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The L Wing – chapter 219
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“Whose getting clever eh Ella ?”
“You expect anything less of our daughter ?”
I look up and Bette is standing in the doorway
“Hey – you been there long ?”
“A few minutes – you look so deep in thought “
“Got stuff on my mind “
Bette wanders into the nursery and sits down beside me – Ella reaches out to Bette who kisses her
“Hey Ella – are you okay babe ?”
“I was just watching her sleep “
“It does help when you have something on your mind “
“It does – puts things into perspective I guess “
“Can I help ?”
“We’ll talk about it tomorrow “
Bette raises an eyebrow but doesn’t comment
“What time are dad and Kit coming round ?”
“About twenty minutes “
“Can I do anything ?”
“I’m getting the kitchen to do the meal “
“Any reason why – we usually cook for little dinner parties like this one “
I sigh
“Your dad wants to talk to you “
Bette’s eyebrow shoots up
“What about ?”
“Some stuff has come up when we have been doing the interviews for his book. He wants to discuss it with all of us. Plus we haven’t talked about the book at all as a family – he’s not going to pull punches “
“Skeletons ?” she guessed
I nod “Please don’t ask me because I want Melvin to talk to you and Kit together about this.”
Bette looks serious “Okay – I trust you. I better go for a shower – you okay with Ella ?”
“I am fine with her – shall I pour you a drink ?”
She stands up “ You better make it a brandy -sounds like I am going to need it “
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Dinner starts off tense. Kit is on edge and Melvin is anxious. I talk about Ella which is always a topic that all four of us can relax about. After a sweet of lemon pie Melvin gets up –pours himself a brandy and sits facing the three of us – I have deliberately put him at the top of the table.
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You will always be the Queen of fanfic. You need to get a tee shirt that has drama queen on it….I better go and read the chapter now. Thanks for everything Ally. xx
I love how you keep coming up with new innovations for this story. Please don’t even consider ending it.
I can see the scene “‘Oh Baby, I forgot to mention that on top of everything you’ve learned, I’m going to travel across war zones, probably the ones where I shooted your fiancee. BY the way, did you do the laundry?”
Wow…nice blow out…This will be great to follow up…Lets hope Tina does not tell Bette her news…that will not go over well…
Hey Lady, each one of you deserved the honors that were given to each one of you. You should get a Metal or pin to show off. The past sometimes is a bitter pill. Kit is angry because she doesnt want her dirty laundry and the rest of her family’s Tina didnt cause this,yet it keep throwing crap at her. That is a good way to really get Bette started. Do we know what Tina will do with the money from the book, No but knowing Tina it will go to a under privilize country for the Fountation. Ookay love this thanks
Absolutely wonderful chaper – intense and realistic how the recriminations flow – Kit’s a fool for going after Tina on this – IMO this is all Melvins doing.
So full of drama. Fantastic chapter.
I hope you never give into your ideas to end this. This is by far one of my all time favorite stories. I can’t imagine growing up without a mother, but I hope Bette can step back and realize Kit was only a kid herself when Elizabeth left. Also, Kit better snap the hell out of it. Playing the sperm card AND blaming Tina for writing a biography that Melvin wants written!?! Great update. Can’t wait for more.
Boy, Kit bringing up the grandmother thing was wild! Clearly no one had a conversation with her to see how she was going to feel about being the aunt instead of the grandmother. Doesn’t excuse her constant blaming Tina for all their family shit though. Someone needs to tell Kit to get over herself. Tina’s a saint for not getting angry at Kit. Oh, and I do not think that the First Lady would ever be given the go ahead to take a trip to Afganistan the way that country is now. Not unless it became the 51st state! The Secretary of State, yes. First Lady, no way in hell.
omfreakin’god, now the shyt has really hit the fan BUT Kit betta lay off Tina becuz the Pres. will not tolerate anyone stabbing her 1st lady!!!! pps
I agree w/ Kit 100%. there are some things that are better left untold. And now Bette is blaming Kit for her mother leaving, but let’s remember Kit was a child herself. It’s difficult blending families are there was bound to be some resentment on Kit’s part. But let us not forget that it can not be the childs responsibilty to work through the problems….that’s what adults are for. So Melvin and Elizabeth were both weak parents and now the sister bond shared b/w Bette and Kit may be damaged beyond repair. Why is Tina writing this book again? PPS!
Damn this is awesome and hope they will talk and work thing out!
It’s really good to see you post reulary again. I have mist this I love your stories.
What a chapter. I really enjoyed it. Just what I needed to relax after a hard day at work and a hard night of packing to move ahead of me. Please post again soon – it’s so realistic.
come on Kit drop it she is your niece as she is Bette daughter, her daughter. don’t bring that grand mother thing up, its not the right time.if she wants Bette in her life she better leave Tina alone Bette won’t let anybody attack her wife. So Kit make friend of Tina she is your best buddy to win bette back.Great stuff as usual, sorry to repeat myself but you are an incredible writer. Thank you for sharing that with the site.
wow I feel so bad for Bette. Too bad her mom died, because I was wondering if the woman would make an appearance now that her daughter is the president. You know how family members tend to come out of the woodwork with a famous family member. but she will never get to meet her. this chapter was excellent. I’m glad you resumed.
can’t wait for your next chapter! what a page turner this chapter was. am hoping for tina to work her magic on betteso that kit can stop being so awful to tina.
WOW!! Ally you really had an explosive chapter! When Kit said that stuff about Ella and being her biological grandmother, I thought Bette was gonna kill someone!! I can’t wait for more! Hurry please!!
sounds like dinner at my parents house for most of my life. thanks it was a good chapter.
Wow, what an intense chapter. I could really feel their pain. Thanks for posting Ally. And yes…you would be lynched if you quit writing…so post soon!!! :)
Great update ally!! the past is never easy to deal with and i can understand everyone pov, give bette sometime and let tina and lee work the magic bette will come around in time… as for the book well not sure but i think tina could manage to put positive spin on by explaining everything without being judgemental… :)
Hey AllyE, Many thansk for anothe wonderful addition to this magnificent advernture. I just adore how the lives and loves of these characters are brought to live by your awesome talent. It is hard to believe that you are are Chapter 219 and nothing seems old or repetitive. Brilliant!! It was torture for Tina to witness Bette’s reaction to the truth as it was painful to see how this relevation affected Bette. I do hope that these bridges can be mended in the future. Maybe a little time will clear the air and reunite the family. I’m hoping for that. Many, many thanks for this amazing adventure. Your Loyal Fan.
wow…it took 2 days for me to read this whole story and i LOVE it..i was sad that it ended….what will Tina do? i just love your stories ally..keep them coming
wow heavy overload past, poor Bette it’s going to affect her for many chapters to come, Kit is being unfair Tee has nothing to do with it, but Kit really can be very unreasonable at times. Great up date dear I love it and don’t you ever think about ending this story and if you faced writer’s block take as much time as you need to get your ideas together. Thanks and have a great day.
I think that Kit may realize the pain that Bette’s mom leaving has caused Bette all these years. I wonder if it wasn’t another reason she dove into the bottle. I hope that Bette can find forgiveness for Melvin and Kit because losing more of her family will only end up hurting her. However, Kit needs to suck it up and take her lumps no matter how painful. As usual your story is AMAZING and BRILLIANTLY written.