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    The Most Distant Course

    “Ma’am? Are you alright?”

    A man passes through, seeing Bette’s face is really pale, he stops and takes a look at her.

    “Yes, thank you, I’m fine.” Bette says, with the man’s help, she stands straight.

    But the man seems has no intention to leave, he steps closer to Bette and keeps his hands on both of her arms, his back facing the street, only Bette can see his mouth lips. His voice is deep and quiet, enough to let Bette hear what he’s saying.

    “There’s a problem shipping the goods, Ms. Priston. The customs seem to suspect that there is something wrong with the company’s cargo ship, they’ve given the order to the company, saying that they will do a temporary check on the Kitchenware shipping to China.”

    “I see,” Bette takes a deep breath. “I’ll take care of it later, thank you.”

    “And one more thing…” The man remains her voice low. “See the two guys standing in behind the window across the street? They are DEA, they don’t have the evidence of you’re selling the drugs. But be careful, if you’re being stalking, they must have something to chase on.”

    “No, there’s no need to go to the hospital, thank you very much, sir, I’m fine.” Bette says quietly.

    The man nods, then walk away without a second word.

    Two days, less than two days she has to deal with all the mess…How will Tina react when she knows there are only two days left for her plan? And how can she tell Tina that no more than two days, this place will turn into ruin?

    Bette waits until he walks away, then she walks back to her car.

    “Everything alright, Ms. Priston?” Her driver asks.

    “Yeah, everything’s fine, just…” Bette sighs. “There are so many things that were out of my control, I can barely handle it.”

    “Yeah…That’s life.” The driver chuckles. “So…where to go?”

    “To the port, I need to deal with something.”

    “Got it.”

    Bette opens her phone and presses the 1 button.

    “Ms. Cooper? Yes, I just get out of the store…No, I’m afraid I can’t be home for dinner on time, I have to handle some issue at bay…”

     

     

    “I see…that’s a shame,” Tina says to Bette. “Be careful yourself, alright? I love you.”

    Comments

    1. Thank you for the chapter!

      But i must say – i don’t like what happen in it. We stiil have many questions – who the person with Tina spoke on the phone?
      And second – yeah, Tina don’t tell Bette all her plan, but Bette – did you tell Tina about FBI raid? You both still not trust each other completly.
      And if this fight between Tibette is not trick for Jodie’s ears, than Bette still very weak mentally who allow Jodie to get in her head.

    2. Hey, i forgot something – you really think Jodie is “beautiful”?

      Because one of the reason i hate this character (among with the others) – it’s because i think actress who played her is absolutly unattractive. For me it was very bad actress choise from IC (and of cousre from JB, who seems wants all her friends played in TLW)

    3. Hi CJ:

      I saw this coming; yes a little hard, but interesting, a turning point.

      Bette is a bit naive, how could she believe in Jodie.

      However, I may understand her immature behavior, because of her jealousy. I don’t think there is a standard way for people, to react in similar circumstances.

      Of course, this situation will destabilize Tina, she is in recovery from her addiction.

      Well, I hope Bette could cool down her head and think calmly and with maturity about her conversations with Jodie and Tina and realize what is going on.

      Bette needs to tell Tina about the FBI and they both need to leave the place ASAP.

      Well, and if Bette doesn’t tell her, I hope Tina’s other source of information (the person who spoke with her) will tell her.

      Now, the question is: Is Eric really dead? Or is this something like Carmen, whom I believe is alive far away.

      Does Henry know what Jodie has done?

      Okay, I think we have to wait until the next chapter.

      Thanks for this great story CN.

      P

    4. Hi CJ,

      What a fucking mess, the secrets,the lies, the games and Bette is the one who will end up hurt and destroyed.

      She is in the middle of it and feels used, hurt and betrayed. Jodi played it smart and how ugly and how i despise her, she has planted the seed very well and now she overheard the whole conversation between Bette & Tina and know their true identity.

      In the end i can only hope and pray Bette & Tina will find their happiness together, but for now i have to sit out this deathly game.

    5. So, i hope Tibette fight was just ruse, because if not – than Bette not grew up since high school. She still allow another person manipulate himself. Than it was Adele, now it was Jodie

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