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The End
“How many have you stalked before?” Tina asked in a voice that only communicated disinterest, but her eyes were seeking truth.
Sophia answered just the same, having abandoned her shy façade for the confident blond. “None. I don’t stalk.”
“You fucking-” but Tina stopped herself before she could get riled up. Talking, she decided, wasn’t such a good idea after all.
Sophia continued anyway. “It must be nice to feel that she cares about you.”
Come on, Bette – I can’t last forever, Tina thought in the otherwise silent winter lodge. All she wanted was to get out of there, and to have a sense of safety and security after everything Sophia had put them through.
No one would pity her, Sophia had decided long ago. She was extremely abrasive to stave off pity in some cases, but for the most part, that was what she had become. A monster. She’d formed into such an anti-social being that her only relationships were following those she cared for – those she carried with respect or admiration. She hadn’t loved many before Bette, but Tina was different. Tina was willing to fight for Bette, and the more Sophia learned about her, the more her grin reflected her admiration for her in many different ways. It seemed that Tina would do anything for the woman she loved, and wasn’t that all Sophia had ever wanted? Yes … I believe she’s worth the wait …
At last, Bette ran into the little cabin with her phone, having dialled from the road. She was still speaking to the 911 operator. They were sending a car over immediately – two squad cars in fact. One for Sophia, and one for them.
Bette immediately pulled Tina to her, held her, and whispered her love. When Tina whispered it back, Sophia closed her eyes, and accepted the words washing over her. It would certainly take some getting used to.
The crash had occurred about half an hour out of the city inside a cluster of trees along the road, but their car was a great marker, so it wasn’t long until they were found. As the officers parked outside, Bette and Tina hurried out the door, raising their arms up when requested, pointing the officers in the proper direction. After they were identified, they watched Sophia be taken into the back of one of the squad cars – ducking inside of it.
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Holy fuck, that crazy bitch, how the fuck did she know they are going. Lol, someone need to watch her and lock her in forever lol. Thanks for the story and hope to see you soon
Lol no lock and key…tina should have just put her out of her misery cuz the only good crazy bitch is a dead crazy bitch lord what a rollercoaster.
A very suspenseful story that kept us on the edge of our seats! Great story to welcome in the new site. I am a huge fan and have read everything you have written. I hope we will have a new story from you very soon. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and unique perspectives with your loyal readers.!
Wow GR, you certainly have proven that you can do almost every genre of writing there is out there. I can totally see this as a movie honestly. It’s that good!
I’m not normally one for thrillers and such but you drew me in right from the beginning and I just couldn’t leave, even when it started to get scary!
Thanks so much for this brilliant piece of work, I love how you delved into the mind of Sophia as well as the reactions and feelings of Bette and Tina!
Wow. This ending really surprised me!
You’re great twist at the end.
I thought that the end will be happy. the stalker now changed?
so you can continue what I’m waiting :-)
Oh GR even at the end of the story there is still suspense going! What a thrill end!
Surprising end,amazing.Thank you and please continue writing.
Spooky, thanks enjoyed it
when I see the end of this story, I nearly shout out “WHAT” in the middle of the night……….
You are good at writing a suspense story just like any other genre you already wrote!!!
hope can see ur stories soon, and thank u!!
great story
great story. I love most of your stories.
That was certainly a creepy ending. Thanks!
Haha! okay, that was fun. I could almost hear the screechy violin music from Psycho right at the end. Thanks for the ride, sorry it’s over. Guess I’ll get back in line and reread the whole thing in one sitting. I know you are expanding your styles and genres, but a really juicy and dark kink, heavy on the discipline, would really, really make my day, month, year…so, pretty please!?
Thanks for that delicious spooky story. An amazing twist in the end. I was not expecting that! Can we see a sequel with Schizo Sophia back to torment Tina and Bette?
What a crazy ending to a great story! Creeptastic! Can’t wait to read your next story and I’m with BenMac on her request.w
WHAT, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Great ending! Thanks for sharing…I am also with BenMac on her request :)
OMG that’s one crazy bitch..
She is so creepy!
LOVED EACH CHAPTER.
MY CONGRATULATIONS GRINDRIGHT.
What a twist at the end. Wasn’t expecting that. What an awesome story. Love the twists and the suspense. Can’t wait for more stories.
OMG!! *****!!!
What a story!!
Thanks GR! I don’t really like the end :-/ but this another great story from you! Thanks again for sharing! :-)
I’ve just read the stories you wrote that were still new to me and reread the others. And I just want to say that I love them all! An incredible array of genres, styles and plots. Thank you for your amazing contribution to this site!
This was so good.. And I loved how you ended it.. The ultimate cliffhanger… I would love to see what could or would happen next