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The Fast and Fevered Fall – Chapter Five
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Tina looked out of the passenger door window. The sights of LA rushing past her. The bright lights of the big city flashing before her eyes. She briefly remember her Dad saying how proud he was of her that she had made it in the movie business. Then she thought about how proud he would be of her right now. She was falling in love and couldn’t help herself. She was with someone who she thought that she could be with for a long time, and yet she still hadn’t told her parents. In fact she had been avoiding their calls. They would know that something was different and she wasn’t quite ready to explain why.
“Are you OK?” came the voice from the drivers seat.
“I was just thinking, that’s all.”
“We don’t have to do this tonight. I can wait.”
“I can’t, but that wasn‘t what I was thinking about.” replied Tina, smiling at Bette’s concern that they should do the right thing.
“No?”
“I was thinking about how different my life is now…”
“Because of me?” probed Bette.
“Some of it’s because of you but there are lots of other things. Even though I always dreamed of making it in the film industry I never really thought that I would, and now here I am, driving around LA, with the most beautiful woman I’ve ever met. Life doesn’t get much better than this.”
“I’m glad you feel that way.” said Bette, smiling at the fact that Tina was so happy.
“Sometimes I think I’m too happy, that I’m going to pay for it somewhere down the line.”
“Don’t think like that. You deserve to be happy. I can’t promise that it’s always going to be this good, but I’ll try my best.”
“I know, and I can’t tell you how much that means to me.”
“So are you really OK?”
“Yeah, I’m fine.” confirmed Tina.
Tina went back to looking out the window. All she had thought about for the last few weeks was when her and Bette were going to make love. She thought about it at work, when she was driving, in bed at night. She thought about it all of the time but she still found it difficult to articulate her desire to Bette. It wasn’t that she didn’t trust Bette, she did, more than anyone she had ever met, but there was the fear of the unknown that held her back. Bette was so far ahead of her in this. If Tina thought about how little she knew about making love to a woman and then about how much she presumed Bette knew then she got overwhelmed, and nervous.
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alrighty then, Trying to catch my breath here citygirl, Love your writing
What I wouldn’t give to see this on the screen. Excellent chapter, a nice respite from the heartbreaking but equally great previous ones. Thank you for posting.
Wow, this story is a roller coaster and this is the slow build up the steep hill. And I know that very soon you are going to plung us down the steep slope into hell, pure and simple. But for now thankyou this was a nice delay. Having a hint of what is yet to come is made easier by these precious pages of love and surrender….interdispersed with the harsh reality of where you started this story makes this a lot easier to read. Oh, and thankyou!!
OMG, I don’t know if I’m going to be able to handle, Tina making love to Bette the first time. I’m still trying to catch my breath. DAmn one of these days I’ll learn after the first few lines not to read these at work.
Ditto what honda90 said. The allure of that once beautiful moment in time to trap us in a false sense of contentment..but oh so wonderfully done. Thanks!
Wow, great chapter mate! Enjoy your weekend!!
I’m ignoring the harsh truth that I know is coming, for now, and concentrating on just how incredibly amazing this was…
You really are building this up, I’m getting nervous of what you have in store for us, will our bums be sore when you pull the rug from under us. I really like this story. Thank you.
Ahh, happier times. I run out of nice things to say, so I’ll go with a tried-and-trusted comment, and please believe that I’m saying it with proper sincerity. “Nicely done, post soon please.” Really, please do. Cheers!
I can’t keep reading these stories at work…ya’ll are killing me…amazing City….amazing!
You write so beautiful citygirl. This story is tragically beautiful. It touches my heart. Love this anvil that Tina says: “Sometimes I think I’m too happy, that I’m going to pay for it somewhere down the line.” Your very clever!! Thanks for posting!
Is my first comment on this beautiful story the NC-17 chapter? I feel so naughty. I’m almost dreading what’s next for Tina, but what the hell. Great story, great chapter, and please post soon.
Who needs experience when love and lust are in place? I seem to recall a corny old song about “doin’ what comes naturally”. Not that Tina’s a hayseed or anything. You go, girl.
finding the woman of your dreams. did that this year. how cool is that. thanks
So nice to return from a vacation have your writing to read extending the joy just a little bit longer. : )
I wish that your story would remain this content and happy. You always end up breaking my heart and leaving our girls without the other.
awesome- love your story.
great job with this story, and a great chapter, but i think it just got a lot hotter in here!!!
Awesome!!
Your stories always break my heart but I just can’t not read them. They are absolutely amazing! Maybe you will give us an ending where our girls are together. ; )
Damn that was hot and awesome love it. Please post soon please, thanks!