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The Most Distant Course
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“I thought you should be on your duty instead of hanging around here,” The man says coldly. “The FBI didn’t pay you for chatting around.”
“I’m sorry, sir, it won’t happen again.” One of the senior guards says.
Avoiding to have eyes contact with the other man, the two guards quickly walked back to where they should be,
The man waits until the other two men disappear in the corner, then he turns and looks at his old colleague who is sitting straight in the middle of the bars.
Somehow Max is surprised he will meet old people from the Cooper organization in this way, and especially to this woman.
As an FBI agent, he knew clearly why his commander insisted on catching Shane McCutcheon, even being far away in Mexico. Either they are targeting Carmen, or their final goal is Justine Cooper.
Just one look, Shane and his eyes meet.
Even if they both have tons of questions in their minds, still, they know exactly what’s in other’s minds without saying a single word just by look at each other.
How are Carmen and Tina doing now?
Bette’s place.
“Max Sweeney?”
“As long as the FBI agents surround that place, it is impossible to get into the jail and save someone. But if Max comes back, then we’ll have hope.” Tina.
“Who’s Max?” Alice asks.
“Max used to be one of my men when I was still in the Cooper organization.” Carmen confirms quietly. “We were both FBI agent years ago. I was a senior and was first being arranged to spy on the Cooper organization. It was a tough job, practically no one wanted to take the responsibility, I was in the top of the class, I had no choice and I needed a right hand. During those times he was just a student, but he volunteered to cover me up in the Coopers.”
Carmen rubs her tiring face, the whole chaos has kelp her awake for days.
“But he is Aaron’s people, can you be sure that he will help us?”
A sudden discomfort rushes up Tina’s throat, she coughs violently, Kit gently pats on her back to ease her breath, while Bette looks dumbly at her girlfriend. The elder Porter shots a dagger at her younger sister, blaming the detective for her eagerness.
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Hola CJ me encantó el capítulo cada vez esta mejor pero lo que no me gusta es que Tina se va a sacrificar porque se va entregar a Faye Buckley esperando que subas el otro gracias
Escorpion2494
We will find out very soon about that, they were both very smart women, but do have faith in Tina, every of her decisions were made for reasons, therefore, please be patient for what will happen next. Thanks for your reply and hope to see you next week.
CJ
Hi CJ:
Wow, what a chapter, as Tina, I’m also mad with Bette for her immature behavior. I believe that she doesn’t want to make peace with Bette because in Tina’s plans she wants to keep Bette safe and not tell her, her plans.
I think Tina went to talk to Peggy and Helena to set a trap for her enemies.
I have the feeling that Tina is going to offer herself as bait to catch Aaron, Buckley, Candace, and Phillips; and I believe that Max and the assistant are going to help to set Shane free, and to help Tina inside the prison.
Very good chapter, but please, keep Tina safe and pps.
Thanks.
P
My friend
You are guessing right, from now on, two sides we’re slowly formed and it’s clear who’s on which side. Stay tune, the war will come soon.
Tina will be safe for now, as for the rest of the chapter…we will need to see how her plan goes, she’s as sly as Faye Buckley, I’m sure she will find a way to get herself out.
Thank you for liking the story and the comments, means a lots to me, hope to see you next week my friend.
CJ
Hi CJ,
I feel sad that Bette & Tina are fighting and are so stubborn, but i have a feeling that this is a roleplay just like at the Cooper mansion when we thought they were fighting and afterwards Bette knew al the steps that Tina set up. I keep my hope on that being the case.
It worries me that Faye Buckley saw Max with Shane, if he is busted how will he be able to help Shane and Tina.
Tina can not offer herself up, with her weak body she will not survive and you promised me a happy ending for Tibette.
Tina asked for the help of Peggy Peabody and Helena, that is a good thing.
CJ, this story has captured and sucked me in, my imagination is running wild sometimes and even disturbed my sleep with all my thoughts running in my head! You do a excellent job!!!
Bibi28
Well, there’s a lots of information in these and the coming up chapters, that’s for sure, but you have to have faith in both of them. I promise to give them a happy ending, and I will keep it.
Maybe Faye Buckley had seen Max, maybe Tina was weak during this time. But I li can guarantee that you won’t expect the coming up story…please, be patient to wait and see how Tina wipe Faye’s ass.
Peggy Peabody was a very important character in next part, like Tina said, she held something that was more valuable than money, well…you will know it in next chapter.
Thank you for your comments every week, Bibi, I can always ease my mind that you will soon post after the new chapter. Appreciate so much for your support, hope to see you next week.
CJ
Bette is frustrating me with the way she is behaving, wanting to know Tina’s plans. All the hurtful words she said to Tina and distrusting Tina are distracting Tina from her mission. It is Tina who used to the mob boss, not Bette. Please help Bette not be a hindrance, they need to be strong and united to take down Faith and Aaron.
Jordan Springs
I rather think Bette is panicked, she’s acting the normal way that mainly all of us would react. Think about your best friend being arrested, we would be very nervous about it. Even though, do have faith in Tina. She’s very smart and strong, she will definitely find a way to deal with this situation.
Thank you for the comments, hope to see you next week.
CJ
Hi CJ
Sorry for becoming a silent reader for the past few months, but i could assure you that i still reading every chapter you’ve posted here.
Keep your good job. It’s really fun reading your story. And cant wait for a new one every week :)
Silentreader:
It’s a pleasure to see you here. Hope to see you more often though I just trying to make a reply so far. It’s been a long way and thanks for you guys to help me keep going. I will continue the story no matter what. Thanks for liking the story.
CJ
Continue to enjoy this story. Makes me think
kenji
Thank you for liking this story, I’m assuring that more complicated scene will be in the next chapters.
CJ