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The Most Distant Course
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Bette says, as the top detective of the Los Angelus, she’s responsible for this issue.
“If my men and the officers did not guard the city effectively, it is my fault. Please don’t worry, I will spare no effort to investigate and catch the thieves, also find the stolen goods.”
The Chief of Police nods.
“Very well, it’s not your fault that thieves stole those things. But since there are so many cases, we can do nothing.” Franklin says. “You usually act swiftly, so I’ll entrust you with this case. You’ll have to work a bit harder during Christmas”
Bette salutes to her boss. “I will definitely not disappoint you.”
“Oh, and Bette…”
Before Bette turns her body and ready to go, the chief of police calls her.
“I’ll call the San Diego Police Department, in this case, we are going to work with them.”
A small smile appears on the detective’s lips. That’s the phrase she wants to hear, which also means that Tina’s plan is right on track.
“Yes, sir.”
Christmas, The same day later. California, LA Beverly hills.
“Tina?”
“Yes, Tash?”
“Why are we here?”
Tina looks at the huge gate, it’s being more than a decade since the last time she’s been here.
“This is a house of one of my old friends, to save Shane, I need to count with her.”
A house? Tasha raises her eyebrows. It was practically a castle, the structure is as big as the Cooper mansion. With the luxury front yard and garden, there is a damn long distance from the front door gate to the main structure.
“So…how are you and Bette?”
They walk through the little path to the main door, on the way, Tasha can’t help but ask.
“I don’t know.” Tina replies shortly.
“Haven’t you two talk to each other?”
Tina sighs, she so not ready to think about the question now.
“We sort of did.” She lied.
Tasha smirks. “Sort of?”
“Fine, no, we didn’t.”
“Why? Your stubborn ass refuses to apologize to her?”
Tina looks at the officer in disbelieve. “I apologize? She’s the one who questioned me first!”
“Technically you’re the one who hid the truth from her.” Tasha shrugs.
Fair enough.
“I don’t know,” Letting out another sigh, Tina shakes her head. “Deep down I knew it wasn’t right to lie to her, but all I wanted to do was protect her…”
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Hola CJ me encantó el capítulo cada vez esta mejor pero lo que no me gusta es que Tina se va a sacrificar porque se va entregar a Faye Buckley esperando que subas el otro gracias
Escorpion2494
We will find out very soon about that, they were both very smart women, but do have faith in Tina, every of her decisions were made for reasons, therefore, please be patient for what will happen next. Thanks for your reply and hope to see you next week.
CJ
Hi CJ:
Wow, what a chapter, as Tina, I’m also mad with Bette for her immature behavior. I believe that she doesn’t want to make peace with Bette because in Tina’s plans she wants to keep Bette safe and not tell her, her plans.
I think Tina went to talk to Peggy and Helena to set a trap for her enemies.
I have the feeling that Tina is going to offer herself as bait to catch Aaron, Buckley, Candace, and Phillips; and I believe that Max and the assistant are going to help to set Shane free, and to help Tina inside the prison.
Very good chapter, but please, keep Tina safe and pps.
Thanks.
P
My friend
You are guessing right, from now on, two sides we’re slowly formed and it’s clear who’s on which side. Stay tune, the war will come soon.
Tina will be safe for now, as for the rest of the chapter…we will need to see how her plan goes, she’s as sly as Faye Buckley, I’m sure she will find a way to get herself out.
Thank you for liking the story and the comments, means a lots to me, hope to see you next week my friend.
CJ
Hi CJ,
I feel sad that Bette & Tina are fighting and are so stubborn, but i have a feeling that this is a roleplay just like at the Cooper mansion when we thought they were fighting and afterwards Bette knew al the steps that Tina set up. I keep my hope on that being the case.
It worries me that Faye Buckley saw Max with Shane, if he is busted how will he be able to help Shane and Tina.
Tina can not offer herself up, with her weak body she will not survive and you promised me a happy ending for Tibette.
Tina asked for the help of Peggy Peabody and Helena, that is a good thing.
CJ, this story has captured and sucked me in, my imagination is running wild sometimes and even disturbed my sleep with all my thoughts running in my head! You do a excellent job!!!
Bibi28
Well, there’s a lots of information in these and the coming up chapters, that’s for sure, but you have to have faith in both of them. I promise to give them a happy ending, and I will keep it.
Maybe Faye Buckley had seen Max, maybe Tina was weak during this time. But I li can guarantee that you won’t expect the coming up story…please, be patient to wait and see how Tina wipe Faye’s ass.
Peggy Peabody was a very important character in next part, like Tina said, she held something that was more valuable than money, well…you will know it in next chapter.
Thank you for your comments every week, Bibi, I can always ease my mind that you will soon post after the new chapter. Appreciate so much for your support, hope to see you next week.
CJ
Bette is frustrating me with the way she is behaving, wanting to know Tina’s plans. All the hurtful words she said to Tina and distrusting Tina are distracting Tina from her mission. It is Tina who used to the mob boss, not Bette. Please help Bette not be a hindrance, they need to be strong and united to take down Faith and Aaron.
Jordan Springs
I rather think Bette is panicked, she’s acting the normal way that mainly all of us would react. Think about your best friend being arrested, we would be very nervous about it. Even though, do have faith in Tina. She’s very smart and strong, she will definitely find a way to deal with this situation.
Thank you for the comments, hope to see you next week.
CJ
Hi CJ
Sorry for becoming a silent reader for the past few months, but i could assure you that i still reading every chapter you’ve posted here.
Keep your good job. It’s really fun reading your story. And cant wait for a new one every week :)
Silentreader:
It’s a pleasure to see you here. Hope to see you more often though I just trying to make a reply so far. It’s been a long way and thanks for you guys to help me keep going. I will continue the story no matter what. Thanks for liking the story.
CJ
Continue to enjoy this story. Makes me think
kenji
Thank you for liking this story, I’m assuring that more complicated scene will be in the next chapters.
CJ