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The End
“Bette! … I was just about to come get you.”
The professor pivoted on the leg that hadn’t been hit as hard in the accident. She met eyes with her stalker, and tried to keep as calm as possible. She knew that if she wanted her and Tina to get through it all, she would need to go along with simple conversation. Sophia certainly played at normalcy with her intelligence, so Bette decided that she would try to appeal to the young woman’s good nature, or what was left of it. She swallowed hard: “Sophia …”
“You’re hurt,” Sophia said with emotion, reminding Bette of her worry for her wife, but she tried to keep from pushing the subject. If Bette could get inside, she knew she could look for Tina herself. Tenderly, strangely, Sophia continued: “Come on in, stranger.”
Is she flirting with me?! Bette tried to contain her rage and her fear, and stepped over to the cabin in search of Tina. She balled her hands into fists and did her best at walking without her limp so that Sophia wouldn’t offer any help. It worked.
Bette tried to pull her psychology courses to the forefront of her mind as Sophia welcomed her inside and closed the door.
“Would you like some tea?”
Does she really think I’d like to sit for some tea?! “Umm …”
“That car wreck really looked like something else,” Sophia said over her shoulder, taking a few steps over to pull a bowl of tea leaves off the shelf. “I hope you’ll be alright.”
“And … the other woman who was there …?” She was trying to read the cues Sophia was delivering – trying to keep as calm as possible. As blasé about the situation as she could manage. She kept reminding herself keep calm, keep calm.
“Oh. Well … I saw her cause that accident. Are you here to question her?” Sophia teased, setting the bowl on the table when Bette surprised her with an unexpected response.
“Yes.”
Sophia turned to her, a little thrown that Bette was so clearly unaffected by what had happened. She had to blink and control her breathing to keep from upsetting herself too terribly. She didn’t want to lose control – not when she was so close. “Oh … well, she’s a little … incapacitated at the moment.”
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ut says
Holy fuck, that crazy bitch, how the fuck did she know they are going. Lol, someone need to watch her and lock her in forever lol. Thanks for the story and hope to see you soon
colenickel says
Lol no lock and key…tina should have just put her out of her misery cuz the only good crazy bitch is a dead crazy bitch lord what a rollercoaster.
onthebrink says
A very suspenseful story that kept us on the edge of our seats! Great story to welcome in the new site. I am a huge fan and have read everything you have written. I hope we will have a new story from you very soon. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and unique perspectives with your loyal readers.!
tiggerbounced says
Wow GR, you certainly have proven that you can do almost every genre of writing there is out there. I can totally see this as a movie honestly. It’s that good!
I’m not normally one for thrillers and such but you drew me in right from the beginning and I just couldn’t leave, even when it started to get scary!
Thanks so much for this brilliant piece of work, I love how you delved into the mind of Sophia as well as the reactions and feelings of Bette and Tina!
lipitora says
Wow. This ending really surprised me!
You’re great twist at the end.
I thought that the end will be happy. the stalker now changed?
so you can continue what I’m waiting :-)
laileng36 says
Oh GR even at the end of the story there is still suspense going! What a thrill end!
didi1956 says
Surprising end,amazing.Thank you and please continue writing.
wkm says
Spooky, thanks enjoyed it
antinouszoe says
when I see the end of this story, I nearly shout out “WHAT” in the middle of the night……….
You are good at writing a suspense story just like any other genre you already wrote!!!
hope can see ur stories soon, and thank u!!
buggs666 says
great story
buggs666 says
great story. I love most of your stories.
jp22 says
That was certainly a creepy ending. Thanks!
BenMac says
Haha! okay, that was fun. I could almost hear the screechy violin music from Psycho right at the end. Thanks for the ride, sorry it’s over. Guess I’ll get back in line and reread the whole thing in one sitting. I know you are expanding your styles and genres, but a really juicy and dark kink, heavy on the discipline, would really, really make my day, month, year…so, pretty please!?
brinny says
Thanks for that delicious spooky story. An amazing twist in the end. I was not expecting that! Can we see a sequel with Schizo Sophia back to torment Tina and Bette?
radleks says
What a crazy ending to a great story! Creeptastic! Can’t wait to read your next story and I’m with BenMac on her request.w
talaula says
WHAT, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
jc sportty says
Great ending! Thanks for sharing…I am also with BenMac on her request :)
topcat says
OMG that’s one crazy bitch..
cvu says
She is so creepy!
madalena pinheiro says
LOVED EACH CHAPTER.
MY CONGRATULATIONS GRINDRIGHT.
bennyboobear says
What a twist at the end. Wasn’t expecting that. What an awesome story. Love the twists and the suspense. Can’t wait for more stories.
Merlion says
OMG!! *****!!!
What a story!!
Thanks GR! I don’t really like the end :-/ but this another great story from you! Thanks again for sharing! :-)
Martha10 says
I’ve just read the stories you wrote that were still new to me and reread the others. And I just want to say that I love them all! An incredible array of genres, styles and plots. Thank you for your amazing contribution to this site!
LishaLove says
This was so good.. And I loved how you ended it.. The ultimate cliffhanger… I would love to see what could or would happen next