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The Fast and Fevered Fall – Chapter Six
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“I don’t know.” admitted Tina.
Again there was a small silence. Tina looked down, trying to slow her heart rate down to a pace where she felt in control. She could feel Helena’s eyes on her. Concentrating on her, like she was the most important thing in the world to Helena at that moment in time. Tina kept thinking that this should feel incredible, and it didn’t. It felt nerve racking and intense.
“I’ve never done this before.” said Tina, in a small voice.
“Well, that’s good. I like the idea of being your first.”
Helena got up from the chair, moving deliberately around Tina, as close as she could get without actually touching her.
“You know…I wanted to sleep with you from the first moment I saw you.”
“I find that hard to believe.” said Tina, shaking her head in disbelief at Helena’s words.
“This is what I find the most beautiful.”
Helena knelt down to caress Tina’s stomach, her eyes wide with awe. Tina looked down to watch Helena, loving the feeling of Helena’s hand touching her skin. How many times had she imagined that it would be Bette who would worship her during her pregnancy and now, here she was, with another woman, who she hardly knew. There seemed to be no reasoning behind this fundamental shift in her life, at least, none that she could make sense of.
Helena pulled Tina’s dress over her head and helped her stand. Standing there, exposed, Tina looked around to see if they were alone. Suddenly she was brought back to what she was doing by the feel of Helena’s hands touching the now bare skin of her stomach, running her fingers up to feel the skin on Tina’s face. Tina looked up at Helena and their lips met. A slow gentle kiss, an introduction to what was to come. Tina briefly thought back to the first time she had kissed Bette, how soft it had been, and how it had been so unexpected. This was different, she knew what was coming and yet it was exhilarating all the same.
Tina felt Helena’s hand reach around to the clasp of her bra. The anticipation overwhelming the anxiety that she felt. Helena discarded Tina’s bra on the ground and ran the tips of her fingers down the valley of Tina’s breasts and then across her stomach again. Tina gave a shiver of desire in response to Helena’s attentions. They started to kiss again, this time deeper, intensely. Just as the kiss starts to get out of control Helena’s pulled away, and started to kneel down so that she could kiss Tina’s stomach, running her tongue across the skin as Tina sighed in pleasure.
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Would it have been different if she had found out who called? Maybe it would but you’re the girl with the answers.
Jeej! yay! first!!
I love how you’re going into all the elements that brought Tina to this moment. Fantastic, as usual. (Laurel is, indeed, a goddess… I just don’t like Tina [on the show] very much anymore, a distinction I think a lot of people have a problem with)
Indeed she is, LH rocks,rules are there to be broken. Looking forward to reading what you have in store for Tina. Thank you
Welcome back! Hope you had a great time at the convention. Can we get a full report? Even though we know how this scene played out on the show, I kept hoping you would swoop in and change it :). Your writng is exquiste as always, thanks.
LAUREL IS indeed A GODDESS. Thanks CG. Always excellent. So Tina’s thinking about her days with Helena now? Very Interesting. Now according to those very specific rules,why shouldn’t the baby be written in fics? She’s so intuitive that little girl, and very charming in most fics. LOL. PPS. I love this fic.
Rules of Fanfic, you forgot No 6 – writing eases stress… Great one mate!
Your writing is always worth reading. : )
CG…You write this beautifully but this series of scenes always hurts my TiBette heart.
This was a very sad and heartwrenching scene to relived. The hell with the rules..go with #5 :) Thanks!
Good chapter and I like rules #5 and let see whats next, thanks!
Definitely, Laurel Holloman is a goddess. She does Tina so well and I love both her and Bette. Too bad you do not like them together.
C-Gal, It was great to see the motivation behind Tina’s actions in this moment. Helena measured the situation well and help Tina cast off the remains of her relationship with Bette. All in all this was a cathartic event that liberated Tina. More please because your writing is wonderful ans both the conversations and descriptions bring the story to life. Can’t wait to see where ou lead me to next. Your Loyal Fan.
I loved meeting you! You are one amazing woman. BTW, in case I forgot to mention this to you, Laurel RULES! Remember “you” control the Tina legacy :o)
Love the way you wrote the scene. Excellent as always!
this is depressing to relive again…Laurel rules and Tina will be okay…i think TiBetters will be happier soon…and i think this story should have happy ending as well, please?
I agree that rules are meant to be broken. I love how you are writing Tina and showing us how she falls. Thanks,