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The L Wing chp 66
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How close are you to the village ?
A few minutes away – I can see a couple of the soldiers.
Tell me what happens next ?
There was crack.
Tina’s voice changes — more panicked – anxious.
Yeah ?
We were being shot at ?
Could you take cover ?
No where to go.
So what happened next ?
Started running – both of us sprinting back to the village but I am not that fit — I drink too much and smoke too much hash.
And ?
The gun fire increased – there must be about five snipers trying to pick us off – it was so loud.
Tears start flowing down Tina’s face – I want to touch her but one look from the Dr makes me shrink back – there is more to come out. I look at my hands and I am shaking.
Emily has fallen.
Tina almost screams.
Why ?
She’s been shot in the calf – she is in agony.
What did you do ?
Went to her — she is telling me to run – I am trying to drag her away – anywhere — out of danger. I cannot pull her – she is yelling at me to get down — to run back to the village – there is so much blood.
What next Tina ? What happened next ?
Shots behind us – covering us — our troops — oh God – we are going to be safe – Emily is yelling at me to get my gun – it hasn’t occurred to me.
Why ?
We can see a couple of the snipers moving closer to us -we are both on the ground – they want to finish us off.
Tina is breathing faster – sweat on her brow.
I am beyond horror and revulsion at what is happening in front of me – the nightmare is finally being played out loud after countless nights of the silent version
My babe – my sweetest and most gentle of loves – so afraid.
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That’s fucked up. No wonder Tina wouldn’t talk about it. You do know T will find out about Emily sooner or later.
you’re the best writer, this is my utmost favorite L word episode, you’r such a great writer, can’t wait to see what happen next.
wonderful
Hi allyI took 3 days to follow all your 66 chapters, they are excellent and you are talented. You just got a hugh fan from Thailand. Please post more soon. THANKxxx
Firstly, thank you so much for posting. I was going a bit crazy waiting for this chapter. I hope this story never ends. 2ndly, could you clarify this part (Am abit dense)…”No – I love her more – because I realise what she has brought to my life – so in time I will be able to forgive both of them – but at the moment if Emily was not already dead I would strangle her.”…um was Bette refering to Tina or Emily when she said “I would strangle her”Â
Great update mate, drama queen eh, never would of guessed!! Hoping Tina will be able to slowly come to terms with her past, but not until I get back from the hols!!
This story was terrific when it was largely light and fun. Now it’s absolutely riveting. Wow. Keep it coming. Thanks so much.
Wow, that’s so moving. My heart was aching with them.
This just keeps getting more and more exciting. Excellent job.
ally i have been eagerly and impatiently waiting for this new chapter and was so amazingly good no doubt you are the best fanfic writer this story has been holding me up for a good amt of time now and i hope yyou dun end it soon whichi doubt the case might be
WOW!!!!! Ally you write so well. This chapter was just GREAT!!!! Can not wait for the next. Thank you
Another great chapter. Can’t wait for the next one.
Another amazing chapter. Ally you rock!
ally i throughly enjoy ur story…but i got this horrible feeling that t is gonna find out what emily is to bette and ugghh more drama…but i mean i need more im like an addict to ur story
Fuck. That was one of the most intense things I’ve ever read here.
If you can write and make us feel all that we are when reading your story, then hopefully you have accomplished all you set out to do. You’ve had us, lusting, drooling, stressing, laughing, and with this one, most definitly crying. I would say the goal is being met. Fantastic. This story hooked us from the begining, and it just keeps getting better. Hats off to Bette, for standing by Tina, even after finding out the truth. With Bette by her side Tina will move forward, but I still believe she needs to really know who Emily was, they have so much ahead of them, secrets should not be part of it. You keep it coming, and will keep reading.
wow thanx for the tissue warning that was intense…again wow! ur an amazing writer
So will Bette tell Tina who Emily is now?
this is so sad!i need more tha one tissue! i can’t believe all the pain Tina have had in silent all this time. Bette is so strong! well i died to see what happen next. incrediblde chapter definitly you are the Queen of Drama!
Been waiting for this one. Yet Tina hasn’t told Bette her self. I was setting in the room with them,and felt all of the pain. You are a great writer thanks
Wow, such pain, you’re style of writing, I’m amazed. Thanks for sharing.
That was heart wrenching I was sitting in the room with the 3 of them, superb
you like making us cry don’t you….my god this was amazing…I like miracles…tks ally
Geez, Ally, you hit the motherload with this one! Tina finally spills, and brother, does she ever. And you, Ally, made this chapter resonate of many things: from very recent history to classic Hollywood weepers.
Wow!! That was amazing writing. I love this story!! My fav!!
HOLY HELL…..I F**KIN LOVE THIS FIC……..CONTINUE SOON PLEASE
Thank you for the warning, they did come in handy. Thank you ally fantastic chapter, will bette tell tina who emily was? Someyhing is telling me more drama on it’s way.
Ally, I’ve just recently come back to have a look at the site after a lengthy absence during which I checked it infrequently. Congratulations on your award Madam. With respect to this story…WOW…it’s a great read and seems to get better and better…I genuflect before the drama queen!
Bloody Mavellous Ally. Just one question….Who do you want to play Emily in the film version?
Wow, that was a great chapter. So much angst though.
wow..so does tina remembers that she talked about emily? she will find out sometime i think, i wonder how it will affect them
Ally, I haven’t read such a heartbreaking beautifully written chapter since I read your Christmas story–It’s a wonderful life, Bette Porter. You bring out all the love that Bette has for Tina and at the same time show us her pain. I think this chapter really shows that true love can conquer any obstacles. I feel very honored and privileged to be able to call you my best friend.
hey ally, congrats on your well deserved award!! i love this story. i am glad tina has come back to the present. anxiously awaiting your next chapter.
Your storytelling is amazing.
Your title of Drama Queen is really well deserved. I’m all for drama, especially when we get to read about the love between Bette and Tina. Thanks for another great post, Ally.
Brilliant and all hail to the queen. You got drama down, girl.
Ally…you made me cry…damn that was great! Can’t wait to see what happens with Tina “back”
Excellent! Can’t wait for the next chapter. Post soon.
Holy freaking cow and this is made me cry, damn that scary and sad. Now Tina is back and let see what’s next. Ok post soon please, thanks!
This is a hard one. You want to be mad at Tina for hurting Bette by sleeping with Emily. But then you hear her side of the story and begin to understand what was happening. Emily brought a lot of that on herself. Not that Tina didn’t help the matter. Bette has got to be torn in to. She loves Tina deeply and at one point loved Emily. As you mentioned in earlier chapter that by holding it in Bette is not helping herself or Tina. Maybe during her summer break she will be able tosit down and talk to Tina about Emily. Great chapter to a heart wrenching story.
WOW!
aw! i just want to hug tina and tell her everything’s okay. a powerful damn chapter, ally!
Wow Ally! I just got home from holidays in the warm warm north (ie im a southern hemisphere girlie) and it was fantastic to come home and find answers to a few Lost questions (wednesdays episode) and puzzles in this :D fantastic! (also the 3 CDs worth of LW stuff my mate gave me :D….and the tapes…tehehe)
amazing!!!
Stupid me, I was so excited there was another chapter I missed the warning. Nothing like crying at work.
Sooooooooooo nicely done, and well put together. There is no way that Bette should tell Tina that Emily was her ex at this time, Tina is still too frigle mentally. Tina needs time to mentally healand gain er footing. She does need to know but much, much later because it was not anything that was intentionally mean spirited by either parties, and Bette learn some inportant information. Bette needs to assure Tina that she is indeed commited to her and their future together. Bette is so right, the situation had alot to do with Emily cheating on her and she should not let the past ruin what appears to be a bright future fot her and Tina. Please continue :o)
Wow. I have only just caught up on the last few chapters and boy what a ride you’ve taken us on! I am still reeling from it. I wish I was as talented with words as you are so that my comments could do justice to your story, but I can’t. So I will just say that your award was very well deserved and that I can’t wait for more. Thanks for writing and don’t keep us waiting for too long.
damn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! man tina is hella strong, her and bette is going to need all the porter strenght, gentleness to help tina get better way to short
OMG!!
This is so intense and so awesome! Tina is going to need all the love and strength of Bette to get her through of all of this!
WOW Ally… what an amazing chapter. Your story is just awesome. Is Tina going to find out about bette & emily? Pls post soon. Can’t wait …i’m addicted ^_^
Thanks for the tissue warning. I’ll save this one for later when I’m home.
wow.