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    The Laundry Bag

    Story written on May 19, 2022 by TiBette4everever.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=113153
    Author Notes:

    Bette and Kit looked at each other. “Oh shit! I didn’t mean…shit.” Tina exhaled. “Can we start over?” Tina asked Kit. “No need. Bette should’ve talked to you before you met me. She sometimes forgets the world sees her a certain way. Don’t ya, Baby Girl?” Bette sheepishly smiled. “Tina, all I need to know

    Bette and Kit looked at each other.

    “Oh shit! I didn’t mean…shit.”

    Tina exhaled.

    “Can we start over?” Tina asked Kit.

    “No need. Bette should’ve talked to you before you met me. She sometimes forgets the world sees her a certain way. Don’t ya, Baby Girl?”

    Bette sheepishly smiled.

    “Tina, all I need to know is what your intentions are regarding my baby sister.”

    Bette looked at Kit. She opened her mouth to say something but then thought better of it when Kit gave her one of her famous looks. Besides she wanted to hear what Tina was going to say too.

    “Oh, wow! Ummm…”

    Tina looked at Bette. Bette gave her an encouraging nod.

    “Okay…well…Kit…to be honest, I don’t know what my intentions regarding Bette are just yet.”

    Kit and Bette waited for Tina to continue. Kit’s big sister spidey senses were starting to go off. Bette held her breath.

    “See, I’ve never dated a woman before. Never even thought about being with a woman. Never kissed a woman until the time Bette kissed me at her gallery.”

    Kit looked at Bette. Bette didn’t make eye contact with Kit.

    “And I don’t really know what Bette and I are doing right now. I just know I like being around her…a lot.”

    Kit turned her attention back to Tina.

    “So, my intentions are to figure out all of these feelings I’m having and spend as much time as possible with this beautiful sister of yours who has been so patient with me.”

    “Fair enough, Tina. I appreciate your honesty and I hope you figure it out sooner rather than later because Bette is super gay. And the last thing she needs is to be toyed with by some confused, straight, white woman.”

    Kit looked at Tina without blinking. Tina could feel how protective Kit was of Bette.

    “I understand. And the last thing this confused, not so sure if she’s straight anymore, white woman wants to do is toy with her.”

    Kit nodded

    “Super gay? Really, Kit?” Bette was holding back her laughter.

    “Well, you are. Right, Tina?”

    “Sooo gay.”

    They all laughed. Tina cleared her throat and stepped closer to Bette.

    “Kit, I’m sorry about that fumble when I said ‘I have black friends’. I…”

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    1. A sweet chapter. The flashback memories are delightfully stirred into this marvelous stew! And Bette’s description for Kiki of “sunshine” = Tina was from the soul sure ‘nuff!! Re-read page 13 y’all

      And page 25 is masterful.

      “They BOTH KNEW making love to each other would never be the same. They had CLIMBED INSIDE of each other and MADE LOVE with their SOULS.

      SOUL FUCKING each other from the DEEPEST parts of them”.

      Be still my racing heart!!!

      “Tina wiped Bette’s tears away. They walked to the bedroom hand in hand. And DID it ALL OVER AGAIN”.

      This memory has got to be one that will eventually help Bette to choose love over hurt toward Tina.

      • Thank you so much! I’m glad you’re enjoying the flashbacks. I think they are instrumental to the story. The flashbacks help move the story forward in a way that I’m really proud of and excited about. This was such a beautiful chapter to write. They are on the verge of something but we just don’t know what yet.

        I hope that memory helps Bette choose love over hurt. We never know what is truly going on with her. Only Tina can touch that part of her and right now, Tina isn’t allowed in. Fingers crossed.

    3. There is nothing I can add to DT’s perfect post. I love the mixture of flashback and the present. Certainly helps create a lot of hope. I’m glad Bette is allowing herself to experience all of it. I have two favorite passages. One present and one past. . Both equally beautiful:

      “Tina tastes like warm sunshine,” Bette said plainly. “When I kiss her, it’s an amalgamation of sweet rain, warm sunshine and very ripe grapefruit…all exploding together and I can feel her in every cell in my body. It’s like…it’s like…a colliding of our souls. I am happiest…no, that’s not the right word. I am my truest, most self when I’m in her aura. I get this warm sensation when I’m near her. She is my air.”

      And the other: “They both knew making love to each other would never be the same. They had climbed inside of each other and made love with their souls. Soul fucking each other from the deepest parts of them. Tina wiped Bette’s tears away. They walked to the bedroom hand in hand. And they did it all over again. This time with Bette taking the lead.”

      Beautiful. You are a talented writer and I am loving your story.

      • Thanks!! Funny you picked out those 2 scenes, they were my favorites to write. I wasn’t going to put a sexy time scene in this chapter, but after editing and re-reading, I thought it needed it. I’m so glad I added it. It’s my best work yet.

    4. A great chapter to read and i simply agree with what DumplinT said in her comment! I really hope Bette will choose love over the hurt, it will take time but there are everytime more little cracks in her wall.

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