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The End
“Stupid woman,” Sophia smiled, not even bothering to hide it when Bette turned back around. “Firstly she causes the accident, and secondly isn’t quick enough to shield her face from the impact … tsk tsk tsk … I’d say you’re a little more agile in that respect.”
Without the ability to restrain herself any further, Bette leapt across the room, grabbed Sophia by her shirt, and shoved her into the rustic old wall to pin her there – seething with anger. There were no words for her anger toward the young woman, so she was forced to keep it inside.
“She doesn’t deserve you,” Sophia panted, trying to keep Bette at arm’s length with little success. It would have appeared that they were fighting, but it was more like pulling and pushing against one another. Bette panicked with fear for Tina, and her strength grew, closing her hand over Sophia’s throat just like she’d seen it done to her wife earlier. “That … stupid … bitch …”
“That’s my wife!”
Gathering some leverage through her fight for control, Sophia managed to knee Bette in the ribs. With great audacity, Sophia raced over to the bed to backhand Tina hard across the face. She wanted Tina to be awake to hear the struggle. “This,” she seethed to herself, gesturing to the blond she’d tied to a post at the end of her bed. “Is the reason for all your troubles – everything!”
Bette held her stomach and slowly stood to her feet again just as Tina had gasped herself awake again. She was tugging against her wrists struggling while Bette and Sophia stared one another down.
“I thought you didn’t want her here,” Sophia grinned, “Oh, don’t tell me you’re the cheating kind, Professor … I don’t think she’d like that too much. Not that it would matter. She’s your possession, isn’t she?”
“No!”
“ISN’T SHE?!”
“NO!”
“That used to be me,” Sophia whispered unnecessarily, sliding a knife off a high shelf with expertise, and gesturing to Tina again with fancy footwork to keep from knocking into the wall at her back. “That stupid devoted thing … but not anymore … I have a life with you, and we will have EVERYTHING once we find each other … Once you can truly see me … for who I am.”
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ut says
Holy fuck, that crazy bitch, how the fuck did she know they are going. Lol, someone need to watch her and lock her in forever lol. Thanks for the story and hope to see you soon
colenickel says
Lol no lock and key…tina should have just put her out of her misery cuz the only good crazy bitch is a dead crazy bitch lord what a rollercoaster.
onthebrink says
A very suspenseful story that kept us on the edge of our seats! Great story to welcome in the new site. I am a huge fan and have read everything you have written. I hope we will have a new story from you very soon. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and unique perspectives with your loyal readers.!
tiggerbounced says
Wow GR, you certainly have proven that you can do almost every genre of writing there is out there. I can totally see this as a movie honestly. It’s that good!
I’m not normally one for thrillers and such but you drew me in right from the beginning and I just couldn’t leave, even when it started to get scary!
Thanks so much for this brilliant piece of work, I love how you delved into the mind of Sophia as well as the reactions and feelings of Bette and Tina!
lipitora says
Wow. This ending really surprised me!
You’re great twist at the end.
I thought that the end will be happy. the stalker now changed?
so you can continue what I’m waiting :-)
laileng36 says
Oh GR even at the end of the story there is still suspense going! What a thrill end!
didi1956 says
Surprising end,amazing.Thank you and please continue writing.
wkm says
Spooky, thanks enjoyed it
antinouszoe says
when I see the end of this story, I nearly shout out “WHAT” in the middle of the night……….
You are good at writing a suspense story just like any other genre you already wrote!!!
hope can see ur stories soon, and thank u!!
buggs666 says
great story
buggs666 says
great story. I love most of your stories.
jp22 says
That was certainly a creepy ending. Thanks!
BenMac says
Haha! okay, that was fun. I could almost hear the screechy violin music from Psycho right at the end. Thanks for the ride, sorry it’s over. Guess I’ll get back in line and reread the whole thing in one sitting. I know you are expanding your styles and genres, but a really juicy and dark kink, heavy on the discipline, would really, really make my day, month, year…so, pretty please!?
brinny says
Thanks for that delicious spooky story. An amazing twist in the end. I was not expecting that! Can we see a sequel with Schizo Sophia back to torment Tina and Bette?
radleks says
What a crazy ending to a great story! Creeptastic! Can’t wait to read your next story and I’m with BenMac on her request.w
talaula says
WHAT, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
jc sportty says
Great ending! Thanks for sharing…I am also with BenMac on her request :)
topcat says
OMG that’s one crazy bitch..
cvu says
She is so creepy!
madalena pinheiro says
LOVED EACH CHAPTER.
MY CONGRATULATIONS GRINDRIGHT.
bennyboobear says
What a twist at the end. Wasn’t expecting that. What an awesome story. Love the twists and the suspense. Can’t wait for more stories.
Merlion says
OMG!! *****!!!
What a story!!
Thanks GR! I don’t really like the end :-/ but this another great story from you! Thanks again for sharing! :-)
Martha10 says
I’ve just read the stories you wrote that were still new to me and reread the others. And I just want to say that I love them all! An incredible array of genres, styles and plots. Thank you for your amazing contribution to this site!
LishaLove says
This was so good.. And I loved how you ended it.. The ultimate cliffhanger… I would love to see what could or would happen next