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The Island – Chapter 21
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D –
I thought you might need this.
– A
Dana was grinning as she opened the package. She laughed out loud when she saw the bottle of spray tan.
The day finally came when Dana was given the all-clear to resume physical activity and she wanted to celebrate. After dinner that night, Dana asked Alice to go for a walk on the beach with her. She brought along the blanket, bottle of champagne and two glasses.
The women settled into one of their favorite spots and Dana set about opening the champagne. She was able to get it open quickly, but, the cork went flying. Dana insisted on tracking the cork down — she didn’t want to leave any trash on their beach.
The cork was quickly found and the champagne poured. They clinked glasses and took a sip while looking in each other’s eyes. They moved together as if being drawn and their lips touched. The kiss was brief and they broke apart quickly. Dana didn’t break eye contact with Alice as she grabbed the two glasses and plunged the glass stems in the sand. She then reached over to pull Alice into her lap and started to kiss her thoroughly. Alice put up no resistance as she melted into Dana and infused her kisses with all the passion she had been suppressing.
They kissed for what felt like hours as the moon shown down on them and the waves lapped the shore. Dana felt Alice’s hand start to move under her shirt in the back and Dana started to taper off on the kisses.
“What’s wrong, Dana?” Alice asked with concern and then added with panic as she moved back out of Dana’s arms. “Did I hurt you again?”
“No, honey. Not at all!” She reached to take both Alice’s hands in hers and brought each up to her lips for a kiss but kept her eyes lowered.
Alice understood. Dana wasn’t ready. While Alice was frustrated she knew she couldn’t — and didn’t — want to push Dana. Alice reached over and got their glasses and handed Dana hers with a smile. “Let’s just enjoy the beautiful evening, shall we?”
Dana smiled back shyly. “Thanks, Al.” They were quiet for a bit until Alice spoke up.
“I meant to ask… If you are up for it, I would like you to come back as my sparring partner.”
“I’d love to. I’ll probably be a little rusty at first.”
“Frankly, you’ll be better than Sam. She is doing a horrible job as a sparring partner right now. She is so afraid of hurting me. I dropped her six times today.” The girls shared a laugh and then spent a while sipping their drinks and sitting in companionable silence. Once the champagne was done, they walked slowly back to the house. Dana gave Alice a sweet kiss before she headed off to her room.
Alice couldn’t sleep. She had been tossing and turning since she got into her big, lonely bed. How could she move their relationship along without pushing Dana or scaring her off? She knew the job was only part of it. Dana was still hung up on her lack of experience with women. Alice would be more than happy to help her with that…
Shit. With those thoughts in her mind, Alice knew she would never get to sleep. She needed a plan. She needed advice. She needed to call in the big guns.
She needed Shane.
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Hahahaha you cracked me up with the last line. Maybe I’m just being stupid but I found it funny. I was happily surprised by your ‘speedy’ post. I didn’t even commented on the last one yet. Anyway, this one was great as always. LMAO on the rules “number 43!” haha. Sorry, just being silly today.. I swear, no alcohol :) Am I making sense? Probably not :D PPS?
LMAO AT SPRAY TAN!!!!!!!!!!!! Soo funnnnnny. Hmm i sense that Shane coming into the picture could be umm interesting expierence. And am i first? I wonder where Anionayos at..Hmmm Victory again, just like Dana and her cast removalNesS, yay! Excellent update Goose as always, thank you so much.
Ok soo im not first but its ok. Forgot to mention the ‘Rules’…greatness, had to have myself a chuckle while i was reading.
I can’t wait to see what Shane’s advice will be. Great chapter. Keep it up.
Only Number 43? I’m still laughing! And who wouldn’t like to help dan with her “inexperience?” All volunteers may line up behind me. LOL Marvelous as usual Goose. PPS
Love this Alice and Dana where so perfect together. The silly thing that they do. thanks
Me, me, me… I am right behind you SG. LMAO. Who wouldn’t want to help out D. MaGoose, from now on, I will never look at eclairs the same again. lol. & #43. (more laughs) I like the way you weaved in the Rules of Unattraction. That’s very clever. The beach scene again was fantastic. Can never get enough of that! Please do not feel pressured to bring them together immediately. The story is unfolding nicely and it is not choppy at all. Shane = “the big guns”, hahaha!!! Thank you very much again and like everyone else, I enjoyed this update tremendously. And thanks for explaining the whole PA thing. D certainly got a great job with unbelievable benefits which we can only dream of. Excellent job!
Guess #44 is no making out on the beach :)..yey, I was gonna sweetly beg for Shane to visit…yeehaw, the big gun!!!
Great chapter. I cannot wait for shane to come back into the picture… she’ll set everyone straight. akshunjack- you may have won this battle… but I shall win the war.
OoOoO Quick post, I like :D lol. And wat another great post :) Althou i have to say i think ur a bit ofa tease! lol U purposely put tht Dana had her restrictions lifted so we wud think tht maybe … well u know lol. However it was reli sweet and i loved it and u had some hilarious lines in there “Number 43” was probs my fave lol. Cant wait to see Shane view on it and cant wait for more THNK U :) PPS xxx
LOL MG u did it again,I just cracked up on this “Dana walked into the room and saw Alice in those pants. Her eyes swept up-and-down and then looked straight at Alice. “Number 43.” She croaked out as she left the room quickly” I did the HDD after I read that and stopped laughing! I just love this story,
Crap I accidently hit the leave comment button and I was not ready too LOL anyhoos Thanks again for the excellent update!!! PPD
that was awesome!! great writing :)
that was great but dana is going a bit so even for me I am one of those that need their fix for alice and dana but I can wait a bit longer as it is not all about the making love but also how u get there great update as always I love every bit pps and yes it was quick enough for me thanks
I don’t know how I didn’t comment on the last one. I read it, and remember thinking that I needed to comment, and then I guess I just never did. I’m sorry! I loved this one as much as I love all the others. The story is just fantastic and really cute. I’m glad they’re taking it slow, it makes sense given the nature of Dana’s job and the fact that it’s still a new dynamic for the two of them. Glad Shane will be sharing her expertise with Alice. lol. Fantastic as always! Thanks!
LOL! I was laughing throughout the whole chapter. I have to say that your writing is getting better and better. Really, that was an amazing job. No. 43, LOL. That was quite a good one. Do you have any rules, MaGoose? I love happy Danish and can’t wait to see when they finally finally get it going on. But let them take it slow. I do enjoy this story very much. Thanks for writing, MaGoose. This was truly amazing. Please more of it….