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The End
The fist connected with Sophia’s cheek just as Bette was screaming for them both to stop. And just as Tina had her victory, the thrashing hesitated, and Bette pulled her off. Sophia hissed in pain, and Bette was quick to use the spare set of zip ties to bind the young woman’s wrists to the foot of the bed.
With her frizzy brown hair a mess and her cheek swelling up quickly, Sophia quickly tucked herself in for protection.
“Tina, no!” Bette whispered, pulling Tina back just as she went to kick the girl. Bette hurried her wife to the other side of the room, and then held her. She held her in an embrace so tight that her airway was restricted, but they were glad to be close. Bette was stronger, knowing that Tina would be alright. “T … don’t. Please. We’re gonna be okay. That’s all we need.”
Tina scowled over at the young woman who was simply smiling back at her, and then she was filled with disgust. “She’s loving this!”
When Bette turned around again, Sophia was sulking, and Tina was angry with the act. She and Bette had been through so much because of that woman, and Tina was seething with rage. She was still trying to reach Sophia when Bette pinned her against the wall, and looked into her eyes.
“T! – T, T …” Bette mumbled against their struggles. “T … look at me.”
She did.
“I know that you’re angry. I’m angrier. I just don’t want us to do anything we’ll regret … okay? … Now where is your phone? We’re calling this in.”
When Tina realized Sophia had taken it, she started up all over again to the point where Bette had to take her to the other room just to calm her down. She held her and stroked her hair and promised she wouldn’t leave her side.
“That fucking monster,” Tina mumbled, cradled in Bette’s arms on the couch. She’d been crying, but finally she was thinking clearly as she wiped away another stream of tears. “Why don’t we … check the car. Maybe yours is still in there.”
“Yeah,” Bette whispered, “I didn’t have mine on me when I left the car. That’s smart.”
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Holy fuck, that crazy bitch, how the fuck did she know they are going. Lol, someone need to watch her and lock her in forever lol. Thanks for the story and hope to see you soon
Lol no lock and key…tina should have just put her out of her misery cuz the only good crazy bitch is a dead crazy bitch lord what a rollercoaster.
A very suspenseful story that kept us on the edge of our seats! Great story to welcome in the new site. I am a huge fan and have read everything you have written. I hope we will have a new story from you very soon. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and unique perspectives with your loyal readers.!
Wow GR, you certainly have proven that you can do almost every genre of writing there is out there. I can totally see this as a movie honestly. It’s that good!
I’m not normally one for thrillers and such but you drew me in right from the beginning and I just couldn’t leave, even when it started to get scary!
Thanks so much for this brilliant piece of work, I love how you delved into the mind of Sophia as well as the reactions and feelings of Bette and Tina!
Wow. This ending really surprised me!
You’re great twist at the end.
I thought that the end will be happy. the stalker now changed?
so you can continue what I’m waiting :-)
Oh GR even at the end of the story there is still suspense going! What a thrill end!
Surprising end,amazing.Thank you and please continue writing.
Spooky, thanks enjoyed it
when I see the end of this story, I nearly shout out “WHAT” in the middle of the night……….
You are good at writing a suspense story just like any other genre you already wrote!!!
hope can see ur stories soon, and thank u!!
great story
great story. I love most of your stories.
That was certainly a creepy ending. Thanks!
Haha! okay, that was fun. I could almost hear the screechy violin music from Psycho right at the end. Thanks for the ride, sorry it’s over. Guess I’ll get back in line and reread the whole thing in one sitting. I know you are expanding your styles and genres, but a really juicy and dark kink, heavy on the discipline, would really, really make my day, month, year…so, pretty please!?
Thanks for that delicious spooky story. An amazing twist in the end. I was not expecting that! Can we see a sequel with Schizo Sophia back to torment Tina and Bette?
What a crazy ending to a great story! Creeptastic! Can’t wait to read your next story and I’m with BenMac on her request.w
WHAT, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Great ending! Thanks for sharing…I am also with BenMac on her request :)
OMG that’s one crazy bitch..
She is so creepy!
LOVED EACH CHAPTER.
MY CONGRATULATIONS GRINDRIGHT.
What a twist at the end. Wasn’t expecting that. What an awesome story. Love the twists and the suspense. Can’t wait for more stories.
OMG!! *****!!!
What a story!!
Thanks GR! I don’t really like the end :-/ but this another great story from you! Thanks again for sharing! :-)
I’ve just read the stories you wrote that were still new to me and reread the others. And I just want to say that I love them all! An incredible array of genres, styles and plots. Thank you for your amazing contribution to this site!
This was so good.. And I loved how you ended it.. The ultimate cliffhanger… I would love to see what could or would happen next