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    The Moment I Fell

    Story written on April 25, 2018 by meloveslu.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=95009
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    “I missed you too.” She closed her eyes and gently rubbed her nose against mine. I traced her jaw with my fingers and threaded them through her hair. It had grown out a few inches since we first met and was naturally full and wavy as it lay just below her shoulders. “How was your

    “I missed you too.” She closed her eyes and gently rubbed her nose against mine. I traced her jaw with my fingers and threaded them through her hair. It had grown out a few inches since we first met and was naturally full and wavy as it lay just below her shoulders.

    “How was your day?”

    “Manageable. How was yours?”

    “It’s gotten infinitely better in the last five minutes.”

    “Oh yeah?”

    “Yeah,” I was getting better at flirting with her despite my anxiety about our relationship. She was my first girlfriend after all. We kissed again, deeply this time, that caused an intense arousal to bubble just below the surface.

    “I’m going to go change. Did you not bring an overnight bag?”

    “No, I left straight from the studio to the store.”

    “Okay, well if you’d like to change into something more comfortable, you can follow me, if you want.”

    “If I follow you to your bedroom, dinner’s not getting made,” I said with a knowing grin.

    “You’re probably right.” She kissed my forehead. “I’ll be right back to handle those potatoes.”

    As she slipped by me, the scent of her perfume again gently skimmed across my nose and seemingly followed her down the hall. I couldn’t help but watch as she glided out of sight. Shaking the cobwebs of daydreams out of my mind, I peeled off my own suit jacket and set out to prepare our first weeknight meal.

    The last song on the radio faded into Usher’s “You Make Me Wanna” which made me smile to myself. The chorus perfectly depicted how Bette and I came to be when we first met. Poor Eric still didn’t have any idea that I had traded him in for his art dealer. But she certainly knew how to make people want her, so I’m almost positive he wouldn’t blame me since I was quite sure he had his own crush on her.

    As I chopped up the colored bell peppers to throw in the fish dish, I felt a pair of nimble hands slide around my waist. I felt Bette’s body press against mine as she deeply inhaled the scent of my hair. Her breath escaped across my neck and I closed my eyes to revel in its ephemeral warmth.

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    1. This is only a one-off. But I suppose if you’re keeping score, this could potentially be a second part to the last fic I posted.

      I have so many unfinished story files sitting in my documents folder, it’s not even funny. I’ve realized that as I get older, the times when creativity and inspiration strike are fewer and farther between. Time is the great equalizer, but there never seems to be enough of it, especially when you’re struggling to find that healthy work-life balance.

      I hope you are all doing well and are happy and healthy wherever you may be.

      Cheers!

      • Hi, meloveslu! :D Thanks a lot for this lovely, fluffy, quite polished one-off! I’ve always loved your stories and I truly hope you’ll find the time and be inspired someday soon to put the finishing touches to your creative projects. And let me guess the identity of the third writer who “inspired” you to share this one-off. Is it BEG who broke her 11-month silence to post an update on “Home Again Part 2”? I heart that story and that writer too.

        Thanks again and have a lovely, productive new work week! :D

        • Fantastic guess MightyMouse! You should be a detective ;-)

          Appreciate you reading. When I find time to finish some of these bad boys, hope you’ll be there with more of your wonderful flattery.

          Xoxoxo

    2. Hi, thanks for the story!

      So, it’s second part of “20 years”? – good.

      And about your comment – what are your three favorite writers, who posted last month? BenMac, Cella?

      P.S. Interesting – how many comments will be about “Playing by heart”? :)

      • Hey Zhenya!

        Yep, I think it could be a follow-up to 20 Years since we don’t know where Bette is coming home from. I didn’t really plan it like that, but t seems like it works right?

        You certainly named 2 of my 3 faves. I’ll let you do a little digging around to discover who else may be a favorite of mine ;-)

        I’m willing to bet many of these comments will have some mention of PBH. It is definitely the largest unfinished file in my documents folder ????

        Thanks for reading!

        MeLL

        • Hm, third author? Pie, skydancer, Valerie? ;-)

          And of course, i would be happy if you can give proper final for your biggest story ( and maybe give inspiration another two writers with unfinished busines :) – kins40 and peculiar), but i understand that it might be difficult for you – too many time has gone and hard to get your mind back in storyline again.

    3. Hi Meloveslu,

      I am always happy when you find some time to post a story! And i hope you find the creativity and inspiration to post those unfinished stories. Maybe Playing by Heart?

      I hope you find the right balance between work-life.

      Thank you so much for sharing this story with us.

      • Bibi!

        Thanks so much for reading. Makes me warm and fuzzy inside when you come out and support my stories. I hope you’re right about getting some more inspiration. One of these days, I could surprise myself and finish up that story you’re asking about.

    4. Love the flow and pacing of your stories. And this one, what a sweet, elegant feel to it. I wish I had the writing chops to pull of a story in the in the first-person. You on the other hand, have mastered it. Outstanding, young lady.

      • Oh please! Writing first person pales in comparison with the ability to weave an in depth plot line with serious subject matters that continually keeps the audience guessing as well as engaged.

        But I will graciously accept your compliment and revel in the fact that you read my fluff anyway. Thanks!

    9. Great to see you posting again and I must add my pleas to the others for you to finish your stories where you have left us hanging wishing for more :-)
      You know which ones they are!
      Thanks for this please post again soon
      SG

      • Sassy! So glad to see you caught this one! I hear your dog whistle. It’s always in the back of my mind and occasionally an opened document on my macbook that just stares at me, daring me to write the ultimate ending. Just have to find that window of opportunity to seize the inspiration. It’s much harder than you would think,

        • I am not unaware of how hard it is and appreciate very much your getting inspired and the time to put it into words.
          Still would love you to find the inspiration and the time :-)
          SG

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