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    The Laundry Bag

    Story written on May 19, 2022 by TiBette4everever.
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    Finally Tina stopped talking and exhaled loudly. She had absentmindedly put her hand on Bette’s back and was rubbing it up and down as she spoke. It didn’t go unnoticed by Kit. Bette relished under Tina’s touch. She wished Tina was ready for a physical relationship because she would’ve taken her back to her place

    Finally Tina stopped talking and exhaled loudly.

    She had absentmindedly put her hand on Bette’s back and was rubbing it up and down as she spoke. It didn’t go unnoticed by Kit. Bette relished under Tina’s touch. She wished Tina was ready for a physical relationship because she would’ve taken her back to her place and did all kinds of things to her. Tina drove her crazy when she touched her. Bette had taken more cold showers in the last eight days than she ever remembered taking before she met Tina.

    Tina realized what she was doing and dropped her hand. Bette saw Tina glance at her and it sent chills throughout her body. Kit watched them intently.

    “Baby Girl?”

    “Yeah?”

    “I like her,” Kit said plainly.

    “You are in so much trouble with this one. I hope you’re ready.”

    Tina smiled. Bette nudged her with her shoulder. Tina smiled again. Kit rolled her eyes and hoped Tina wasn’t going to break her baby sister’s heart. She knew Bette was already too far-gone. Only time would tell, she guessed.

    “Tina, would you like some pie?”

    Bette realized Tina had won Kit over because she didn’t offer just anybody her famous pie.

    “Just so you know, Kit, I will always like some pie.”

    They all laughed. They ate pie and talked for a long time.

    Later that night after Bette parked in front of Tina’s place, Bette remembered apologizing to Tina for not telling her she was half black.

    “Kit and I have the same father. And let’s just say we both have interesting relationships with him.”

    Bette looked down. Tina could tell Bette didn’t want to talk about him anymore.

    “Nothing to apologize for. I didn’t tell you I was part Norwegian. So there’s that.”

    Tina’s eyes twinkled and Bette threw her head back and laughed her heartiest laugh. Tina turned sideways in the front seat of Bette’s car…taking her all in. Bette grabbed the back of Tina’s neck and pulled her closer. She placed the sweetest kiss on Tina’s forehead. Tina grabbed Bette’s wrist and they stayed that way for several heartbeats. They both knew something magical was happening between them. They just weren’t exactly sure what.

    Bette continued looking in the direction of the apartment and finally started making her way slowly to Tina.

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    1. A sweet chapter. The flashback memories are delightfully stirred into this marvelous stew! And Bette’s description for Kiki of “sunshine” = Tina was from the soul sure ‘nuff!! Re-read page 13 y’all

      And page 25 is masterful.

      “They BOTH KNEW making love to each other would never be the same. They had CLIMBED INSIDE of each other and MADE LOVE with their SOULS.

      SOUL FUCKING each other from the DEEPEST parts of them”.

      Be still my racing heart!!!

      “Tina wiped Bette’s tears away. They walked to the bedroom hand in hand. And DID it ALL OVER AGAIN”.

      This memory has got to be one that will eventually help Bette to choose love over hurt toward Tina.

      • Thank you so much! I’m glad you’re enjoying the flashbacks. I think they are instrumental to the story. The flashbacks help move the story forward in a way that I’m really proud of and excited about. This was such a beautiful chapter to write. They are on the verge of something but we just don’t know what yet.

        I hope that memory helps Bette choose love over hurt. We never know what is truly going on with her. Only Tina can touch that part of her and right now, Tina isn’t allowed in. Fingers crossed.

    3. There is nothing I can add to DT’s perfect post. I love the mixture of flashback and the present. Certainly helps create a lot of hope. I’m glad Bette is allowing herself to experience all of it. I have two favorite passages. One present and one past. . Both equally beautiful:

      “Tina tastes like warm sunshine,” Bette said plainly. “When I kiss her, it’s an amalgamation of sweet rain, warm sunshine and very ripe grapefruit…all exploding together and I can feel her in every cell in my body. It’s like…it’s like…a colliding of our souls. I am happiest…no, that’s not the right word. I am my truest, most self when I’m in her aura. I get this warm sensation when I’m near her. She is my air.”

      And the other: “They both knew making love to each other would never be the same. They had climbed inside of each other and made love with their souls. Soul fucking each other from the deepest parts of them. Tina wiped Bette’s tears away. They walked to the bedroom hand in hand. And they did it all over again. This time with Bette taking the lead.”

      Beautiful. You are a talented writer and I am loving your story.

      • Thanks!! Funny you picked out those 2 scenes, they were my favorites to write. I wasn’t going to put a sexy time scene in this chapter, but after editing and re-reading, I thought it needed it. I’m so glad I added it. It’s my best work yet.

    4. A great chapter to read and i simply agree with what DumplinT said in her comment! I really hope Bette will choose love over the hurt, it will take time but there are everytime more little cracks in her wall.

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