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The L Wing – chapter 210
I frown “ That’s between Bette and I “
“Bette is my daughter like Ella is yours and Bette’s – you will look out for Ella even when she is a adult – in fact I think that is when you worry more because you cannot make bad things go away -they have to be allowed to face them “
“I don’t know what you heard “
“Only that Bette worships you and there are no circumstances under which she would not desire you “
“Melvin – its complicated “
“I know that I do not understand the finer points of lesbian 101 – but I do know Bette “
“Bette is just worried about me “
“Bette worships you “
“I worship her “
“Then believe her when she tells you that she only has eyes for you “
“I feel uneasy with my looks “
“You look fine to me Tina “
“I don’t feel it “
Melvin is silent for a few minutes then he clears his throat like he is about to make a speech in court
“Bette once told me that you were the most beautiful woman she had ever dated and that blew her away and she was afraid that she wasn’t good enough for you. I told her not to be so silly – that the two of you were made for one another and nothing would come between you “
“I just feel bad about myself “
“My daughter has taste in women that is almost as good as mine. You may think that you look frumpy I believe the word is – but even at your worst you are still a naturally beautiful and attractive woman. Anyway Tina – I am surprised at you “
“Why ?”
“I had thought better of you “
“What ?”
“Do you judge people on their appearance ?”
I take the comment and shake my head – he’s made a good point. I don’t judge people on what they look like and neither does Bette – yet here I am worrying about a few extra pounds. The man has a point.
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(6 votes, average: 3.50 out of 5)
HEAR, HEAR, FUNNYONE! Come on, ally, reconnection time. Bette’s waited long enough. It’s odd how when you first started this story I could never believe BP as the POTUS but the manner in which you’ve woven this story w/all its characters makes it totally believable. That’s a true testament to your abilities as a writer. PPS and more of TLWing.
You’re Alice, I’m Bette x
I am NOT Alice – you are dumped – oh sorry – we did that
hey ally, sorry about your relationship… now how can u leave us like this…nice to see Tina bringing her guard down a bit…
AllyE, soryy about you and Cheryl, remaining friends is important, learn from it. Ms. Right is still out there somewhere. This was another great chapter and I’m glad Melvin had a talk with her and make her realize that how she sees herself is not how everyone else sees her and most especially her wife, who never sees anything but the beautiful, warm and loving that she fell in love with and married, and now the wonderful loving mother of their daughter. We should all be so blessed. Having someone love you like that is truly a blessing.Thank you for this wonderful story. I must go back to the very beginning, I missed the first few chapters.PPS
Great chapter… such a tease for leaving it like this…
Great chapter. Looking forward to more
leave it to melvin and lucy-i guess melvin will ge getting a case of wine
It’s good that you and C can still remain friends after splitting up. That’s a great testament to your friendship and the bond that is there. It’s to be applauded. As for this chapter, what a way to tease us!!! Come on, Bette needs a little and so do we!! LOL
“Shut up and kiss me Porter – I’ll tell you when to stop “Supreme!!
catching up. thanks.
That was great!
Well I guess I´d wanna be Bette too, I mean who wouldn´t. I´m sorry about your relationship but that you part as friends also shows how much you mean to oneanother. I took a break from life the other day and strolled through your many stories. For lack of a better word: Wauw! Such amazing stories, such great dialogue – hope you never stop . .and that you spent the rest of this rainy sunday in front of the computer!
listen to yourself: don’t stop there…tease…
Sorry about C, Ally. Long distance relationships are tough. That you part as friends is a credit to you both. Your Melvin is so much nicer than the one we got on the show. Kinder and wiser if not smarter. And still alive! Now how about a chapter of um, er, ah, reconnecting?