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The Journey 8
Shane : “OK Bette, enough with the attitude, you are my friend too”
Bette : “Jesus, Shane, I’m sorry. I know sometimes I am an arsehole”
Shane just smiles. I continue “I don’t know what made her come by, she was here when I got up.”
Shane : “what did you talk about” (thinking, I know why she came by, Porter my friend you maybe smart but matters of the heart are not your fortay)
Bette : “It wasn’t that comfortable, I have to tell you. Mostly we talked about
Shane : “That’s good right, you guys can sort that out, agree on it.”
Bette : “I don’t know that it is sorted but it wasn’t all bad.”
Shane, “Listen, while I think of it, we all going to Dana’s tomorrow night for a barbecue, you should come.”
Bette : “Maybe I will, leave it with me.”
Shane : “Schedule too full huh ? She jokes. “Be like the old days”
Bette : “Like the old days.” I repeat. We sit in silence for a few more minutes watching the sun starting to set. It always was a comfortable silence with Shane.
Shane : “What did you do while you gone ?” Shane asked this as though it was a question I could answer in a minute and by gone, she clearly meant the last 18 months.
Bette : “Be anywhere but here.” was all I said.
Shane uncrossed her legs, swung them around and leant forward. “Bette, you know I love you and I for
Bette : “But what ? I say with no attitude, just an invitation to finish the sentence.
Shane : I see in her eyes she really wants to know. “I just wanted to know why you came home and why now ?”
Bette : “I wondered when someone would ask me that.” I take a deep breath and exhale. I put my beer down, I don’t look at Shane ”It’s simple really Shane, I still love her and I need to move forward one way or the other.” There I said it.
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(67 votes, average: 3.45 out of 5)
Admitting you love someone is the first step to recovery! Okay, now that she has said it outloud and someone else besides the puppy has heard her…perhaps they can begin mending this wounded relationship? By the way, what is the damn dogs name?!
Just a great story. I think it will take a little time but they will find each other. Post soon
This story is fantastic. I’m really enjoying it. Good angle!
If Bette takes it slow and easy, and get Laurel to trust and love her,then Tina will learn to trust and love again…thanks
LOVE IT..SAM IS JUST THE CARETAKER..RIGHT???PLEASE PLEASE POST SOON….THANKS…
Okay in light of everything we had to figure the first conversation was not going to go smoothly. Though it did get a bit more out of hand then it needed to. Bette still loves her, then tell her jackass. Same for Tina. Sam’s gotta be the babysitter,nanny,au pair, whatever, just not Tina’s current interest. You’ll get them there, right. Baby steps.
I just caught up on your story and really enjoyed it…hope you continue…
Well done – I hoped that talk with less defensiveness but that was a pipe dream – your version was real and I hope they don’t have to battle too long.
Still enjoying it…. keep going!!
great waiting on the next post-i’m curious about sam-neighbor, co-worker or lover-hoping just a neighbor wh helps tina out-watching laurel
has been reading your story and it’s great: so much feelings and love. i like how you depict the characters. if writing is your secret life, well we are just happy for it. please continue and let romance have a good part in it.
of course she still loves Tina, so lets see how long it takes her to tell Tina that.
Who’s Sam? And what is she to Tina?
Simple???? Can’t wait for the next post.
awww so sad mmhmm well amazing your gooo good!!! lol well please post sonn thanx byeness<3389723598723895
I am off to work. I hope there are more chapters tonight…yea love your story
Sam is just the child minder – Right?
Wow T& B still have such a long way to go to find each other again – but hey don’t rush it I’m such a sucker for these bittersweet angst ridden scenes of mis communication. Baby steps!
(keeps the story going longer so we have more to read – LOL)
I am so glad that IT’S out there! At least I feel better now because things will be going forward now, and maybe a little faster(?). I just hope Bette is able to convey this revelation to Tina before the lawyer and all. This is such an amazing story…I’m getting just a wee bit obsessed with it so please keep posting daily! Thanks!!
ohh great then if Bette really love Tina she may be want to talk to her in a good way and tell her what she is feeling..cant wait for next chapter thanks
“i still love her and i need tomove forward one way or the other.” fucking great. then pull your fucking head out bette and stop with the tude. shit. communication. tina was fucking there waiting for you to wake up with YOUR daughter. geez. what more do you want. and who the hell is sam. again soon please.
Hey Still Wonderful I Love it Please continue post soon Thanks!!
I love it.
Still love this story and amazing with each chapter!
I love your story.Your style is so captivating,you’re the best, you know that?I really need some café to go to chapter 23 non stop.