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    The Fast and Fevered Fall – Chapter Four

    Story written on November 5, 2006 by citygirl75.
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    Maybe it just wasn’t that important.

    “This time I really should get going.” said Sara, setting her coffee cup on the counter.

    “Yeah, and I should be getting to work.”

    “I guess I’ll see you around.”

    “You will, maybe even tonight.”

    They both walked towards the door which Tina opened so that her guest could leave. This time it was Tina’s turn to stand in a doorway as she watched Sara disappear down the hallway. She briefly considered blowing off work all together. She was in no fit state to be there anyway. Even after her shower she could still smell the faint traces of alcohol and her head still felt like it was going to explode.

    Tina gently shut the door and leant against it. She shut her eyes tightly, not a single trace of light being able to get in. She felt the tears beginning to well up. Every time she thought of Angelica, which was every day, she felt tears sting her eyes. She missed her daughter so much and yet she knew that Angelica was better off where she was, with a person who was together enough to look after her in the way that she deserved. How she wished that she was that person.

    Tina walked back into the living room and sat on the couch. She picked up the remote for the TV and started flicking through the channels. Maybe that’s what she needed a few hours watching daytime TV. If she could just numb her brain from everything that was happening then maybe thing would seem a lot better. She settled on a news channel. There was nothing like the news to put your own troubles in perspective. Tina watched through the headlines, a war in far of place, a shooting in the next neighbourhood to hers, then pictures of Hollywood as they switched to the entertainment news.

    Her mind went back to how she used to drive past the Hollywood sign everyday when she drove to work. The old Ford that her father had given to her as a present for getting the job at Alphaville. Her new friends at the studio may have laughed at it but Tina maintained that it was a classic. When that car finally went to the scrap yard in the sky Bette convinced her to buy a foreign car, better economy, better fuel emissions was Bette’s story. Tina laughed at this as Bette was more enamoured with her car than she had ever known any other woman to be, and it had nothing to be with the miles per gallon. It all had to do with how it looked. Things were better then but the memory forced Tina off of the couch and into the kitchen. She opened the refrigerator door and reached for the half empty bottle. Tina knew that she wasn’t going to work today.

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    6. This sounds like Tina is at the very bottom of life. It breaks my heart to think that she can’t get her shit together enough to be with Angelica. Life shouldn’t have to be so difficult, ah but then again I must be dreaming…What a nightmare this chapter is on so many level. But the writing is excellent, thankyou. I have to also say that each time I see your posting I shiver wondering what your serving us now…but I have to read.

    8. Don’t always comment, but always read your stories. This one is so intriguing, I’m anxious to see the next post! FIlling in these blanks will certainly be entertaining. This is an interesting side of Tina. Thanks for writing!

    9. It’s interesting to see Tina in a position of despair for once rather than Bette… this is a very intriguing story; I can’t wait to see where you’re going with this!

    14. such a depressing story…i hope angelica is with bette…tina is soooo down…i need some hope and happiness for B&T, i hope this story will get there…i’m reading either way though, it’s very intriguing

    17. Excellent as always. Tina’s state of mind is rather heartbreaking, I don’t know how she really got to this stage,but hopefully you’ll flesh out this tale. You know you’re good when you leave such an impact on your readers…everyone wants to know HOW!

    18. Wow! Gotta admit I’m kinda depressed. But I want to see where this is going. where’s Bette and Angelica? Any remote possibility that our girls will reunite?

    21. Tina sounds like she desperately needs a friend. She’s certainly not found one at the bottom of a bottle. I quite like this story, depressing as it is. Post soon.

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