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The Most Distant Course
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“Let’s go!”
But the mask woman’s attention is still on the captain.
“Let me give this bitch and her freaking mother a lesson.” This time, it is the muzzle that is pointing at Candace.
“No! Remember who you promised! Don’t make it personal!”
For one second, Candace swears she can see the murderous look in the woman’s eyes, yes, if it were not for the man, this woman will definitely kill her, and for sure that she’s not afraid to do so.
The masked woman makes a loud humph, with a clink, the captain closes tight her eyes, waiting for her death…Unexpectedly, the masked woman puts away her gun and leaves without saying anything.
A few moments later, seeing the rebels are all away, Candace holds back the huge pain and tries to stand up, she walks to the old woman, who is slowly waking from the hard knock on the head.
“Mother, mother…”
The captain carefully shakes the elder woman awake, the senator stirs a bit, then she slowly opens her eyes, sharp pain behind her head makes her wince painfully.
“Shane…Where is Shane McCutcheon?” Faye Buckley asks weakly.
“They’ve taken her, they’ve taken her, mother…”
Candace wants to cry because of the pain, those masked people didn’t show any mercy on them, every punch and kick were right onto the spot.
“Don’t worry, I’ll coordinate the chase…I’ll go find them”
The captain clenches her jaws to holds back the pain, trying to stand up, she is ready to go and catch on those people, but she’s being yanked back by her mother.
“How do you chase them when Bette Porter’s people are all out on the streets?” Faye Buckley says with greeting teeth.
“Then we can’t do nothing while Shane McCutcheon is rescued by them?”
Faye Buckley punches the floor with her fist, furious.
“We truly did not foresee that they will really succeed,” The senator takes a deep breath, her voice is unbelievably cold. “Regardlessly what’s the reality is now, Bette Porter has taken action so this is not the end…Yet the beginning!”
California, LA. Dana’s place.
Tasha runs into the house, excitingly.
“Tina! Tina!”
Bette is the first to jump up from the couch, all of the gangs except Tina stand up, Alice especially, running to the woman first and gives her a huge hug, the officer also, giving a huge embrace to her girlfriend.
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Wow….So sweet! Get a doctor Bette!!! Why is it so hard for Bette to see that she fucked up? Is she so self absorbed that she cannot see how wrong she was and how sick Tina is? I love that Tina is so forgiving and that they truly want to be with each other. So now get her covered up and then go get one of the others, possibly Tasha, to get a Tina a doctor. Then stay by Tina’s side until she gets better. Surely there is something that can be done to relieve the fever and other symptoms. To complete this mission, they need a healthy Tina.
Wonderful maneuvers by the rescue squad…..I may have bonked Candace on the head as well before leaving.
Great story…..
Martha3128:
I’m flattered, thank you for the comments. There will be more chapters coming up and I’m looking forward for them.
Tina is surely smart, but weak, while Bette is somehow an idiot but strong enough to protect her, they are like two different people but suitable for each other. Tina cannot saved Shane without Bette’s team and Bette cannot beat Faye on her own. Some might think I treat Bette too harsh, but i believe without the comparison, the story will not be interesting.
Thanks again for your comments, hope to see you next time.
CJ
Hi CJ,
It is always such a pleasure to read this story!
Love how they won the first round and saved Shane!
And so good that the gang let Bette see sense and apologize to Tina and they are going to marry, yes!!!
Now let Bette use her fine brains and not doing something stupid like going after that bitch alone. She thinks to much with her emotions.
Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Bibi28:
It’s really not an easy chapter to read, I was so afraid that some of the readers would be bored by it or even think it’s to complicated. So glad that you think it’s good.
Tina and Bette engaged was the biggest dream among all the Tibette, people might want to see their wedding in the new show but since the trailer coming out it’s disappointed us. I was hoping I can make this possible.
Anyway, thanks for your comments, Bibi, always.
CJ
Hi CJ:
Wonderful chapter, finally Shane is free, No doubt, Tina was very smart.
The rescue team did what it was the best, escaping from the trap and going to the right place.
Bette is correct on being ashamed of her behavior with Tina, really Bette, don’t say ‘i didn’t mean it, it wasn’t me’ if it wasn’t you, who the hell was, damn, Bette.
The question now is how they are going to explain that Shane was rescued from a place she wasn’t supposed to be, how Candace and Buckley will explain that Shane was somewhere else, not even Aaron knew.
Great chapter, my friend, please post soon the new one.
P
proteomics:
Well, Bette was a smart idiot I have to say, she’s been spoiled since her childhood and it’s not easy to change of the personality we’ve built when we’re young. I don’t blame Bette, but I will hate her if the new show comes out if she betrayed Tina.
The next chapter will be even more complicated, just like you’ve said, how should they explain Shane’s rescued by others? Do have faith in her, Bette might be an asshole sometimes but she’s also smart, beside, she has Tina by her side.
Thank you for your support, my friend, I will be looking forward for your new chapter.
CJ
What a chapter! I am so relieved that Shane and Tina’s people didn’t get blown up or captured. Faye Buckley and Aaron is still plotting against them and I really like to see Bette use her brains and training to work with Tina to come up with a foolproof plan to get Faye and Aaron put in jail forever.
Wonderful to see Bette and Tina are engaged. I hope Tina gets well and they get some couple time.
Jordan Springs:
Tina is indeed very smart and always come up with a best plan for her team, I’m glad that you like this chapter, it might not be easy for most people to read cause rely a lot of thinking. And you’re right, the next chapter is for Bette, about how she deal with the senator, I’m afraid Tina and she won’t have lots of time of their own.
Thanks for the comments and for liking this story, hope to see you next time.
CJ
Great Chapter!
I could shake Bette!
Please get a Doctor to Tina, I cannot bear it if she dies!
Thanks for posting, please post again soon.
SG
SassyGran:
It’s been a long time to see you! Thank you so much for the comment. And don’t worry a tiny bit I will never let Tina die.
There were lots of things happened in the recent chapter, and surely more to come out, hope to see you next time, thanks again!
CJ
I have had some health issues to deal with but hope they are dealt with.
My main problem was my moving home and being without Internet Access for a few weeks! Didn’t realise how much I would miss it!
SG