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The Most Distant Course
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“Dana?”
“Yeah?”
“May I use your guest room? I would need to lie down a bit.”
“Of course,” Dana nods. “Come with me, I’ll show you the room.”
The detective follows Tina’s image until she disappears in the hallway, how she wants to follow her girlfriend, but her pride somehow resist herself to do so.
“What are you doing, Bette Porter?”
Turning around, Bette finds her sister, Kit Porter standing behind her, her hands on her hip, clearly not happy at what she’s seen.
“I ain’t doing anything.”
“Ain’t doing anything my ass, I…no, we all saw the way you treated Tina, what are you thinking? Huh? Are you sure she is still your girlfriend?”
“What…Of course, she’s my girlfriend! What are you talking about?” Bette doesn’t get it.
“She meant that you were a complete asshole,” Lara rolls her eyes. “You might be smart enough to be a detective, but you don’t even notice how sick and weak Tina is.”
“I tried to talk to her,” Bette protests, raising her hands in the air as surrendering gesture. “I went to her house but have been kicked out, she doesn’t even want me to get close to her, I want to talk to her, and she shut me out.”
Lara snorts, folding her arms in front of her chest.
“Did you go for an apology?”
“Well…”
“I bet that’s a ‘No’, right? Great detective?”
“Hey, she should carry half of the responsibility, I was not the only one who has been a pain in the ass, she’s the one first saying that she’s not going to save Shane.”
“And yet she did it,” Alice says quietly. “She successfully saved Shane using the plan that none of us could think of, thanks to her, none of our people got caught, Shane is safe, as long as we kick that Faye Buckley’s ass then everything is over. All of these, because of Tina, are you gonna keep saying that she’s the one who didn’t want to save her.”
“I…”
“Stop trying to be the hero, Bette, Tina has her point, not telling you that she was going to rescue Shane was because she knew you would not be happy knowing that she’s gonna use the illegal path, there was no way we could take Shane out if we use the legal way. Tina thought on everything, Bette, the same night when you got the call from Aaron Kornbluth and left for the police department, did you think Tina really could sleep without doing anything?”
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Wow….So sweet! Get a doctor Bette!!! Why is it so hard for Bette to see that she fucked up? Is she so self absorbed that she cannot see how wrong she was and how sick Tina is? I love that Tina is so forgiving and that they truly want to be with each other. So now get her covered up and then go get one of the others, possibly Tasha, to get a Tina a doctor. Then stay by Tina’s side until she gets better. Surely there is something that can be done to relieve the fever and other symptoms. To complete this mission, they need a healthy Tina.
Wonderful maneuvers by the rescue squad…..I may have bonked Candace on the head as well before leaving.
Great story…..
Martha3128:
I’m flattered, thank you for the comments. There will be more chapters coming up and I’m looking forward for them.
Tina is surely smart, but weak, while Bette is somehow an idiot but strong enough to protect her, they are like two different people but suitable for each other. Tina cannot saved Shane without Bette’s team and Bette cannot beat Faye on her own. Some might think I treat Bette too harsh, but i believe without the comparison, the story will not be interesting.
Thanks again for your comments, hope to see you next time.
CJ
Hi CJ,
It is always such a pleasure to read this story!
Love how they won the first round and saved Shane!
And so good that the gang let Bette see sense and apologize to Tina and they are going to marry, yes!!!
Now let Bette use her fine brains and not doing something stupid like going after that bitch alone. She thinks to much with her emotions.
Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Bibi28:
It’s really not an easy chapter to read, I was so afraid that some of the readers would be bored by it or even think it’s to complicated. So glad that you think it’s good.
Tina and Bette engaged was the biggest dream among all the Tibette, people might want to see their wedding in the new show but since the trailer coming out it’s disappointed us. I was hoping I can make this possible.
Anyway, thanks for your comments, Bibi, always.
CJ
Hi CJ:
Wonderful chapter, finally Shane is free, No doubt, Tina was very smart.
The rescue team did what it was the best, escaping from the trap and going to the right place.
Bette is correct on being ashamed of her behavior with Tina, really Bette, don’t say ‘i didn’t mean it, it wasn’t me’ if it wasn’t you, who the hell was, damn, Bette.
The question now is how they are going to explain that Shane was rescued from a place she wasn’t supposed to be, how Candace and Buckley will explain that Shane was somewhere else, not even Aaron knew.
Great chapter, my friend, please post soon the new one.
P
proteomics:
Well, Bette was a smart idiot I have to say, she’s been spoiled since her childhood and it’s not easy to change of the personality we’ve built when we’re young. I don’t blame Bette, but I will hate her if the new show comes out if she betrayed Tina.
The next chapter will be even more complicated, just like you’ve said, how should they explain Shane’s rescued by others? Do have faith in her, Bette might be an asshole sometimes but she’s also smart, beside, she has Tina by her side.
Thank you for your support, my friend, I will be looking forward for your new chapter.
CJ
What a chapter! I am so relieved that Shane and Tina’s people didn’t get blown up or captured. Faye Buckley and Aaron is still plotting against them and I really like to see Bette use her brains and training to work with Tina to come up with a foolproof plan to get Faye and Aaron put in jail forever.
Wonderful to see Bette and Tina are engaged. I hope Tina gets well and they get some couple time.
Jordan Springs:
Tina is indeed very smart and always come up with a best plan for her team, I’m glad that you like this chapter, it might not be easy for most people to read cause rely a lot of thinking. And you’re right, the next chapter is for Bette, about how she deal with the senator, I’m afraid Tina and she won’t have lots of time of their own.
Thanks for the comments and for liking this story, hope to see you next time.
CJ
Great Chapter!
I could shake Bette!
Please get a Doctor to Tina, I cannot bear it if she dies!
Thanks for posting, please post again soon.
SG
SassyGran:
It’s been a long time to see you! Thank you so much for the comment. And don’t worry a tiny bit I will never let Tina die.
There were lots of things happened in the recent chapter, and surely more to come out, hope to see you next time, thanks again!
CJ
I have had some health issues to deal with but hope they are dealt with.
My main problem was my moving home and being without Internet Access for a few weeks! Didn’t realise how much I would miss it!
SG