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The Journey 9
Bette : I was touched she asked. “Thanks,
We arrived at Dana’s and it was the perfect LA summers night, Dana had a few friends over all right, more like a party than a barbecue. I mingled and made light talk with the guests and spent some time talking to Dana because she was the one so often neglected in the group. We talked about the places I went to, not so much the art but with Dana traveling a lot for tennis she’d been to a lot of the places as well. I piled up a plate of food, nothing like food from you own country I thought. I remembered the appalling food in
I looked up, I smelt her before I saw her, standing there in front of me, a beautiful white summer dress on, so simple, so Tina. I’d had my arms crossed and looking down when she came in but I still knew she was in front of me, I gave a little ironic laugh to myself. I looked up.
Tina : “Hey Bette.”
Bette : “Hey Tina.” The thing was no one knew where to go beyond those two words. I for one, didn’t know all the rules, what we could and could not talk about, what we should and should not talk about. Hesistantly, “Where’s
Tina : “She is with Sam. You look good Bette”
Bette : “You too, Tee” I say softly.
It had not occurred to me, even though Tina had said it that Sam was here with her, and
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(62 votes, average: 3.66 out of 5)
make the post longer!!!!!!!!!!!!!
great post like always….poor Bette she loosin it again…post soon
WOW, incredible. Such feeling. Really, a great job. Please continue soon!
after the shit ive learned in vancouver. im sick to death of people jumping to conclusions and not communicating. gawd, someone just ask a fucking question. have a hard, but a conversation. yes snQQpy a longer post may helped my frustration.
Here we go with the angst again. Please post soon. :)
Damn this is sad and what’s Tina and Sam’s relationship. Post soon, thanks!
You’ve got me hooked! I’m lovin’ this story. More soon please! :)
Why is there so much tragedy in many of the B&T stories. It’s breaking my heart and I don’t know how long I can keep reading. (= You portray Bette’s feelings so well in this chapter. I feel like she is telling me this story herself and my heart is breaking with her.
Too bad Bette didn’t visit my home country Finland. After all, she was traveling all around the country.
Kiitos!
aggggggghhhhhhhhh!! I want, no I need longer post!!
i love this story, I see is still being Bette. jumping to conclusions and swearing off Tina without all the info. funny. pls post soon.
this is great: the way you come to a climax in the story. all the doubt and hurt of bette is well described. keep on going!
WHO IS SAM????????I THOUGHT YOU WERE GOING TO ANSWER THE QUESTION IN THIS CHAPTER…I UNDERSTAND YOU NEED TO TEASE SOME MORE..THANKS
awww sooo flippen sad uggh lol ok well amazing and please post soon i want bette to be happy please let bette be happy !! ok well plese post soon thanx byeness<38397258972389
Huh? What??? I’m sitting here all hopeful with my morning coffee–still trying to wake–no, to come to, only to see that Bette is still NOT WITH TINA! SHIT! I should have stayed in bed! ARGGHHGHHHH! I love your story, though, however sad it makes me…Your writing is very thought provoking…I just want some “happy thoughts” *lol*! (Oh yeah, there was the puppy wasn’t there?)…Ah, WTH! I guess I’ll just wait on your next post for that;)! Thanks!
UGH..now I have to go to work and wonder about this story all day…post soon
For an intelligent well educated woman sometimes Bette is so stupid LOL Somebody get the woman an interpreter so she can understand what Tina is saying!
Ok I’m frustrated. Good job. Please post soon!!!
oh please dont do this to us and to them..i still think Sam is nothing but babysitter i hope so..post soon
Oh, grow up Bette! If you love Tina that damn much then be a real woman and talk to her. Yes, you had an affair and yes she and your family hid your child from you. What were they supposed to say or do? It was your choice to leave, and I don’t blame Tina for being angry w/ you…not telling you about Laurel. But you love her. If every other proven fact in the world turns out to be wrong, one fact will forever remain the same…Bette, you love Tina.
Grow some balls and get the answers you’re looking for. It’s time to end this pity-party of one and get your wife back.
Oh, and thanks for naming the dog. Please post again soon. This story is adicting!