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The Most Distance Course
“They must be very beautiful…and handsome…” Bette allows her tears to keep falling down freely, helping Tina continues her word.
“Yes…very…”
Bette sniffs, she hugs Tina closer to her, sobbing. “I’m so sorry…T… I’m so sorry…I love you…I love you.”
“Love…yes…we love them…”
“You are so beautiful, baby, I love you so much.”
“Beautiful…” Tina whispers. “Like you…baby…B…”
Bette maintains stroking Tina’s hair while the blonde starts repeating random words. Even when Tina finally falls into deep sleep, Bette keeps hugging her for a while, patiently gives Tina full accompany before she drifts off.
Then she carefully gets up, turning off the light and makes sure the door is locked, then climbs back into bed which occupied with a beautiful tired blonde. Sensing that her face is covered with her tears, neglects her clouded eyes, she dries her face with her hand. But even she wipes away the tears, the sadness can’t inside her heart is unable to erase.
“You are my first, last, and forever, T, no one makes my heart aches like you.” Bette smiles through her tears. “I promise…I will never leave you again.”
She presses a soft kiss on Tina’s lips, and her forehead.
It comforted Bette while looking at Tina sleeping in her bed. She creeps in beside Tina under the bedclothes, holds Tina close, the blonde makes a small stir, then fall into deep sleep again. Bette enjoying the contact, could never be close enough.
With the one last kiss on Tina’s lips, Bette as well, goes off to dreamland while she holds Tina.
Far away in an infamous camping area in California, several police cars pull up around a desolate field, sealing off the area and driving out the bystander.
Somewhere in that place, a bunch of children who are obviously having a camping trip, dug up multiple women corpses unearthed while they were playing treasure hunt. The corpses turned into bones, but the clothes remain whole, they called the authorities right after they noticed something was wrong, horrified about what they found. They didn’t know they just disclosed a huge murder, nor did they know that they will bring about the great impact to the Cooper organization.
Martin Garrix feat. Khalid – Ocean
-CJ-
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Bibi28 says
Hi CJ,
That was such a beautiful chapter!!
They connected, heart, body and soul. And now my wish for them is to make the dream of Tina come true.
Let them live their life, happy, full of love and with their future children, but i don’t think that will happen soon.
I needed this chapter full of love and connecting between our girls!!!
Thank you so much for the update!!!!
Crystal J.H says
HI Bibi28:
I love the interaction between Bette and Tina, I spent double times to finish it just to make it better. There were so many good bed scene in other writer’s story, I was so afraid I would ruin it.
Yes, this chapter they finally clarify their feelings and came clean to each other, a good relationship always contains a good conversation, I like when they both able to listen and understand the others feeling.
I will try to write more these kind of chapter but the story must go on, and I’m so sorry for letting you guys waited for so long, don’t worry the loving Tibette will continue for a while.
Thanks for your reply, Bibi, again, I’m so glad you like this story and have you as a reader, hope to see you next week!
CJ
Bibi28 says
I am so glad that you write this incredible story CJ!!!
I have to work next weekend, but i will try to read the next chapter asap!!!!
Zhenya says
Hi! Thanks for the great chapter!
Finally! And great job to put kiss from s5 in your story, and picture too!
Waiting find more about what police found.
Crystal J.H says
Hi Zhenya:
Thanks for your comment!
Yeah, I love that scene in season 5 and was the only one I yelled “Yes!” so loud that my mom asked if there’s something happened.
What do you think the police found? Welcome to give a guest?
CJ
Zhenya says
Hm, i think it’s or prostitutes who worked on organization or illegal emigrants who wanted to land in US
proteonomics says
Hi CJ:
Wonderful chapter. As you said before, there is a turning point between this chapter and the former one.
It’s not a coincidence that it comes along with the change in Bette’s strength and maturity, and with Tina’s softness when learning that Bette was at her side in her room while she was recovering.
I’m not very sure what Carmen meant when she talked to Bette, about Tina and told her “Don’t trust Justine…She’s more…crafty and elusive, than you thought”; is it because Tina has involved Bette as one of the criminal heads in this organization? Is Tina trying to have more heads in the command to give the big blow? Certainly, Carmen knows something it’s being cooked in the criminal organization, but where are her loyalties?
I like Tina’s dreams, whatever they could be possible or not, and I like that they talked and came clear about high school, about Bette’s remorse for the suicidal girl.
This loving break in the story was very needed, and now we’ll see what it’ll come.
The women bodies that were found buried and that will involve Cooper’s organization, are they related to human trafficking? This is a topic that I’m researching too.
Great story CJ, I’ll be waiting for the next weekend for more.
P
Crystal J.H says
Hi proteonomics:
Just like you said, Tina didn’t know whether Bette had feelings to her or not, and Bette, I also think that she really want to change who she was, she did what she can do and stayed beside Tina. During Tina’s recovery, what she needed most was not any strong medicine, Bette’s accompany was what she needed the most.
Just like I said in chapter 15, Tina is not the only candidate to inherit the company, the six heads also have the chance to become the boss, Carmen was a brilliant woman who could survive in the organization for so long, she must figure out something and want Bette to be careful, as one of the heads, Bette is on the same bridge with her. It’s not weird if Carmen guard against Tina.
Among all the story, I think Bette’s biggest progress was to confirm what she had done, admit mistakes is the most difficult things after making something wrong.
Sadly to say, no, it has nothing to do with the human traffic, but certainly has something to do with one of the six heads, I will slowly reveal it in the next two weeks.
Thank you so much, proteonomics, your comment is always what I’ve been waiting for, make my story better every time. I’m also very looking forward to your next chapter! Again, Thanks for your comment!
CJ
Silentreader says
It’s a lovely chapter,it broke my heart learning how hard life for Tina after she left the school, wish everything didnt have to turn that way, but happy that she finally could have her Bette back in her life and love her back as she love her in return. Wondering why Tina’s body was fragile, why she is sick? What kind of illness does she has that might cost her her life?
Anyway..well done CJ..tks for sharing your work :)
Crystal J.H says
Hi Silentreader:
So good to see you!
Yes, Tina has been through a long hard life in these five years, Bette also didn’t live an easy life, I know the story has gone for a while, but there is still a long way to go for Tina and Bette’s settle life.
Tina’s health is the saddest thing I’ve written, it’s in the next chapter, I really hope things didn’t need to go that way, but it’s the reason why Tina has to stay in the organization.
Thanks for the waiting and the comment! Hope to see you next week.
CJ
SassyGran says
Thank you for this great Chapter which was just what was needed.
I am still concerned about so many things in the story and look forward for the rest of the story to unfold and, I hope, put my concerns to rest! I can but hope I am in your talented hands.
Please post soon.
SG
Crystal J.H says
Hi SassyGran:
I’m sorry for letting you wait for so long, it’s a lovely chapter but tough to write,
I will try my very best to give them both a good ending, but the rainbow after the rainstorm is always the most beautiful, there still are lots of quests they need to face.
Be patient and wait for the smart Tina to start her plan! Thanks for your comment and hope to see you next week!
CJ
AReader says
I hope those bodies belonged to Adele and Kelly, :P
Great story Crystal. Cant wait for next week.
Crystal J.H says
Hi AReader:
Great guess! But no, it will be too easy for those two. No worries, they will be in the future chapter.
Thanks for the comment!
CJ