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The End
“Why are you whispering?”
“Let’s just … be safe, okay?” Bette insinuated as Tina climbed off of her lap. “You never know what she’ll do … use it against us or something.”
“I’ll watch her. You go.”
Bette put her hand on her hip and gave Tina a very pointed look. “T.”
“Bette, I am NOT leaving you here with her – she’s obsessed with you! She’ll get into your head!”
Bette quietly voiced concerns of her own: “She’s trying to kill you! I can’t leave you here.”
“Well someone has to watch her.”
Just as the argument grew to shouting, Bette stopped everything and looked at Tina. Realizing something with incredulousness. “This is what she wants.”
“What?”
“T – she’s gotten to know us. As fucked-up as that is, she’s gotten to know us both, and she’s trying to use that against us – to make us fight.” Bette let out a breath of laughter at Sophia’s irrational intentions. “T, she’s still trying to break us up! The fight, her reactions, it’s everything!”
Tina felt that she was losing her mind over Sophia’s lunatic efforts, but with Bette’s understanding came her own sort of calmness. “Okay … let’s look through this cabin first, and-”
“T, she wouldn’t leave anything as handy as a phone lying around,” Bette insisted, but they looked anyway.
After some light browsing, it turned out Bette was right, so she kissed Tina softly on the lips, held her, and looked into her eyes. “Baby … I love you. No matter what happens with all of this, there’s no one for me but you. Okay? I just want her in jail where she belongs. Please don’t react to what she says to you. She’s restrained so we don’t have cause to hurt her. She’s insane, T … just please keep calm until I come back. I’ll be five minutes at the most.”
Bette jogged off out the door, and Tina solemnly walked to the tiny bedroom to simply stand in the doorway and stare at the woman who hadn’t even been trying to escape her bonds.
Sophia remained seated in the same uncomfortable place on the floor, just waiting. If things went poorly – exactly as it was working out – she had to be caught. It was the perfect sense of security, and if she was brought in with ties – the ties she knew her Bette would spot – there was no excuse to shoot her or harm her. She would come in easily. She had a plan. Sophia always had a plan.
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Holy fuck, that crazy bitch, how the fuck did she know they are going. Lol, someone need to watch her and lock her in forever lol. Thanks for the story and hope to see you soon
Lol no lock and key…tina should have just put her out of her misery cuz the only good crazy bitch is a dead crazy bitch lord what a rollercoaster.
A very suspenseful story that kept us on the edge of our seats! Great story to welcome in the new site. I am a huge fan and have read everything you have written. I hope we will have a new story from you very soon. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and unique perspectives with your loyal readers.!
Wow GR, you certainly have proven that you can do almost every genre of writing there is out there. I can totally see this as a movie honestly. It’s that good!
I’m not normally one for thrillers and such but you drew me in right from the beginning and I just couldn’t leave, even when it started to get scary!
Thanks so much for this brilliant piece of work, I love how you delved into the mind of Sophia as well as the reactions and feelings of Bette and Tina!
Wow. This ending really surprised me!
You’re great twist at the end.
I thought that the end will be happy. the stalker now changed?
so you can continue what I’m waiting :-)
Oh GR even at the end of the story there is still suspense going! What a thrill end!
Surprising end,amazing.Thank you and please continue writing.
Spooky, thanks enjoyed it
when I see the end of this story, I nearly shout out “WHAT” in the middle of the night……….
You are good at writing a suspense story just like any other genre you already wrote!!!
hope can see ur stories soon, and thank u!!
great story
great story. I love most of your stories.
That was certainly a creepy ending. Thanks!
Haha! okay, that was fun. I could almost hear the screechy violin music from Psycho right at the end. Thanks for the ride, sorry it’s over. Guess I’ll get back in line and reread the whole thing in one sitting. I know you are expanding your styles and genres, but a really juicy and dark kink, heavy on the discipline, would really, really make my day, month, year…so, pretty please!?
Thanks for that delicious spooky story. An amazing twist in the end. I was not expecting that! Can we see a sequel with Schizo Sophia back to torment Tina and Bette?
What a crazy ending to a great story! Creeptastic! Can’t wait to read your next story and I’m with BenMac on her request.w
WHAT, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Great ending! Thanks for sharing…I am also with BenMac on her request :)
OMG that’s one crazy bitch..
She is so creepy!
LOVED EACH CHAPTER.
MY CONGRATULATIONS GRINDRIGHT.
What a twist at the end. Wasn’t expecting that. What an awesome story. Love the twists and the suspense. Can’t wait for more stories.
OMG!! *****!!!
What a story!!
Thanks GR! I don’t really like the end :-/ but this another great story from you! Thanks again for sharing! :-)
I’ve just read the stories you wrote that were still new to me and reread the others. And I just want to say that I love them all! An incredible array of genres, styles and plots. Thank you for your amazing contribution to this site!
This was so good.. And I loved how you ended it.. The ultimate cliffhanger… I would love to see what could or would happen next