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    The Most Distant Course (Final)

    Story written on December 13, 2019 by Crystal J.H.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=98134
    Author Notes:

    “Yes,” The tomboy smiled. “It was no doubt they were both very much in love with each other, but maybe…just maybe, they had done some really bad things once or against others, which made them feel so small…” The blonde passed the notebook back to the brunette, Bette looked down on the four words the

    “Yes,” The tomboy smiled. “It was no doubt they were both very much in love with each other, but maybe…just maybe, they had done some really bad things once or against others, which made them feel so small…”

    The blonde passed the notebook back to the brunette, Bette looked down on the four words the blonde just crossed the bottom line on.

    “But in fact…they were perfect for each other, whatever the fate was, whatever stupid thing they’ve done…they were meant to be together.”

    The brunette gulped, and chuckled, caressed through the handwriting her brilliant classmate just left…

    This was exactly the words that she’s searching for.  

    She looked up, met her eyes with the most beautiful hazel orbs.

    The two girls smiled at each other, as if the tension suddenly is frozen in the air, their face blushed when they realized something very special happened between them.

    Called it fate, but what’s going to happen to them was indescribable.

    No matter anything bad was going to happen, they would get together, eventually.

    No need an extra word, and no need more hint, two girls’ hands slowly decreased the distant, and shyly, holding onto each other.

    At first, it was just a small touch, and then, their fingers interlocked.

    One day, they would know their feelings for each other.

     

    That day, you sat next to me

           with a cheerful face

           with a beautiful hazel eyes

    I looked at you

            feeling both happily and surprisingly

    And I don’t know how many times we have met

    Both of us spoke

            I gave out the secret in my mind

            and you gave me yours no matter if it was true or not

    It was the year that

            you said yes to my proposal

    It was the year that

            you asked me why I always smiled at you

            it was because I’ve never met someone 

           Who I cannot live without 

    and it was also the year that

            I couldn’t forget the days we have been through

            the great experience I have ever had 

    You were a dolphin

            kind, natural, friendly, beautiful, but still a mystery

    I was a seagull

            standing aside, quietly looking everyone in the eye

    And that’s what it was all about

    And we were always there to do 

     

    So on the side of the water 

            I started a poem

    And I called it THE MOST DISTANT COURSE

    Because that’s what it was really all about

    Because it was my very best way

            to keep all the things deeply in my mind

    I don’t know how much I love you

    So I give it to you 

    To the one who really owns this story 

    To the one who is full of mystery

    To the only one

            who I didn’t mean beautiful on the outside…

            I meant beautiful in all ways 

     

     

    THE END

     

    Taylor Swift – Lover (First Dance Remix)

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    Comments

    1. Author note:
      It’s been for more a year since this story came out, thank you for all of your support, feedback, and comments, it’s truly been a long while. I wasn’t expecting I could continue for this long, there had been ups and downs, especially for my lack of experience of writing and the poor language did annoy some readers, but still, all your replies and messages gave me hope and courage to continue.
      And now the new show is starting, though Laurel wasn’t in it I believe she will want us to support the new show, even though it cannot compare with the original.
      Special thanks to Bibi28, SassyGran, and especially proteonomics, who gave a lot of advice for the story and the grammar checking, thank you for the special contribution for this story.
      Last but not least, I will try to keep writing another new story, but there’s a bunch of ideas I want to write but the time is the issue, if you still want to read my story, please don’t hesitate to tell me, I would really like to know what genre you would like to read.
      Again, thank you so much.
      Love Laurel.

      CJ

      • Hello CJ. You took us on an amazing journey with this story. It’s one of the most creative and intriguing plots I’ve ever read. Thoroughly enjoyed it, and hope you will entertain us with another story soon. Any genre you choose is fine as long as it’s Tibette. It’s funny because I don’t usually read teenage Tibette stories and that is what I expected this one to be, so I almost missed it. Glad I decided to give it a try. Thank you for sharing your talent. The finale was perfect. I like that you incorporated some of the new show making Bette the Major. I agree even though Laurel is doing her art and hasn’t returned to acting she would want us to support the next generation and iteration of the L Word. Take care. Happy Holidays, and come back soon.

    2. Hi CJ:

      A wonderful ending of this beautiful story, Bette and Tina together, giving us hopes that a lesbian relationship can thrive no matter how bad the dark and negative forces around want to smash their bond because if you have love in your life you have the strength to face the world and make the difference.

      Very touching the remembrance of their youth when they were in high school, well I stop this or I’ll get emotional.

      Yes, it’s hard to end a story, especially the ones where there are adventures, hard and sweet moments, drama and romance, it feels like you are leaving part of you, and this is something that readers hardly can totally understand; as a writer, I’d say that it’s like you are saying goodbye to something very close to you, something that is part of you, and even if all those stories have different meaning for each writer, on each of that, we put a significant part of us in them.

      I hope you start posting your new story soon, I’ll be following you, my friend.

      Thank you very much for this.

      P

    3. Hi CJ,

      What a beautiful end to this story!

      I loved that you refered to the show that is on tv now and other lines you used from the original The L Word.

      It was quite a journey you took us readers and our favourite couple Tibette.

      But at the end they are finally the family they wanted to be.

      So glad that Shane is alive and back in Tina’s life after so many years apart.

      The songs you used and the poem, just amazing and so fitting!

      I really hope you will find the time to write another story, the one we already talked about in private!

      Thank you for sharing this story with us!!!

      Xxxx ????

    4. A very beautiful ending for a very beautiful story. I have been enjoying this story from the very beginning. Thank you for sharing this story with all of us. I will definitely follow your other stories. Keep on writing Crystal.

    6. I enjoyed this story and appreciate the beautiful ending. I have read many stories and I find that large numbers are simply incomplete. People either do not have desire to complete their, or they run into a brick wall with their story line or life just gets in way. In the words of most everyone I know – it happens. Thank you for taking the time to write and complete this story. I hope you will continue to write and make contributions to this website. I want to keep Bette and Tina alive as long as we can. I look forward to whatever you publish in the future. My best wishes for your future.

    7. Thank you so much for this amazing story.
      There were times at the beginning that were difficult for me to read
      as I am very much against people doing drugs, So I would skim over
      some pages but I am glad I was able to stick with your story.

      I am looking forward to reading your next story. hopefully it will be filled
      with love, fun and adventure.

    8. Thanks CJ for this amazing story. I enjoyed every twist and turn of the the plot and read with great satisfaction when the pieces fell into place. Your ending was a perfect one for our beloved Tibette. It is how it should be, Bette as the mayor, Tina by her side as her wife, raising their children together.

      I look forward to reading your next story. I love Tibette stories and you write them so well.

    9. Hi CJ!
      Congratulations on finishing your story and thank you again for sharing it with us. I agree your writing is at times a bit unorthodox but you do write beautifully. You are an amazing writer and storyteller. Thank you for bringing this story to a close and happy ending for our favorite couple. I’m planning on reading this story again, because I enjoyed it so thoroughly. It’s just such a beautiful love story…. they lost each other several times but finally got together at the end. Loved the poem to end it. Thank you so much and please keep writing! I look forward to seeing a new story from you.

    10. Thank you for finishing this story and for the way you finished it.

      I look forward to a new Story and will look forward to reading it so long as it features TiBette!

      SG

    11. Hi CJ,
      .
      I am a silent reader, had been following this story when you first post a year ago. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story. I love reading this story. You are really amazing in your writing. Feel happy that it’s a good ending for our favourite couple. I hope you will come back soon for another great story.
      Merry Christmas and have a great festive season!

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