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    The Fast and Fevered Fall – Chapter Twenty Eight

    Story written on January 9, 2007 by citygirl75.
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    If I’m honest, nervous as hell.

    “Hey girl, this is a nice surprise.” said Kit, pulling Tina into a hug that Tina was powerless to resist.

    “It’s so good to see you.” replied Tina, as she was released from Kit’s grasp.

    “Can I leave you with Kit while I have a look around?” asked Helena, grinning at Kit’s reception of Tina.

    “Don’t worry Helena, I’ll look after her.” said Kit, shooing Helena away.

    “If you’re sure?” asked Helena of Tina.

    “I think we’ll be fine.” said Tina, smiling at Helena’s reluctance to let her fend for herself.

    Tina and Kit both watched Helena walk to the other side of the room. Tina was grateful for Helena’s support in everything that she did but Tina was beginning to realise the importance of making some small steps of her own, on her own. She turned to Kit, as they started to walk around the main gallery hall.

    “Have you seen Bette yet?” asked Kit, cutting to the chase.

    “No, we only just got here, and to be honest I almost chickened out at the last minute.”

    “Why?”

    “It feels like a lot of pressure, being here, knowing that everyone I once knew is going to be here, waiting to see how far I’ve fallen.”

    “No one is judging you. We want to help you, and I would be lying if I said that one person I know hasn’t been a lot happier since you reappeared.”

    “It’s about time I started taking my responsibilities as Angelica’s mother seriously.”

    “I wasn’t talking about Angelica.”

    Tina focused on the piece of art that was in front of her. She knew that Kit was talking about Bette but didn’t know how to acknowledge the fact that she felt closer to Bette now than she had done since Angelica was born. They had seemed to have reached an understanding that they were meant to be in each other’s lives, it was just to what extent that was the only stumbling block.

    “I’ve missed her, and I can’t even begin to describe how much it’s meant to me that she’s taken time out of her day, everyday, to come and spend time with me and Angelica.”

    “She loves you.” stated Kit, getting straight to the point.

    “I don’t think so. I think that she remembers how much that we loved each other and both of us are far enough away from that time to be able to treasure it as something amazing that happened to both of us.”

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    1. That was like… I’m speechless. I really didn’t expect that to happen so soon, for them to try starting again. That was so tenderly done, and really so well-written… I’m just like, really pleased, sitting here with this little goofy smile on my face. So yeah, I’ll shut up now and just wrap up by saying that was a great chapter, citygirl.

    2. So well written and so sensitive to the subject. Bette is right: one day at a time. Sometimes one minute at a time. Thanks this story–it’s a tough subject to write about. Lin

    3. You could end it there and I’d be happy, knowing that they were going to try, really try….now pls don’t burst my bubble and throw something different at me…..Please!!!

    4. Absolutely Stunning! I totally loved it! Do you read stories sometimes and wish you had written a certain sentence from it – I do and I did – “Just wanting to revel in the silence that this moment was bringing her after the noise of her loneliness…”

    9. I so agree with Jobadge. That was the one sentence that leapt from the page and made me say “damn, that was good”. I did wish I had written it but then again I’d have to write a story. And I don’t see that happening anytime soon. So I’ll just plagiarize. ;-)Keep’em coming. It’s wonderful.

    11. So nice the way you’ve woven past and present together to bring us to this point and some hope for the future after dredging us through a cesspool of a past. Well that, may be a bit harsh towards the bartender, she seemed OK, but you know what I mean. So are we just going forward from here?

    18. As always, this and the previous chapter has been marvolous. I thought this was the story we talked about. I eagerly await more from you. You always seem to leave me on the edge of my seat! Good job.

    19. Thanks for posting City…Bette has such a beautiful heart. She is showing Tina that she is there for her…that even though this is technically her night…she is there for her woman. You captured this so well. I am sure they are still gonna take it slow…but at least they know they are both going slow in the right direction.

    22. IM STUNN! this was !!! im speechless.. om glad tina telling bette about the things going on and bette listeing and putting her family 1st.p.p.s. great job

    23. Damn awesome, that was beautiful and love it. This is what we waiting for and happy that they are back together again and can’t wait to see more. Post soon please, thanks!

    24. CityGirl, That was brilliant. I loved the attitude of all the gals in their desire to protect Bette and Tina while trying to softly push them together again. Helena was a star; supporting Tina yst pushing her towards recovery. Kit just said it like it is and gave Tina some much needed advice as how Bette was reacting to this recent reunion. Finally Bette demonstrated how much she had changed her priorities and was now just there for Tina even though other previously mire pressing engagements were occurring stimultaneously in the gallery. Bette’s gift was the perfect final note is wiping the slate clean and also looking towards writing a future together. Adorable and hopeful. Thank you for putting a smile on my face for the rest of the day. Now if only Season 4 could do the same. Yes, I do live in hope. Much gratitude for this delightful and inspirational story. You are a talented and skilled writer. Your Loyal Fan.

    25. Holy fricken crap, that was amazing!I truly believe that was the best chappy yet.I pretty much had tears of joy!You could feel their emotions.Well done City. I guess I needed to be patient, cause things are definatly moving foreward! PPS

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