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The Fast and Fevered Fall – Chapter Six
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Tina heard the call disconnect. She looked at the phone contemplating her next move. She could go back to the dinner and make small talk with the man sitting to her right or she could meet Helena at the pool and…Tina wasn’t even sure what was going to happen if she met Helena but her entire body was telling her that this was the better option of the two.
Tina descended the steps towards the pool, keeping her eyes trained on Helena. There was something incredibly attractive about the way that she was reclining on the poolside chair. The poise and elegance made Tina’s heart beat a little faster. Faster than she wanted but there was nothing that she could do about it. Bette briefly went through her mind. What would she think of what about Tina was about to do? Would she even care? Tina shook her head to clear her mind. This was no time to think about events that were in the past. Right now she should think about what was in front of her.
“You know I was so fucking bored up there. You were the only think that wasn’t boring me to tears.”
Tina sat down on the chair, looking at Helena, trying to figure out whether this woman was for real. She seemed genuine and yet there was something in the back of her mind that told her to be careful. The voice in the back of her mind though, was currently being overwhelmed by the need to be close to someone. To be desired.
“Come on. Let’s go for a swim.” said Helena, a teasing look in her eye.
“I don’t have a bathing suit.” whispered Tina, blushing slightly at Helena’s forwardness.
“And?” asked Helena, getting closer to Tina.
Tina didn’t know what to say to this. Her mind was racing with possibilities. Was this beautiful woman really coming on to her in this way? Helena slid off her jacket, her breast clearly visible through the sheer material. Tina couldn’t help but look and felt the hitch in her breath as she focused on what was before her.
“You’re not timid…are you?”
“No I’m not timid.”
“Is it because of Bette?” asked Helena, wondering what was causing Tina to hesitate.
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Would it have been different if she had found out who called? Maybe it would but you’re the girl with the answers.
Jeej! yay! first!!
I love how you’re going into all the elements that brought Tina to this moment. Fantastic, as usual. (Laurel is, indeed, a goddess… I just don’t like Tina [on the show] very much anymore, a distinction I think a lot of people have a problem with)
Indeed she is, LH rocks,rules are there to be broken. Looking forward to reading what you have in store for Tina. Thank you
Welcome back! Hope you had a great time at the convention. Can we get a full report? Even though we know how this scene played out on the show, I kept hoping you would swoop in and change it :). Your writng is exquiste as always, thanks.
LAUREL IS indeed A GODDESS. Thanks CG. Always excellent. So Tina’s thinking about her days with Helena now? Very Interesting. Now according to those very specific rules,why shouldn’t the baby be written in fics? She’s so intuitive that little girl, and very charming in most fics. LOL. PPS. I love this fic.
Rules of Fanfic, you forgot No 6 – writing eases stress… Great one mate!
Your writing is always worth reading. : )
CG…You write this beautifully but this series of scenes always hurts my TiBette heart.
This was a very sad and heartwrenching scene to relived. The hell with the rules..go with #5 :) Thanks!
Good chapter and I like rules #5 and let see whats next, thanks!
Definitely, Laurel Holloman is a goddess. She does Tina so well and I love both her and Bette. Too bad you do not like them together.
C-Gal, It was great to see the motivation behind Tina’s actions in this moment. Helena measured the situation well and help Tina cast off the remains of her relationship with Bette. All in all this was a cathartic event that liberated Tina. More please because your writing is wonderful ans both the conversations and descriptions bring the story to life. Can’t wait to see where ou lead me to next. Your Loyal Fan.
I loved meeting you! You are one amazing woman. BTW, in case I forgot to mention this to you, Laurel RULES! Remember “you” control the Tina legacy :o)
Love the way you wrote the scene. Excellent as always!
this is depressing to relive again…Laurel rules and Tina will be okay…i think TiBetters will be happier soon…and i think this story should have happy ending as well, please?
I agree that rules are meant to be broken. I love how you are writing Tina and showing us how she falls. Thanks,