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The Island – Chapter 21
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“Sorry, Alice.” Alice could tell she wasn’t saying she was sorry for coming in sweaty — she was sorry that she still felt the need to go slow.
“Dana… Honey… It’s OK. I’m just thinking… Well maybe we need some rules.”
Dana looked up with a confused look. “Rules?”
“Yeah. Some… Rules of Unattraction.” Alice said with a smile. She was pleased to see Dana’s answering smile. “Rule one is that you don’t surprise me like that and come in all hot and sweaty.”
“OK. Rule two is that you can’t wear those blouses you have that seem to… cling to you in some place and fall off you in others.” Alice gave a knowing grin. She purposely wore those shirts after the first time she saw Dana checking her out in one.
“All right. And we can add new rules as needed. Agreed?”
“Agreed.” Dana answered with a smile.
The list of rules grew quickly. It got to the point where when either of them had another “rule” to add, they would just call out the next number.
Alice was trying out a new pair of pants that Shane sent her. They were made by one of her many companies. She liked to use her company’s products as much as possible to stay in touch with her far-flung empire. The pants looked tight, but, were actually quite comfortable. Alice was impressed.
Dana walked into the room and saw Alice in those pants. Her eyes swept up-and-down and then looked straight at Alice. “Number 43.” She croaked out as she left the room quickly.
Dana skipped her regular workout one day to go see Brad. She finally got the cast removed and was elated. Brad was very pleased with her progress, but, wanted to check her out one more time in two weeks before lifting all physical restrictions.
She practically skipped back to her suite. The cast was a reminder of the beating and she was thankful to finally have that weight lifted. Her arm did look odd. It seemed thinner than the other arm and was very pale. She had some work to do to build it back up.
When Dana got to her desk, she noticed a wrapped box. She reached out and took off the card.
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Hahahaha you cracked me up with the last line. Maybe I’m just being stupid but I found it funny. I was happily surprised by your ‘speedy’ post. I didn’t even commented on the last one yet. Anyway, this one was great as always. LMAO on the rules “number 43!” haha. Sorry, just being silly today.. I swear, no alcohol :) Am I making sense? Probably not :D PPS?
LMAO AT SPRAY TAN!!!!!!!!!!!! Soo funnnnnny. Hmm i sense that Shane coming into the picture could be umm interesting expierence. And am i first? I wonder where Anionayos at..Hmmm Victory again, just like Dana and her cast removalNesS, yay! Excellent update Goose as always, thank you so much.
Ok soo im not first but its ok. Forgot to mention the ‘Rules’…greatness, had to have myself a chuckle while i was reading.
I can’t wait to see what Shane’s advice will be. Great chapter. Keep it up.
Only Number 43? I’m still laughing! And who wouldn’t like to help dan with her “inexperience?” All volunteers may line up behind me. LOL Marvelous as usual Goose. PPS
Love this Alice and Dana where so perfect together. The silly thing that they do. thanks
Me, me, me… I am right behind you SG. LMAO. Who wouldn’t want to help out D. MaGoose, from now on, I will never look at eclairs the same again. lol. & #43. (more laughs) I like the way you weaved in the Rules of Unattraction. That’s very clever. The beach scene again was fantastic. Can never get enough of that! Please do not feel pressured to bring them together immediately. The story is unfolding nicely and it is not choppy at all. Shane = “the big guns”, hahaha!!! Thank you very much again and like everyone else, I enjoyed this update tremendously. And thanks for explaining the whole PA thing. D certainly got a great job with unbelievable benefits which we can only dream of. Excellent job!
Guess #44 is no making out on the beach :)..yey, I was gonna sweetly beg for Shane to visit…yeehaw, the big gun!!!
Great chapter. I cannot wait for shane to come back into the picture… she’ll set everyone straight. akshunjack- you may have won this battle… but I shall win the war.
OoOoO Quick post, I like :D lol. And wat another great post :) Althou i have to say i think ur a bit ofa tease! lol U purposely put tht Dana had her restrictions lifted so we wud think tht maybe … well u know lol. However it was reli sweet and i loved it and u had some hilarious lines in there “Number 43” was probs my fave lol. Cant wait to see Shane view on it and cant wait for more THNK U :) PPS xxx
LOL MG u did it again,I just cracked up on this “Dana walked into the room and saw Alice in those pants. Her eyes swept up-and-down and then looked straight at Alice. “Number 43.” She croaked out as she left the room quickly” I did the HDD after I read that and stopped laughing! I just love this story,
Crap I accidently hit the leave comment button and I was not ready too LOL anyhoos Thanks again for the excellent update!!! PPD
that was awesome!! great writing :)
that was great but dana is going a bit so even for me I am one of those that need their fix for alice and dana but I can wait a bit longer as it is not all about the making love but also how u get there great update as always I love every bit pps and yes it was quick enough for me thanks
I don’t know how I didn’t comment on the last one. I read it, and remember thinking that I needed to comment, and then I guess I just never did. I’m sorry! I loved this one as much as I love all the others. The story is just fantastic and really cute. I’m glad they’re taking it slow, it makes sense given the nature of Dana’s job and the fact that it’s still a new dynamic for the two of them. Glad Shane will be sharing her expertise with Alice. lol. Fantastic as always! Thanks!
LOL! I was laughing throughout the whole chapter. I have to say that your writing is getting better and better. Really, that was an amazing job. No. 43, LOL. That was quite a good one. Do you have any rules, MaGoose? I love happy Danish and can’t wait to see when they finally finally get it going on. But let them take it slow. I do enjoy this story very much. Thanks for writing, MaGoose. This was truly amazing. Please more of it….