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The Most Distant Course
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Bette sighs, she doesn’t want to cause any trouble on the first day of the school, but her friends seem couldn’t cool down for more than ten minutes. She holds the coffee cup in front of her lips, but before she touches it, something on the coffee cup lid catches her attention. She frowns, takes a look at Adele and Kelly who are drinking it and then back at the now crying girl.
“Al, wait,” Bette whispers to Alice, who just opens the lid. “Don’t drink it.”
“What? Why?” Alice immediately puts down her cup, afraid to touch it.
“This girl maybe did something to our coffee…hey, don’t look at her, just pretend you don’t know that.” Bette says quietly, making sure the other two girls don’t hear her.
“What did she do? How did you know?” Alice replies.
“Look under the lid,” Bette says as Alice follows her instructions. “See the stains? The normal new coffee won’t have those stains on the cup, instead of someone opens the cup lid after, the foam will be squeezed out when someone tries to put back the lid back.”
“So?” Alice frowns with confusing, Bette rolls her eyes.
“So, Sam must put something inside after she got from the clerk,” Bette says as she pushes the coffee further away from her. “Saliva, maybe.”
“Jesus, Porter, you are fucking Sherlock Holmes, I’m gonna give that little punk a lesson…”
“Al, leave it,” Bette says as she gives Alice a stern look. “That girl has had enough this morning.”
“Tsk, fine.”
With a gentle knock, History teacher Mr. Haspel walks in, following behind is Headmistress Peggy Peabody and a new student they never have seen before.
“Hey, hey, it’s the new blood!” Alice says to three others. “Dear lord, what is he wearing?”
“My, my…hey Porter, aren’t you excited?” Adele asks
“Yeah, yeah, looks like you got our new target,” Porter says weakly. “We are so going to have fun.”
“You don’t say” Adele replies.
The new student keeps her head low, Bette frown with the messy short blonde hair. ‘At least her facial features are clean’ she thought.
The wearing definitely let the four of them grumble in disgust, the ugly vest, and oversize worker’s clothing makes the students’ white skin even paler, there are even some splotches on it. “The Golden Circle” frown at the dirty hands which are now holding a pile of books. Everything on the student is old and dirty, but something, something that makes Bette cannot takes her eyes off this new student. She observes her uncontrollably.
“Oh my god, this boy is hideous…” Kelly shakes her head.
“Morning everyone, before the class starts, Principle Peabody want to introduce a new student to you.” Mr. Haspel says to everyone.
“Everyone, this is our new student, she just moves in this town with her mother and she will be in this school with us from now on, please be nice to her.” Principle Peabody says.
“Wait, her? She is a girl?” Alice first yells out.
“I think this girl misunderstood his gender” Adele shout out, high five with Kelly and Alice, everyone in the classroom starts to laugh, Bette shakes her head with disbelieve, the new student fearfully swallow.
“Silence, Miss. Channing and Miss Pieszecki, please come to my office after the class dismissed.”
Adele shrugs her shoulder, giving a contempt expression, now her mind is full of wicked ideas. They are going to have so much fun with this tomboy.
Principle Peabody shakes her head, she gently touches the blonde’s back.
“Sweetheart, you want to introduce yourself?”
The blonde shyly nods, slowly looks up. Except for the beautiful appearance, the one thing, the only thing that makes Bette unconsciously fascinated by her, is the hazel eyes, full of sadness and insecure. Her eyes meet with Bette’s, then she opens her mouth, saying a name that will always hunt Bette in the future.
“My name is Christina Kennard, I prefer to be called as Tina.”
-CJ-
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Hi! Always great to see new author on the site!
Story seems very interesting, so please continue. And don’t worry about grammar all good.
But i must say – rating of this part not NC-17, most like PG-13
Waiting for the next!
Thank you so much, Zhenya. This story will take a while to be real NC-17, the crime scene for later chapter is the real criminal cases I’ve experienced, so I rated it just in case it’s too violent. I’ll try my very best!
Hi CJ:
Welcome!!! I like very much this story, for me is in the line of “my favorite ones”. It looks very interesting, I really like it, the start is very promising.
You put in my mind the image of “Randy” arriving at school in “The Incredibly True Adventure of Two Girls in Love”, a movie that I love, and with Bette in there; though I know your story is different and original.
Thank you so much for this promising story, I’ll be eagerly waiting for the update.
P
Wow, proteonomics! my favorite writer! I have to say I love your works “Side Effects”, can’t wait for your next chapter.
Indeed, The Wallace High is the origin high school name in “The Incredibly True Adventure of Two Girls in Love”, But compared to the movie, Tina is not the optimistic girl in this story and will suffer a lot.
Thank you for your approval, I will try very hard to pursue a story like your great writing.
Great start!!! Looking for the next chapters!!!
Welcome! Thanks for the story!
I love stories about young Bette and Tina, so you should definitely continue.
So for now we have Adele and Saw from unusual character, but i hope we’ll not see Jodie – hate this character. Or you always make her evil:)
And of course i hope you will try to finish this story – because so many great stories left unfinished – it’s pity
Welcome Crystal!!!,
It is always a pleasure to see a new author!
The first chapter is a very good start, dislike Kelly and Adele immediateley from your introduction, but no surprise, never liked them.
I am looking forward to read your story!
Hello, almost nobody writes new stories or continues with their stories, I hope your story comes to an end or is a long and passionate story …. great work.
Hi, thanks for the chapter!
Always welcome new interesting stories – so waiting for the next!
Welcome. Great start! Hope you can complete this story, so many don’t for some reason, guess life just gets in the way. Thanks for posting, looking forward to more.
It’s an interesting start for a new chapter.. :-)
Bette seems so perfect in your story..so exquisite…while Tina seems like she is no body ..
can’t wait to see how the flawless Bette could fall in love with Tina in your story.
Keep up your good work Chrystal
Thanks for the story. Love the start
Welcome to Lesfan!
And you must continue this story
All Stars
Hi Crystal,
Just decided to review all the previous chapters again to make sure I didn’t miss anything.
I can literally feel your passion for this story.
Let me be a new fan here~~