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    The Most Distant Course

     

    Chapter 36 Rescue…Or not?

     

    “We will arrive at the States soon since you are returning again, I think you must be a bit emotional, aren’t you? McCutcheon?”

    The police cars drive through the huge dessert, Shane’s hands have been tied up behind her back, she remains silent, regardless of the provocation of the head commander of the FBI Aaron Kornbluth.

    “I must say, McCutcheon, your friends are pretty patient, the border will be their only chance. Hopefully, they won’t miss it…I know, I know, you don’t want them to come, right?” Aaron Kornbluth chuckles. “The problem is, you made the mistake of working for the Coopers, otherwise you wouldn’t have to live like a rat now.”

    From the truck window, Shane can see a small part of the night sky, somehow the full moon is bright and shiny as if it was welcoming her back to her country.

    “Do you think your friends are loyal enough to you?” Aaron smirks. 

    “At least none of my friends are like you.” Shane replies coldly. “A complete sucker.”

    The FBI commander chuckles at what the brunette has said seems not offended at all.

    “Indeed, but glad that I’m smart enough not to do anything stupid…” Aaron kneels down and lifts Shane’s chin up. “Who do you think will come and save you? Hm? Justine Cooper? Or Bette Porter.”

    Shane tries to spit on the commander’s face, yet the man is faster, she misses and earns herself a hard punch on the face. Blood runs down her lips, her face immediately swelling up.

    Dear Lord… Shane says in her mind. Please don’t let Carmen and Tina do something stupid…

    The fleet of police cars gradually and slowly drive close to the border gate, just like the old times, cars line up one by one, they are all waiting to cross the border to the United State. Countless cars all stuck between one another, the process is slow and annoying.

    There is no other moment to attack better than this one.

    In fact, several eyes are focusing on Shane’s transporting car.

    Everyone stands by…

    Deep voice coming out from the radio, the FBI agents are separate in different vehicles, next to them under the passenger seat, machine guns are fully loaded, they are ready to get Shane back.

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    Comments

    1. Martha3128 says

      I am quite concerned for Tina’s health. I am not familiar with recovering drug addicts, so I do not know if this is normal or just unique to whatever drug she was addicted to. If she keeps this condition into the future, I can see the attraction of returning to usage with her periodic pain and discomfort. I am assuming that she has not indulged for about 2 years. But maybe this is normal.

      I’m disappointed in Bette. Bette has broken several laws while she was in the mansion. She watch people die without doing anything to prevent it. She could face severe criminal penalties for aiding and abetting a criminal namely Tina. to avoid justice. It seems the lessons from their childhood did not take a deeply as I thought at least not in Bette.

      • Crystal J.H says

        Dear Martha3128:

        It depends on the health, I’ve friend who used to have drug addiction he was very well recovered, with regular excerise, his health is strong. But his friend was no so lucky, got sick all the time. So it really depends.

        I believe Bette’s reaction was quite normal, what she’s doing is what people will act the frist time when we know our friends or family being taken to the prison or got caught. Tina however, she’s too smart to know the true not to be sensitive, which make her seems heartless. For me, Bette’s reaction is much more human.

        Thank you for your comment, wish to see you next week.

        CJ

      • Crystal J.H says

        Dear Escorpion2494:

        Hi, I’m sorry I have to use Google translate to read Spanish, so I’ll type in English.

        Thank you for supporting this story, it’s glad to see people from different places , the upcoming part will post this week, hope to see you next week.

        CJ

    2. proteonomics says

      Hi CJ:

      What a chapter, that was strong, but I liked it.

      Bette is indeed a ‘fucking suborn idiot’; how couldn’t she think to go and face Buckley and that evil man of Aaron. Tina is saving her life by opposing her. Bette shouldn’t forget that her reputation is at stake if she goes after the senator and the FBI director right now, she will lose; I believe they have a big file about Bette’s deeds inside the Cooper’s and they may destroy her as soon as they get Tina, who is their main target.

      I’m concerned by Tina’s health, she is very weak, that’s what happens to people like her who had a very poor childhood and drug-addiction; even if that addiction, like in her case, was induced by others.

      Very bad things happened in Cooper’s mansion, and I don’t doubt that it happens in other mafias, and even some of the participants are at the same time victims and executors, the Damocles sword is pending on their heads.

      I’m very worried about Shane, but I’m even more worried about Tina, she may offer herself in exchange for her friend, please don’t think about that in this story, CJ,

      What they have to do is to calm down and analyze the situation and make a plan. Tina was a victim in the mansion and she did many bad things involving the death of the drug lord, but apparently, Tom was already destinated to die at hands of the Chinese mafia. So Tina should stop any guilty feeling, she is a warrior and has a goal.

      Well at least Bette is staying with her friends and Tina, and they should move Carmen and her child to a safer place; Bette’s house is no longer safe and protected; perhaps she’s been watched; I think Tina should also go to another place.

      Wow, now you caught all my attention, please post soon, we don’t want Bette and Tina jailed and those criminals (because Buckley and Aaron are real criminals) winning this war.

      Thanks, my friend for this chapter, and please post soon.

      P

      • Crystal J.H says

        Dear proteonomics:

        Wow, that was a long comment, thanks for your time.

        You haave a really great obsevation, some of your guessing were actually accurate for the next chapter. But I can’t say much, the prison breaking scene is not interesting as long as it’s known.

        Thank you for your supporting for every chapter, my friend, it was so good to see your comment everytime, encourage me to keep going even there’s people think it’s hatd to read and unwilling to continue. But there’s a major part of it happened around my life and my friend, I want to keep writing the story.

        Thank you,proteonomics , wish to see your next chapter soon.

        CJ

    3. DumplinT says

      This as been the most challenging brain twister I ever read. When the plot switched to Tina/Justine and Bette/Informant I have been at a total loss to understand Bette’s lack of trust and disrespect toward Tina\Justine!!

      Call me slow, it’s OK I won’t take it personally. Honest.

      Perhaps my inability to understand & appreciate Bette may lye in the clue Chrystal gives in this chpt that “guilt” in not protecting Tina from the bitches in high school nor making an honest to go to Tinas’ Aunts home to see if Tina had sought refuge there.

      For me, Bette is a clueless, narcissistic bi*^ch

      • Crystal J.H says

        Dear Dumplin T:

        In fact there was no hidden clue in this chaother, and the characters were only Bette and Tina, I mentioned Justine Cooper just to want Bette to realize her girlfriend was once a criminal.

        As for your reaction of Bette, I believe she’s acting really normal. There’s a saying goes in Chinese: When you care too much you’ve already lost. Bette saw what happened to Shane with her own eyes and wanted to save her, so that she has such reaction. I do agree with you she’s a stupid head, but she did still carrying guilt and want to help her friend.

        Thank you for the reply and I hope to see you next week.

        CJ

    4. Bibi28 says

      Wow, powerful chapter!!!

      Bette, such a clever woman who in the Heat of things can still act so stubborn. I do understand her reaction, she still carries a lot of guilt from years ago and want to do this right thing. But what she said to Tina, my god she must think first before she talks or handle.

      Tina her health is concerning me, the years of drug intake takes it tol.

      The Friends now know the truth. Let they all calm down and plan a strategy to rescue Shane and bring down the evil people.

      I trust you CJ that at the end they will succeed to win this fight.

      • Crystal J.H says

        Dear Bibi28:

        You have my promises that I will give the reader a happy ending, but as you can see, this is the biggest obstacles they need to face. And it will continue for a few weeks.

        What you said about Bette is right, she has the normal reaction like normal people, but she really need to think carefully before she speak when she’s angry.

        I’m so glad to see your reply, I hope you have a great time and thanks for your comment.

        CJ

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