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    The Most Distant Course

     

    Chapter 40 Engage

     

    California, LA. Dana’s place.

    “She will be alright.” 

    The doctor takes off her stethoscope, taking a look at the blonde who’s now sleeping, she writes something down on her notes. 

    “I will write a prescription to her, with a few days of rest, she will soon feel better.”

    “Dr. Wilson, what happened to her?” Bette asks worryingly.

    “Crushing down, she’s too tired and carried too much stress, due to the unexpected low temperature in the winter  this year, her body cannot tolerate the cold.” Dr. Wilson takes off her glasses. “I suggest, no more work and no outdoor event, she needs to rest. I’ve seen dozens of people whose bodies were weak in her age, but not this, I assume she did drug before, didn’t she?”

    Bette Porter is standing next to the bed where Tina is lying on, holding her lover’s hand, she doesn’t know how to answer her question.

    Doctor Wilson smiles. 

    “It’s fine, dear, I knew the answer already. Don’t worry, to keep the patient’s secret is the professional ethics of being a doctor, I won’t say a thing.” 

    Bette lets out a relieved sigh. “Thank you, doc.”

    “Not a problem,” Dr. Wilson starts to pack up her tools. “She’s a good girl, but also very vulnerable, protect her, Bette.”

    “I’m sure I will, doc.”

    “She will need healthy food, she’s too thin, need to eat more nutritive food, especially fruit and vegetables. I will come and check on her next week, during these times, if there is anything wrong, don’t hesitate to call me.”

     

    Walking Dr. Wilson out of the house, Dana walks beside Bette.

    “How’s she doing?” The athlete asks.

    “Still hanging there…” Bette replies in a weird sound as if there’s a lump in her throat. 

    Hearing this, Dana pats on Bette’s back. “She will be alright, Dr. Wilson is very good.”

    “Yes, I can see it.” The detective makes a weak smile. 

    “But…?”

    “It’s just…” Bette sniffs. “She’s always hanging there, how couldn’t I see it?”

    “You are worried about your friend, Bette, you are an ordinary human, you can only do one thing at a time, and Shane did need you.”

    “I just hope that I can do better, Dane, I was never a good daughter, a good friend or a good spy, and now, I couldn’t even take care of the only woman I love.”

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    Comments

    1. Martha3128 says

      I hope Tina has a good plan. Even with the meds, she will not be able to withstand the interrogation that Shane received. And if she does survive, its another period of separation for Bette and Tina. There has to be a way to put these characters away and allow Bette and Tina to live their lives free from being apprehended by the law.

      Great story….love it..

    2. Bibi28 says

      Hi CJ,

      How can you leave it here 😮.

      This story is so addictive, I can’t wait until the next chapter !!!.

      Bette was so cool and calm during the conversation, but made another (conscious) mistake when they started talking about Tina.

      Speaking of Tina, she is taking a conscious risk and I would really like to read her mind. She has thought about this very deeply and I assume that she knows exactly what she is doing.
      So far, things have been going well as she had thought, but this situation in the hands of Aaron and Faye is worrying.

      I trust your CJ that this will end well !!!!

      A very good chapter !!!

      • Crystal J.H says

        Bibi28:

        I’m not sure it was Bette’s mistake cause Faye Buckley was really evil and sly, even Bette didn’t get rid of them the Senator would still want Tina to be arrested, which I was pretty sure about that.

        As for Tina, she knew clearly what she want and what she need to do next. She might have prepare very well while knowing the circumtances of her health, She’s damn smart that could turned the bad condition even if they’re almost losing, I’m sure FAye Buckley cannot do anything about her.

        There are not so many chapters left, thank you for the comments. Hoping that I can see more reviews next week! You are such a great supporter!

        CJ

    3. proteonomics says

      Hi CJ:

      Excellent chapter, now we know how Shane was rescued.

      Bette was very smart and brave to face the three evil persons alone, but she must be calm for the next part of the plan.

      I think Governor Phyllis is starting to doubt Buckley, Aaron, and Phillips since they fail to prove Bette’s involvement in the rescue of Shane.

      I’m glad the gang and especially Kit are supporting Tina and taking care of Noah; perhaps the kid will miss her mom for a little while.

      Hard to let Tina goes to face her worse enemies, but she is calm, of course, she is sick.

      Let’s read in the next chapters the duel, the fight between Tina and Buckley. I hope you’ll make a very good deal of that, here.

      If Bette doesn’t get calm, she could expose Tina; can someone of her gang put her in a temporary hibernation?

      Thanks, great story CJ. please post soon.

      P

      • Crystal J.H says

        proteonomics:

        Sorry to hear that you are very busy, I hope I can read your next chapter very soon.

        There’re going to different situation between the further chapters, anything will happen and I believe some of the readers will think it’s almost impossible to take down Faye Buckley due to Tina’s heath and her condition. Thanks god that Bette finally show she’s also smart enough to deal with these three,

        The next chapter will be even more complicated and even more intense, Maybe Tina will be arrest, but who knows? No one can really know what she’s thinking about.

        Thank you for your comment, my friend.

        CJ

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