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The Laundry Bag
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“No need to apologize…” Kit interrupted.
“But there is,” Tina said quickly.
She had Kit’s and Bette’s full attention.
“Because of the way I grew up and I…I just shouldn’t have said it. I’m sorry. I adore your sister. I can’t wait to learn everything about her and to get to know you better. She has completely made me rethink my entire life.”
“My…entire…life,” Tina said looking Bette in her eyes before turning her focus back to Kit.
“And I don’t know what it all means right now. But all I know is I’ve never felt the way I feel when I’m with her. She has shaken me to my core. I’m excited about the possibility of whatever it means to be with her…the possibility of an us. I’m also a little scared because Kit, your sister has completely broken me wide open. She’s given me the gift of patience and understanding. She listens to my needs and apprehensions. She hasn’t pushed me to do anything I’m not ready to do. I don’t know how to navigate all of these feelings just yet. But I do know Bette is the first person I think of when I wake up and the last person I want to talk to before I go to sleep. My insides do cartwheels when she sends me a text or calls. And…and when I see her, when I’m in her presence my heart beats faster and my knees get a little wobbly. Like right now. And she is so gracious and generous and kind and attentive. So, yes, it was a shock to learn that you are sisters but that doesn’t change how I feel about her. If anything, it makes me want to know all of her. I want to dig deeper and peel back her layers. I want to know what makes her tick. I want to know what makes her soul dance. I want to know what scares her. There’s a lot going on behind those beautiful chocolate eyes of hers. She tries to hide it all. But Kit, I see her.”
“I see you,” Tina said to Bette.
Kit noticed the exchange between them.
“Kit, I want to know all of the special little quirks that make her her. Please forgive my ignorance. I promise I will be gentle with her just as she has been with me.”
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A sweet chapter. The flashback memories are delightfully stirred into this marvelous stew! And Bette’s description for Kiki of “sunshine” = Tina was from the soul sure ‘nuff!! Re-read page 13 y’all
And page 25 is masterful.
“They BOTH KNEW making love to each other would never be the same. They had CLIMBED INSIDE of each other and MADE LOVE with their SOULS.
SOUL FUCKING each other from the DEEPEST parts of them”.
Be still my racing heart!!!
“Tina wiped Bette’s tears away. They walked to the bedroom hand in hand. And DID it ALL OVER AGAIN”.
This memory has got to be one that will eventually help Bette to choose love over hurt toward Tina.
Thank you so much! I’m glad you’re enjoying the flashbacks. I think they are instrumental to the story. The flashbacks help move the story forward in a way that I’m really proud of and excited about. This was such a beautiful chapter to write. They are on the verge of something but we just don’t know what yet.
I hope that memory helps Bette choose love over hurt. We never know what is truly going on with her. Only Tina can touch that part of her and right now, Tina isn’t allowed in. Fingers crossed.
Very busy with preparing for my vacation but hope to read it soon.
Oooh! Wishing you much fun and joy on your vacation.
There is nothing I can add to DT’s perfect post. I love the mixture of flashback and the present. Certainly helps create a lot of hope. I’m glad Bette is allowing herself to experience all of it. I have two favorite passages. One present and one past. . Both equally beautiful:
“Tina tastes like warm sunshine,” Bette said plainly. “When I kiss her, it’s an amalgamation of sweet rain, warm sunshine and very ripe grapefruit…all exploding together and I can feel her in every cell in my body. It’s like…it’s like…a colliding of our souls. I am happiest…no, that’s not the right word. I am my truest, most self when I’m in her aura. I get this warm sensation when I’m near her. She is my air.”
And the other: “They both knew making love to each other would never be the same. They had climbed inside of each other and made love with their souls. Soul fucking each other from the deepest parts of them. Tina wiped Bette’s tears away. They walked to the bedroom hand in hand. And they did it all over again. This time with Bette taking the lead.”
Beautiful. You are a talented writer and I am loving your story.
Thanks!! Funny you picked out those 2 scenes, they were my favorites to write. I wasn’t going to put a sexy time scene in this chapter, but after editing and re-reading, I thought it needed it. I’m so glad I added it. It’s my best work yet.
A great chapter to read and i simply agree with what DumplinT said in her comment! I really hope Bette will choose love over the hurt, it will take time but there are everytime more little cracks in her wall.
Thank you!!! It is going to take time. And there will be a couple of hiccups but I hope they find their way back to each other. We are in for an emotional rollercoaster