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The Island – Chapter 21
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The only issue the women had was their undeniable attraction to each other. Alice was trying hard to respect Dana’s wishes and let her set the pace of the relationship. Dana was trying hard to stick to her guns. It became more and more difficult as she got closer to being recovered from her injuries and she became increasingly comfortable with her new job duties.
Alice and Dana had worked out some “rules” to try to keep themselves in check in their close quarters.
It started with Dana showing up all sweaty after one of her workouts. It ran over a bit and she wanted to check in with Alice before she hit the shower.
Alice did a double-take when she saw Dana saunter into the room. Her body was glistening and her chest was heaving. Alice shut hers eyes tightly and tried to not think about jumping Dana right then and there.
“Hey, Alice. Do you need anything before I hit the shower?” Dana asked — oblivious to Alice’s fidgeting discomfort.
“Uh. No. Go. Um. Shower.” Dana gave Alice an odd look, but, turned and left to get cleaned up. She was back in 20 minutes. She was carrying a stack of correspondence that had accumulated during the day and was shuffling through them.
“OK, Alice. I just need you to check a couple of these…” Dana finally looked up at Alice to find her still sitting with her eyes tightly shut. Dana quickly put down the papers and went around the desk to get to Alice. “What’s wrong? Do you need me to call Brad?” Dana was reaching for her phone and her hand was covered by Alice’s.
“I’m fine.” Alice gave out an exhale and pulled her hand from Dana’s. She also opened her eyes and found herself looking into Dana’s concerned gaze. “Can you just grab a chair? Maybe that one?” Alice pointed over to the chair on the far side of her desk. Dana sat and waited for Alice to explain what was going on.
“Dane… Uh. I need to ask you a favor.”
“Anything, Alice.”
“I’m trying very hard to respect your wishes for taking things slow, but, you coming in all hot and sweaty makes it…difficult.” As Alice was talking, Dana got progressively redder, slumped down further in the chair and dropped her eyes to the floor.
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Hahahaha you cracked me up with the last line. Maybe I’m just being stupid but I found it funny. I was happily surprised by your ‘speedy’ post. I didn’t even commented on the last one yet. Anyway, this one was great as always. LMAO on the rules “number 43!” haha. Sorry, just being silly today.. I swear, no alcohol :) Am I making sense? Probably not :D PPS?
LMAO AT SPRAY TAN!!!!!!!!!!!! Soo funnnnnny. Hmm i sense that Shane coming into the picture could be umm interesting expierence. And am i first? I wonder where Anionayos at..Hmmm Victory again, just like Dana and her cast removalNesS, yay! Excellent update Goose as always, thank you so much.
Ok soo im not first but its ok. Forgot to mention the ‘Rules’…greatness, had to have myself a chuckle while i was reading.
I can’t wait to see what Shane’s advice will be. Great chapter. Keep it up.
Only Number 43? I’m still laughing! And who wouldn’t like to help dan with her “inexperience?” All volunteers may line up behind me. LOL Marvelous as usual Goose. PPS
Love this Alice and Dana where so perfect together. The silly thing that they do. thanks
Me, me, me… I am right behind you SG. LMAO. Who wouldn’t want to help out D. MaGoose, from now on, I will never look at eclairs the same again. lol. & #43. (more laughs) I like the way you weaved in the Rules of Unattraction. That’s very clever. The beach scene again was fantastic. Can never get enough of that! Please do not feel pressured to bring them together immediately. The story is unfolding nicely and it is not choppy at all. Shane = “the big guns”, hahaha!!! Thank you very much again and like everyone else, I enjoyed this update tremendously. And thanks for explaining the whole PA thing. D certainly got a great job with unbelievable benefits which we can only dream of. Excellent job!
Guess #44 is no making out on the beach :)..yey, I was gonna sweetly beg for Shane to visit…yeehaw, the big gun!!!
Great chapter. I cannot wait for shane to come back into the picture… she’ll set everyone straight. akshunjack- you may have won this battle… but I shall win the war.
OoOoO Quick post, I like :D lol. And wat another great post :) Althou i have to say i think ur a bit ofa tease! lol U purposely put tht Dana had her restrictions lifted so we wud think tht maybe … well u know lol. However it was reli sweet and i loved it and u had some hilarious lines in there “Number 43” was probs my fave lol. Cant wait to see Shane view on it and cant wait for more THNK U :) PPS xxx
LOL MG u did it again,I just cracked up on this “Dana walked into the room and saw Alice in those pants. Her eyes swept up-and-down and then looked straight at Alice. “Number 43.” She croaked out as she left the room quickly” I did the HDD after I read that and stopped laughing! I just love this story,
Crap I accidently hit the leave comment button and I was not ready too LOL anyhoos Thanks again for the excellent update!!! PPD
that was awesome!! great writing :)
that was great but dana is going a bit so even for me I am one of those that need their fix for alice and dana but I can wait a bit longer as it is not all about the making love but also how u get there great update as always I love every bit pps and yes it was quick enough for me thanks
I don’t know how I didn’t comment on the last one. I read it, and remember thinking that I needed to comment, and then I guess I just never did. I’m sorry! I loved this one as much as I love all the others. The story is just fantastic and really cute. I’m glad they’re taking it slow, it makes sense given the nature of Dana’s job and the fact that it’s still a new dynamic for the two of them. Glad Shane will be sharing her expertise with Alice. lol. Fantastic as always! Thanks!
LOL! I was laughing throughout the whole chapter. I have to say that your writing is getting better and better. Really, that was an amazing job. No. 43, LOL. That was quite a good one. Do you have any rules, MaGoose? I love happy Danish and can’t wait to see when they finally finally get it going on. But let them take it slow. I do enjoy this story very much. Thanks for writing, MaGoose. This was truly amazing. Please more of it….