath taking. Hoping you post again..
This made me incredibly sad. I agree with Dainty and hope you will return with a new view of their situation. One that can end happier. I love your story and hope you share another with us soon. Thank you.
Wonderful and emotional but sad story. If only they could be together for real? They are so beautifully written in your story that not having them together is heartbreaking. Thank you for sharing this lovely story of love.
Such a beautiful story. So sad that they couldn’t actually be together. Thanks!
Wow, wasn’t expecting that at the end. Amazing and original. Great job!!
Beautiful……….Best story I’ve read in ages, I was fully into the moments!
Loved your story, so sad they weren’t together for real. But you did leave that open for them when Tina said, “someday baby, some day for real. So now you can come back with their story, For Real. Really enjoyed your writing. Don’t wait too long, we’d love to read more about them. Thanks for sharing.
Please continue writing,such a great ans sad story.
overwhelming…simply overwhelming! Thank you very much!
a sad sad sad story…sigh give me a minute *TEARS*