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The End
“Well, I really don’t think she has any place here.”
Sophia squinted only subtly, watching Bette carefully to see that she meant what she said. If Tina didn’t belong, then would they be united at last? Bette and I could live out our lifelong fantasies with each other – safe from the hatred of jealous sluts like Tina. It was difficult not to see hope in that moment, but Sophia tried to push it away, in case it was all a game. She tried to keep to her rules of holding Tina until the proper moment to hurtle her into hell where she belonged. However, the more she watched or spoke with this fiercer Tina, the more respect that built. Now is not the time, she kept reminding herself. Don’t go weak now. Stand your ground.
“I’d like to tell her to leave,” Bette said as cool and calmly as her voice would allow. It made for a very convincing statement, and Sophia was thrilled but cautious at the same time. She had had others before, but none as perfect as Bette Porter. She would certainly keep this one, she assured herself.
From the bedroom in the tiny lodge, Tina was lifted to consciousness with the comfort of her wife’s voice. Through her sudden, groggy consciousness, she could hear the conversation between Bette and her stalker, even with the pain searing through her. What happened, she wondered, and why can’t I move my arms?
There were some quiet mumblings she couldn’t quite hear, and then she heard the door opening beside her, and by default, she played at unconsciousness. She figured she was experiencing a migraine too, although she had never had one before. The pain was immense, but her adrenaline took control and she settled her breathing for the act unconsciousness.
Bette’s breath caught in her throat in such a way that she felt she would never breathe again. She was so startled at the image of her soft and injured wife restrained with zip ties to the bed – her perfect nose red, swollen and notched to the side. It was certainly broken. Immediately, she rushed to Tina’s side, but she kept her hands away. A part of her was still trying desperately to keep up her act.
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Holy fuck, that crazy bitch, how the fuck did she know they are going. Lol, someone need to watch her and lock her in forever lol. Thanks for the story and hope to see you soon
Lol no lock and key…tina should have just put her out of her misery cuz the only good crazy bitch is a dead crazy bitch lord what a rollercoaster.
A very suspenseful story that kept us on the edge of our seats! Great story to welcome in the new site. I am a huge fan and have read everything you have written. I hope we will have a new story from you very soon. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and unique perspectives with your loyal readers.!
Wow GR, you certainly have proven that you can do almost every genre of writing there is out there. I can totally see this as a movie honestly. It’s that good!
I’m not normally one for thrillers and such but you drew me in right from the beginning and I just couldn’t leave, even when it started to get scary!
Thanks so much for this brilliant piece of work, I love how you delved into the mind of Sophia as well as the reactions and feelings of Bette and Tina!
Wow. This ending really surprised me!
You’re great twist at the end.
I thought that the end will be happy. the stalker now changed?
so you can continue what I’m waiting :-)
Oh GR even at the end of the story there is still suspense going! What a thrill end!
Surprising end,amazing.Thank you and please continue writing.
Spooky, thanks enjoyed it
when I see the end of this story, I nearly shout out “WHAT” in the middle of the night……….
You are good at writing a suspense story just like any other genre you already wrote!!!
hope can see ur stories soon, and thank u!!
great story
great story. I love most of your stories.
That was certainly a creepy ending. Thanks!
Haha! okay, that was fun. I could almost hear the screechy violin music from Psycho right at the end. Thanks for the ride, sorry it’s over. Guess I’ll get back in line and reread the whole thing in one sitting. I know you are expanding your styles and genres, but a really juicy and dark kink, heavy on the discipline, would really, really make my day, month, year…so, pretty please!?
Thanks for that delicious spooky story. An amazing twist in the end. I was not expecting that! Can we see a sequel with Schizo Sophia back to torment Tina and Bette?
What a crazy ending to a great story! Creeptastic! Can’t wait to read your next story and I’m with BenMac on her request.w
WHAT, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Great ending! Thanks for sharing…I am also with BenMac on her request :)
OMG that’s one crazy bitch..
She is so creepy!
LOVED EACH CHAPTER.
MY CONGRATULATIONS GRINDRIGHT.
What a twist at the end. Wasn’t expecting that. What an awesome story. Love the twists and the suspense. Can’t wait for more stories.
OMG!! *****!!!
What a story!!
Thanks GR! I don’t really like the end :-/ but this another great story from you! Thanks again for sharing! :-)
I’ve just read the stories you wrote that were still new to me and reread the others. And I just want to say that I love them all! An incredible array of genres, styles and plots. Thank you for your amazing contribution to this site!
This was so good.. And I loved how you ended it.. The ultimate cliffhanger… I would love to see what could or would happen next